This is my worst designed card, I can guarantee it [ANIME REMAKE - CIRCLE OF LIFE]

[Sander]

 

 

Circle of Life

Continuous Spell Card

Either player can discard 1 Spell Card to target up to 3 Set Spell/Trap cards that their opponent controls; if any those targets are activated while this cards is face-up on the field, the owner of that card must discard 1 card, if able, or send all other cards that they control targeted by this effect to the Graveyard. Either player can only activate the effect of "Circle of Life" once per turn, during their own turn.

 

And I need help with the wording to make it at least an optional discard, not a mandatory discard if the opponent wishes to keep his/her cards targeted by this effect, kind of like what Magic Drain allows the opponent to do.

[LeLukeX]

How is it poorly designed?

Looks perfect to me.

 

You gonna say that b/c you discarded just 1 Spell card you get 3 back in response making this card OP?

 

Great way to counter mass backrow.  Although MST susceptible. 

[Sander]

Bump.

[Sir Yamiegg]

I think changing "must" to "can" would be towards what you want to do; also I would remove the "if able" and capitalise the or (OR). And, as Leluke said, I don't think it's badly designed either.

[Marco Polo]

Yeah.. how's that your worst designed card exactly? (pretty much sounds like you're waiting for us to compliment you)

I looks alright, I'm not sure this would even see play, you'd rather invest in MSTs than this - since it's unprotected and waiting for your opponent activate one of his traps, doesn't even counter it - but the rest, and otherwise just discards a card.

super meh, I can't imagine someone investing so much energy into making his opp discard 1.