Just sum electric dude

[jellal17]

 

 

2 LV 4 monster's

When this card is xyz summoned target 1 card you're opponent controls and equip it to this card as an xyz material.While this card has 3 xyz material's attached to it it cannot be destroyed by card effect's.Once per turn you can detach 1 xyz material from this card to increase this cards attack and defense by 300.

[Darj]

OCG fix:

2 Level 4 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 card your opponent controls; attach it to this card as a face-up Xyz Material. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains 300 ATK and DEF. This card cannot be destroyed by card effects while it has 3 Xyz Materials.

 

The card is too strong, With its on-Summon effect it already outclasses S.H.Ark and the rest of the effects make it slightly better. Outclassing real cards is not a cool thing to do, so this needs a nerf. Basically, that first effect is the only apparent problem here. I suppose you could nerf it by attaching a card from either player's Graveyard instead, but doing so may leave the card a bit too weak, as it would turn into either a 2150 ATK wall or a 2450 vanilla beater that gets gradually stronger.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

2 Level 4 monsters

When this card is Xyz Summoned: Target 1 card your opponent controls; equip it to this card as an Xyz Material. While this card has 3 Xyz Materials, it cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; this card gains 300 ATK/DEF.

 

So basically you've made this card into a on-summon version of 101 by stealing a material + granting it immunity to Exciton and other destruction effects.

Uh yeah, no.

 

Consider that Rank 4 is one of the most spammable Ranks in the game right now; do you really wish to give them a generic R4 that acts like a superior 101 of sorts?

Yeah, the protection goes away if you decide to pump its stats; but still an instantaneous 101 effect upon summon is bad.

 

If you attached a card that YOU controlled to it instead of the opponent's, it might not as bad.

Granted though, this card has average ATK for a R4 [well, unless you want to consider 101/Exciton in the average tier for 2 mats]

 

 

EDIT: Ninja'd by Voltex in OCG (but more or less should be same)

[~ P O L A R I S ~]

I love the name and picture! 

 

Voltex' OCG is correct because "equipping as a Xyz Material" is attaching, and "ATK/DEF", while it is slightly quicker, isn't official (reference [url=http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Performapal_Turn_Toad]Performapal Turn Toad[/url]). Yours is definitely an improvement on the original's lore though, Sakura.

 

I also agree with Voltex regarding balance and think it would be fine if the target to be attached were in the Graveyard. It would be vulnerable to battle but fills a niche nicely as a means of countering decks more focused on control than beatdown. There are ways of protecting it from being attacked over (attack-reactive traps and boosting its ATK being notable examples) so it'd still have a good deal of potential but watch out if it gets bounced or taken control of.