宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Last time, I got slightly, er, killed. Still, it's no biggie. It's only death, certainly not something I can't recover from. And unlike last time I got resurrected, I didn't have to make a deal with the devil! All that happened is that some guy in a suit told me he can revive me if I do promo work for "EA Games" or something like that, I wasn't really paying attention... Anyway, that's irrelevant. There's children's card games to talk about! [spoiler=Pretty much.] Rapture's Trumpeter LIGHT/Fiend ★★★★ When this card is Normal Summoned: Target 1 Monster Type (Pendulum, Fusion, Xyz, Synchro or Ritual); Neither players can Summon monsters of that type the End Phase of your next turn. When a Monster of that type is Summoned OR an Spell Card, Trap Card or Monster effect that Summons a Monster of that type is activated: You must Tribute this card; Negate the Summon/Activation and destroy that card. [/spoiler] *hands flyers for Mirror's Edge 2* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maeriberii Haan Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Toyo, please look once again at the wording of the no-summon effect, and plant a palm on your face. Good job on making a card that will only shoot yourself on the foot. Probably the best wording would be "until the end of your next turn's End Phase" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Oh.... Bugger. I shall fix it immediately, Ain-kun! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 "Until your next End Phase" might as well be "until the End Phase" because once you end your current turn, that's your "next End Phase". Perhaps you meant "until the End Phase of your next turn"? If so, this card is particularly disruptive mainly to Xyz-reliant Decks. If there's another monster type of interest already on the field, it's very likely your opponent has already conducted the plays they want to make, lessening this card's disruptive effects. I think there's certain combos that are viable to run with the End Phase delayed bounce, but often you'd prefer the monster to be bounced immediately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Pretty weird to see an anti-Xyz effect on an Xyz monster tbh. Also effect seems underwhelming. Given how weak it is ATK wise, you could easily get away with it's non-summoning clause being permanent. (Although being LIGHT Fiend, it won't stay weak for long). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 The hell is toran petta? Lol did I read that right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Complete rehaul of card because The Man in The Suit demanded it. He's kinda creeping me out, though... @Toot You read the katakana right. It says Trumpeter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bahamut - Envoy of the End Posted June 15, 2014 Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 That looks much better, if that helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 15, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2014 Glad to hear that. Actually, this was the first draft of the card before I changed it to Xyz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 16, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2014 Well, no comments. I'm quite happy with how this turned out tbh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Like, seriously. If there are no comments it means that my card is perfect beyond compare, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted June 17, 2014 Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Like, seriously. If there are no comments it means that my card is perfect beyond compare, right? Your cards are always perfect. <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Your cards are always perfect. <3 Whoa, Ka-chan was right, you're direct. E-erm... Thanks, I guess...(?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted June 17, 2014 Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Whoa, Ka-chan was right, you're direct. E-erm... Thanks, I guess...(?) Is there something wrong with being direct? Also, shouldn't it be Declare 1 Monster Type (Pendulum, Fusion, Xyz, Synchro or Ritual)? Basing that on Evigishki Tetrogre's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 No, of course not. Nothing wrong with that. But that's not really what I was aiming for. The current wording means the monster type you wanna block is already on the field, which is what I want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted June 17, 2014 Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 No, of course not. Nothing wrong with that. But that's not really what I was aiming for. The current wording means the monster type you wanna block is already on the field, which is what I want. Then shouldn't it include on the field somewhere? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted June 17, 2014 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Oh, yeah. OCG's not really my forte... I'll fix it soon, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted June 17, 2014 Report Share Posted June 17, 2014 Oh, yeah. OCG's not really my forte... I'll fix it soon, then. I think it should be When this card is Normal Summoned: You can target 1 monster on the field; Neither player can Special Summon monsters with the same type (Pendulum, Fusion, Xyz, Synchro, or Ritual) as that monster until the End Phase of your next turn. Or something. And stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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