ems97 Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 This will be my last post of the for tomorrow completed unova legendary trio. Same effect like lugia but except with FIRE so nothing too special. Image was in blazegryph.deviantart.com 3 Level 6 monsters When this card is Summoned: You can target 1 FIRE monster in either player's Graveyard, then detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon that target. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 Incredibly vague card text. What happens to the FIRE monster you're targeting? I'll try my best to interpret... When this card is successfully Summoned: You can target 1 FIRE monster in either player's Graveyard, then detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon that to target 1 FIRE attribute monster from the graveyard to the field. A sort-of-free Monster Reborn with restricted targets? This can only end so well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted May 11, 2014 Report Share Posted May 11, 2014 I've said this a fair amount of times in your card threads: You need to learn how to write OCG properly, otherwise misunderstandings such as the above will happen. There is a guide to writing OCG properly in the Singles section of Realistic Cards; please consult that for your future creations. As it is, if we use Gadjiltron's interpretation of your card; it's a FIRE version of Monster Reborn. Keep in mind Hazy Flames will have no problem using it (since they're built for doing Rank 6s with ease). I'm going to guess this is supposed to be Regenerator or something translated into Yugioh terminology [and a probable reference to the phoenix's abilities of revival in mythology]. There's a reason why Monster Reborn has been limited/banned in recent times: No restriction on Special Summon [monster can attack, use whatever effects it has on it and Xyz/Synchro fodder, etc] It requires 3 Level 6 monsters, but in actuality, it only uses one so you waste the other two [unless you intend to Rank Up this card or something]. Like it was mentioned in your Groudon/Rayquaza thread, we're giving you CnC so you improve. Please be sure to take them into consideration and fix them accordingly, otherwise you will be seen as someone who doesn't fix their errors (and then very few people will bother looking at your creations). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Sleeping Lion Posted May 12, 2014 Report Share Posted May 12, 2014 Nice card!! ^_^ love the image! Yup the effect could use some work, but don't let your mind get all boggled up from the OCG nazis hahaha :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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