CMDR Vlad Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 This card is unaffected by Trap Card effects. This card cannot be normal summoned of set, this card cannot be Special except if you tribute summon 3 monsters as tribute. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your Hand) by Tributing 1 Korda the Forsaken Bladesman". This card gains half the ATK and DEF of the monster Tributed to Summon this card. Cannot be Special summoned other ways. This card is unaffected by Trap Card effects. Tyr assigned to be the beast master of the God to keep the fierce Beast Fenris aka Fenrir and now Tyr wants Judgement for the loss of his hand that Fenris took. All Dragon-Type monsters you control are unaffected by card effects, except "Vlad the Fallen Commander". This card cannot be normal summoned or set. Can only special summoned by tributing 3 Dark monsters. Banish any monster destroyed by battle with this card. Once per turn if a monster is banished this way: You can pay 1000 Life Points, then activate 1 of these effects. Target 1 of your opponents banished monsters;Special Summon that target to your side of the field. Destroy all Trap Cards your opponent controls. All Warrior-Type monsters cannot be targeted by card effects. This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Warrior-Type monster on the field. You can Ritual Summon this card with "The Forsaken Blade". When this card destroys a monster by battle: It gains 800 ATK and DEF This card is used to Ritual summon "Korda the Forsaken Bladesmen". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field Level equals 8 or more. Nalza his skill in leading armies and mass destruction has always gone unmatched. His horse is a symbol of power and corruption Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 7, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 I hope you guys like them any questions or concerns just let be know. :) I hopefully will be adding more cards to my collection coming up with ideas is no easy matter for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jebus94b Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 You are soooo cool! Can I be like you when I grow up? You are soooo cool! Can I be like you when I grow up? You are soooo cool! Can I be like you when I grow up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 8, 2014 Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Welcome to the Realistic Cards section. First things first - no DIVINE or Divine-Beast monsters. Unless the RC rules change their minds on this. DIVINE and Divine-Beast support on non-DIVINE or non-Divine-Beast monsters, on the other hand, might be acceptable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Ok sorry I will change them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 8, 2014 Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Next, do post your card lores (card text) with your cards. I don't care if people can read the lores off the image, because posting lores with your cards will make it easier for us to copy-paste your lores into our posts if we want to quote your cards. For example, I will be conducting a review of your cards and fixing how your cards are worded. [spoiler Fenris the Unbound]This card Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must this card cannot be Special Summoned or set, unless you (from your hand) by Tributing 1 "Korda the Forsaken Bladesman" and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card gains half the ATK and DEF of the monster Tributed to Summon this card.[/spoiler] Unless you modify Korda's stats, Fenris will only be gaining a predetermined amount, always scaling to a 6100/5100 at minimum. That's very impressive for a Nomi that requires a Ritual Monster to Summon. However, without any means of self-protection your opponent will just yawn and kill it with an effect. [spoiler Korda the Forsaken Bladesman]You can Ritual Summon this card can only be Ritual summon by using the Ritual Spell Card with "The Forsaken Blade". Also must tribute monsters whose Level stars equals 10 or more. When this card destroys a monster by battle: It also gains 200 ATK and DEF for every monster it destroys.[/spoiler] [spoiler The Forsaken Blade]This card is used to Ritual summon "Korda The Forsaken Bladesman". You must also you must Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels Stars equals 10 or more.[/spoiler] I'm mildly confused over why you're meeting a Level total of 10 on a LV8 Ritual monster. Having a mundane stat-boost every time it scores a kill, along with a Ritual Spell that serves no other purpose after the Ritual Summon is complete, would give people very little reason to play it. [spoiler Ares, God of War]As long as this card is on the field All Warrior-Type monsters cannot be targeted by Trap/Spell, and monster card effects. For every Warrior type monster on the field This card gains 200 ATK and DEF for each Warrior-Type monster on the field.[/spoiler] Stop here for a bit - you have created a 2-Tribute monster with no Summon restriction that has 3800/3800 and some awesome effects. That's incredibly strong. For 2-Tribute monsters with no form of Summon restriction, Blue-Eyes White Dragon is usually the maximum standard - tacking on an effect will mandate that you reduce the card's stats. Granting immunity to targeting, even from your own effects, is also very potent. Don't forget Ares protects himself, forcing an opponent to expend a boardwipe or try to surmount his stupidly-high stats to rid the field of him. [spoiler Dragon Pulse]As long as you have a dragon type monster on the field you can Equip it only to a Dragon-Type monster you control on your side of the field. The equipped monster gains 800 ATK and DEF. If the equipped monster is destroyed: You owner takes 1000 life points of damage.[/spoiler] Heard of United We Stand? It's universal, provides a much stronger boost, and has no downsides. Outclasses this card by miles. [spoiler Elixir of Magical Protection]As long as this card remains on the field All Warrior-Type monsters you control on your side of the field are not effected unaffected by Spell, Trap, or Monster card effects, except "Elixir of Magical Protection". When this card is destroyed: You the owner takes 500 life points of damage.[/spoiler] I've tacked on "except 'Elixir of Magical Protection'" to prevent logic-bombing loops of the monsters being unaffected by this card. Still, blanket card effect immunity is very strong, and making it available with ease is very potent. 500 damage is nothing in comparison to blanket immunity. [spoiler Loki, Master of Tricks]Banish any monsters destroyed by battle with this card. are banished instead of being sent to the graveyard, When Once per turn, if a monster is banished this way: You can pay 1000 Life Points, then effect is used activate 1 of these effects. *Once per turn you can tribute 1000 life points and select Target 1 of your opponent's banished monsters; the Special Summon that target on to your side of the field. *Once per turn you can tribute 1000 life points and Destroy all Trap Cards on your opponent controls. side of the field[/spoiler] Once again, with no Summon restriction, this card meets BEWD's stat standards but has great effects to boot. Reduce the stats a little or make this card a little more difficult to Summon. Else the actual Loki would scorn at this impostor. [spoiler Vlad the Fallen Commander]As long as this monster is on your side of the field All Dragon-Type monsters on your side of the field you control are not effected unaffected by Trap/Spell or Monster card effects, except "Vlad the Fallen Commander".[/spoiler] Once again, tacked on an "except (this card)" clause to prevent logic-bombing loops that completely violate the game state. Blanket protection is, as said before, potent, but at least this card is exempt from said protection and it's on a 2-Tribute monster. To summarize: The game has progressed way past the point where ATK/DEF buffs were a major thing. I think you're trying to revert it to the time where they mattered, but tossing about blanket immunities is not a good way to achieve it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Ok thank you I will make the changes I appreciate the help and advice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Okay I have made updates on my cards. Hopefully they will suffice, if not then I will make even more changes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Ares' stats are still too high. [spoiler Fenris the Unbound]Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by Tributing 1 "Korda the Forsaken Bladesman". This card gains half the ATK and DEF of the monster Tributed to Summon this card. This card is unaffected by Trap Card effects.[/spoiler] Did you intend for Fenris to be a semi-Nomi (after you Summon it properly, it can be Special Summoned using other means)? The added Trap immunity and slightly loosened Summon restriction give a slightly better reason for people to run it now. [spoiler Loki, Master of Tricks]This card Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. Can only Must first be Special Summoned (from your hand) by Tributing 3 DARK monsters. Banish any monster destroyed by battle with this card. Once per turn, if a monster is banished this way: You can pay 1000 Life Points, then activate 1 of these effects. *Target 1 of your opponent's banished monsters; Special Summon that target to your side of the field. *Destroy all face-up Trap Cards your opponent controls.[/spoiler] [spoiler Ra, the Egyptian God of the Sun]This card is not effected by Trap/Spell, and Monster effects. This card Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. this card cannot Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by except if you Tributing summon 3 monsters as tribute and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card is unaffected by card effects.[/spoiler] Admittedly much more playable than the actual Winged Dragon of Ra. Blanket immunity isn't so bad when it's tacked on a single monster without other effects and a strict Summon restriction. [spoiler Anubis, Egyptian God of the Dead/Osiris the Broken One]This card is not effected by Trap/Spell, and Monster effects. This card Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. this card cannot Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by except if you Tributing summon 3 monsters as tribute and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. This card is unaffected by card effects.[/spoiler] There's a problem if you create multiple similar cards but one is outclassed by the others. It's a slightly bigger one if you simply create a different card with no different functionality from the first. Simply copy-pasting a card effect (and slapping on better stats) is lazy card design, with exceptions of "retraining" existing cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Keep in mind that the Rule of 5000 ATK/DEF apply here in RC [this means monsters cannot exceed the 5000 point threshold for original printed stats]. Do not bring up C1000 or Ci1000 as examples of breaking this rule; they are anime and solely plot devices. What does this mean for that first card of yours (God of the Dead)? He needs to have his stats lowered considerably to conform. 5600 ATK and DEF is a big no-no. Max ATK should be 4000 or something). Gadjiltron already said everything else that needed to be in regards to the other cards that are up right now. Agreeing with him on card 1 (and the other "effect gods"); copying/pasting an effect from existing stuff + buffing their stats shows poor creativity in cardmaking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 With all due respect, if the cards should have a max ATK and DEF 4000 then why is Five-Headed Dragon 5000 ATK and DEF just wondering I will still lower Anubis just wanted to clarify that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Keep in mind that the Rule of 5000 ATK/DEF apply here in RC [this means monsters cannot exceed the 5000 point threshold for original printed stats]. Do not bring up C1000 or Ci1000 as examples of breaking this rule; they are anime and solely plot devices. What does this mean for that first card of yours (God of the Dead)? He needs to have his stats lowered considerably to conform. 5600 ATK and DEF is a big no-no. Max ATK should be 4000 or something). Gadjiltron already said everything else that needed to be in regards to the other cards that are up right now. Agreeing with him on card 1 (and the other "effect gods"); copying/pasting an effect from existing stuff + buffing their stats shows poor creativity in cardmaking. There's no need to insult ones creativity. With all due respect, if the cards should have a max ATK and DEF 4000 then why is Five-Headed Dragon 5000 ATK and DEF just wondering I will still lower Anubis just wanted to clarify that. Vlad, this is the "Realistic Card" Section of the Custom Cards Forum so there's a higher standard of what can be posted. The "Any Other Cards" Section is where you want to post if you want (almost) complete freedom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMDR Vlad Posted May 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Okay I m sorry I will pay more attention to the categories. Again I am sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D.A._Sakuyamon Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Okay I m sorry I will pay more attention to the categories. Again I am sorry. It's quite alright, it happens to alot of new members so don't beat yourself up about it. :) Also, I recommend you read the guides, they really are helpful with making balanced cards, giving proper OCG layouts & terms, and all that other important stuff. Welcome to YCM by the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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