xZyKoR Posted January 4, 2015 Report Share Posted January 4, 2015 I just finished my first self made yugioh card and I wanted to know what you think about it and if it is realistic? should I change the type in Fire? - I don't know :D 3 Level 4 monsters When any player's monster declares an attack: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate the attack. When this card is targeted for an attack, while it has no Xyz Materials: Destroy this card and all cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JessicaMuddy Posted January 4, 2015 Report Share Posted January 4, 2015 Okay... So the problem here is that this is an overpowered version of Utopia, and this card only needs one more Xyz Material to get out. You need to make that field nuke a bit less intense... somehow. Maybe destroying 1 or 2 cards on the field instead. Another this is that when I saw the name of this card, I thought about the monster Exploder Dragon, which is a Level 3. You could change this card to Rank 3 (Just for flavour purposes). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted January 4, 2015 Report Share Posted January 4, 2015 Actually, it's worse than Utopia because all it is, really, is Utopia. The 300 extra ATK is nice, but outclassed by Night Papilloperative if you're looking for a straight-up beatstick, while the field nuke effect has [acronym='Your opponent knows what will happen if they attack this, so they won't do so unless the nuke works in their favor.']Decoy Dragon Syndrome[/acronym]. Something you could change to enhance the card is to change the first effect to "During either player's turn (or During your opponent's turn): You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, then target 1 face-up monster on the field; this turn, it cannot attack." It's not much more potent than the original, but it now lets you stop attacks ahead of time. It still won't really be worth the effort of three materials since all it does is soften up the damage you would take the turn this goes down or protect something weaker from attacks (but in this case, removal effects are abundant enough). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xZyKoR Posted January 5, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 5, 2015 Okay thanks for the reply's. Yeah, and I have to admit that, the effect reallly is kinda like Utopia..but I just wanted to create my first draft so.. :D And @A Bad Character: I guess you're right and it is better when you try to change the way the effect has been written, so it doesn't sounds like a copy of another^^ Anyway I will post some more cards. -stay tuned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SirReal Posted January 7, 2015 Report Share Posted January 7, 2015 Honestly, this card is not really broken at all, the only thing that is a little overpowered is the amount of attack this guy has but even then that seems proper for a 3 material monster. The field nuke effect is completely reliant on your opponent and you would need to somehow rip all three materials off of this guy first. Considering the amount of attack he has, if he's the only monster on your board, your opponent is very unlikely to attack you. Besides, with that much attack, it's very likely that a 101/Castel would be coming your way before you can even rip one material off. Overall, balanced but hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argeus Posted January 8, 2015 Report Share Posted January 8, 2015 I almost read title as Self-Destruct Button Dragon. I kinda agree with JamesMuddy It is a overpowered version of utopia, Utopia uses two materials while this card uses 3, Maybe you can change it's effect a little like.. add this to it. "When this card is attacks or is attacked" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xZyKoR Posted January 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2015 Honestly, this card is not really broken at all, the only thing that is a little overpowered is the amount of attack this guy has but even then that seems proper for a 3 material monster. The field nuke effect is completely reliant on your opponent and you would need to somehow rip all three materials off of this guy first. Considering the amount of attack he has, if he's the only monster on your board, your opponent is very unlikely to attack you. Besides, with that much attack, it's very likely that a 101/Castel would be coming your way before you can even rip one material off. Overall, balanced but hilarious. Yeah, makes sense : p But like I said before, I first wanted to test the cardmaker but thanks for the reply. I almost read title as Self-Destruct Button Dragon. I kinda agree with JamesMuddy It is a overpowered version of utopia, Utopia uses two materials while this card uses 3, Maybe you can change it's effect a little like.. add this to it. "When this card is attacks or is attacked" Yes, the names are pretty similar, but they have nothing to do with each other. Yes, it's really like Utopia and you can easily realise that if you summon him, your opponent is not gonna attack until he has got somethig like Black Hole etc.... So I guess if you want to use the nuke effect you could negate your own attack-that's one possibility. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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