my new card

[MPearce24]

hi all just wanted to share my new card and was wondering what you all think about it

[Trebuchet MS]

Allow me to reprint my post in your previous topic.

 

Lore correction:

harpie's brother "Sky Scout" + "Magical Marionette"

When this monster card attacks: It gains add 500 ATK attack points to its attack.

They renamed Harpie's Brother because he could never interact with the Harpie's support in the first place. Harpie's Brother is now Sky Scout.

 

As for the card itself, it's mediocre, being nothing but a snowballing beatstick with no self-protection to justify the use of 2 specific, outdated material. The game has evolved way past the point where ATK was everything.

 

Learn to use capital letters as well. Other than that, kinda okay for a first.

[razzy]

You should also note if the attack gain is permanent or goes away after that attack.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I'll repost my comment from the other thread (you only needed to post this once)

 

You're using two random Fusion Materials to summon this card. While 2500/1200 stats are okay, its effect is not all that great, since it simply powers up when it attacks and has zero protection from removal.

 

Please keep in mind card removal is very common with stuff like Black Rose, Torrential, Mirror Force, Exciton, 101, etc, so w/out any form of protection, don't expect this to survive for much time.

 

In actuality, the current game is beyond that of simple stat boosting; effect removal is a thing now.

 

As josh mentioned though, you need to specify if the boost is permanent or it goes away at the End Phase. I would assume it looks like a permanent boost. I'd advise reading Aix's guide in this section.

[dragor1273]

Here's a thought for your Fusion monster Maybe change its name to    Sky Scout Master M  

                                               

How about this for its effects   This monster cannot be destroyed by monsters with removal effects. When this card attacks it permanently gains 500 ATK .

                                                 Each time a Dark or Wind attribute is played place 1 Sky Counter on this card. You can remove 2 Sky Counters to destroy

                                                 1 Spell or Trap card on the field