WATER El Shaddoll! [Original Card Art :P]

[Marco Polo]

Hi ;D
Obviously the water El Shaddoll is supposed to be the Necloth of Trishula, but I had something else in mind -

Egrystal - 7, Nephilim - 8, Tevilah - 9.
The special El Shaddolls, shadow daughters of Tierra - brought to do.. whatever the hell that was anyway, then destroy the world. ~alternate DT.

In Judaism, ritual washing, or ablution, takes two main forms. A tevilah (טְבִילָה) is a full body immersion in a mikveh
~wikipedia


1 “Shaddoll” monster + 1 WATER monster
Must first be Fusion Summoned. You can only use the ➀ effect of “El Shaddoll Tevilah” once per turn.
➀: During either player's turn, if your opponent Special Sumoned last turn: You can place 1 “Shaddoll” monster from your Graveyard on top of your Deck; send 1 face-up card to the Graveyard.
➁: If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 "Shaddoll" Spell/Trap Card in your Graveyard; add it to your hand.

Hope you like (-;
I tried to have it do what is today tough for the deck, and especially - run over freaking qliphorths, well Kernel at the very least.

[VampireofDarkness]

Well this is quite nice. It's rather balanced, and I would say it may be too slow unfortunately, but if you can prevent this card from being hit by Carrier, (Maybe adding a cannot be targeted clause wouldn't hurt so much?) this would be the card that actually becomes good as a result of POST-SECE Qlis. This is why I always keep the Monolith in the Pendulum Zone. They can do all the draws they want, but the extra 300 ATK at the 1 scale is at times necessary to get a good punch in. I suppose this is why the OCG banned Heavy as well as Qlis using it to Xyz. Anywho, assuming they don't run Towers and they have the Tool and the Monolith in the Pendulum Zone, they ain't gon get past this thing anytime soon. They just gon sit. Sit. And sit until they draw Storm or whatever card they use to blow up their own Pendulum Zones. Ain't nobody got time for that cause you're gonna have DAD and Construct by then and just OTK them back. So if this was meant to be the "Throw Qlis Off Guard" card, then this probably succeeded on that with the 2950. Will it be viable in too many other matchups, not really since it won't stay on the field long enough, but hey, sometimes that one matchup is all you need to take care of

[Marco Polo]

Well this is quite nice. It's rather balanced, and I would say it may be too slow unfortunately, but if you can prevent this card from being hit by Carrier, (Maybe adding a cannot be targeted clause wouldn't hurt so much?) this would be the card that actually becomes good as a result of POST-SECE Qlis. This is why I always keep the Monolith in the Pendulum Zone. They can do all the draws they want, but the extra 300 ATK at the 1 scale is at times necessary to get a good punch in. I suppose this is why the OCG banned Heavy as well as Qlis using it to Xyz. Anywho, assuming they don't run Towers and they have the Tool and the Monolith in the Pendulum Zone, they ain't gon get past this thing anytime soon. They just gon sit. Sit. And sit until they draw Storm or whatever card they use to blow up their own Pendulum Zones. Ain't nobody got time for that cause you're gonna have DAD and Construct by then and just OTK them back. So if this was meant to be the "Throw Qlis Off Guard" card, then this probably succeeded on that with the 2950. Will it be viable in too many other matchups, not really since it won't stay on the field long enough, but hey, sometimes that one matchup is all you need to take care of

Thank you! :) 

The untargetable el shaddoll you described would be amazing, and I was just going to do that. then I changed my mind and went this way:

 

Must first be Fusion Summoned. You can only use the ➀ effect of “El Shaddoll Tevilah” once per turn.

➀: During either player's turn, if your opponent Special Summoned last turn: You can place 1 “Shaddoll” monster from your Graveyard on top of your Deck; send 1 face-up card to the Graveyard.

➁: If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 "Shaddoll" Spell/Trap Card in your Graveyard; add it to your hand. 

now, it becomes great for long matches, especially case you run out of shaddolls. in case it falls, it retrieves a spell like usual, but if you used it's effect - you'd also draw a shaddoll next turn. 

another tweak, this time it's during either player's turn. you can activate the ➀ in case your opponent special summoned the last turn, in case they did special summon during your turn - you could send 1 card from their field to the Graveyard & retrieve a shaddoll during their turn. retaliation much? 

main problem is still carrier tho. but I guess you've got the Midrash + Egrystal combo to stop pendulums at the very least. ideas? :P

[Marco Polo]

updated. tweaked a little, changed type. 

[Cosmo.]

I like that! The artwork is beautiful and in shaddoll-ish style, the effect seems good to recycle the other shaddolls effects. I hope that the real water el shaddoll will be like this one and not an op atrociousness

[Marco Polo]

I like that! The artwork is beautiful and in shaddoll-ish style, the effect seems good to recycle the other shaddolls effects. I hope that the real water el shaddoll will be like this one and not an op atrociousness

I agree, though it doesn't seem like the next El Shaddoll will be of any use, judging by how weak the WIND El Shaddoll was, it kinda confirmed they're not getting any more op support. I hope it will be useful at least. 

Thank you!, glad you like, thanks the support!

;)

[Marco Polo]

Bump :l