Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera - 1-card Dracossack and tribute tokens to draw

[HomoSapientissimus]

Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera
Monster/WIND/Machine/Level 4/ATK 1800/DEF 1400
When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 2 "Mecha Phantom Beast Tokens"
(Machine-Type/WIND/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0). While you control a Token, this card's Level becomes
7. You can Tribute any number of Tokens; draw cards up to the number of Tokens you Tributed.
Once per turn: You can send 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard;
Special Summon 1 "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster from your Deck in face-up Defense Position, and
if you do, its Level becomes 7.

[Toffee.]

Because Normal Summoning a Pot of Greed is totally fair.

[HomoSapientissimus]

The deck needs all the help it can get, and given that it's archetype specific it's not exactly a Pot of Greed (a card which, in contrast, could be splashed into every deck).

[Toffee.]

given that it's archetype specific it's not exactly a Pot of Greed

1: When this card is Normal Summoned: You can Special Summon 2 "Mecha Phantom Beast Tokens"
(Machine-Type/WIND/Level 3/ATK 0/DEF 0).
2: You can Tribute any number of Tokens; draw cards up to the number of Tokens you Tributed.

Your joking, right?

Or even better; I'll just drop Scapegoat from a previous turn and draw four cards off this one.

[HomoSapientissimus]

I see your point, though trying to make it not generic seems to impose some quite convoluted conditions. I guess something like 'You can Tribute any number of Tokens; draw cards up to the number of Tokens you Tributed. You must have a "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster in your hand or Deck, except "Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera", to activate and resolve this effect.' would work.

[evil cucumber]

I think you post this on the wrong section. This belongs to thw Joke and Overpowered cards area...
And honestly. I looked some other cards you made...no offense, but theres no way this coould become a real card, the huge advantage this card can give to you with no drawback is ridiculous. I suggest you to think about adding a relevant cost or toning down its eff. Same for other cards you have post so far

[Toffee.]

though trying to make it not generic seems to impose some quite convoluted conditions.

How about just not giving an effect that can instantly make it live? If you noticed, some of the stronger non-Extra Deck Mecha Phantoms, Raptor, Colt, etc, have amazing effects but can't outright fuel themselves. So go for an approach like that, if your trying to live off of that sort of premise. Mechas are meant to be slow. You know this, right?

[HomoSapientissimus]

I think you post this on the wrong section. This belongs to thw Joke and Overpowered cards area...
And honestly. I looked some other cards you made...no offense, but theres no way this coould become a real card, the huge advantage this card can give to you with no drawback is ridiculous. I suggest you to think about adding a relevant cost or toning down its eff. Same for other cards you have post so far

even if it said

'You can Tribute any number of Tokens; draw cards up to the number of Tokens you Tributed. You must have a "Mecha Phantom Beast" monster in your hand or Deck, except "Mecha Phantom Beast Ultichimaera", to activate and resolve this effect.'

?

 

as I think this would be enough of a restriction to make it only usable for its intended purpose.

[evil cucumber]

I m starting to think that you either have no idea what balance is, or dont know how current meta decks work, or youre just trolling :o

[HomoSapientissimus]

Please explain.

[evil cucumber]

Please explain.

Im sry? You certainly dont put much thought about how your card would impact the game or how its broken compared to other cards that are either banned or limited/semi. And you think that just by adding a clause at the end thats so irrelevant like saying 'you must control this face-up card to activate and resolve this effect' will help making this card at least a bit balanced.
I need you to explain me how do you consider this a realistic card.

[HomoSapientissimus]

What is the problem exactly with tributing 2 Tokens to draw 2 cards? Meta decks can easily churn out +1s and +2s. I'm personally of the opinion that Pot of Greed should come back to 3 as it's not broken if everyone has it, and since it's at 3 it's not a case of whoever resolves their 1 Pot of Greed first wins.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

I remember seeing this card in that mass multiples one you made a couple weeks ago.

Well, I guess I'll reiterate stuff from there.

 

Anyway, while it does help MPBs go into Dracossack and stuff quicker (though they can afford to wait a turn for that to occur); this card isn't the way to go about approaching things. 

In terms of its last effect, basically you can ditch O-lion; SS whatever MPB you want, get Token off of Olion, Tribute said Token for whatever MPB effect you want; then make any R7 you please.

 

In terms of this card's effect, you could hypothetically sacrifice both Tokens that get SSed to draw 2 cards; then trigger last one using Olion and some Level 4 MPB.

Seriously, you'll get 2 new cards and make instant Dracossack (or 11/74 or some other 2-mat R7)

 

As a MPB player, while increasing their playspeed helps a bit, something this drastic isn't a good idea.

Remember what I told you about this and Tetherwolf; latter only gets 1 free MPB Token on its summoning and it can't do anything with it unless it fights something.

 

This one essentially allows you to net up to 2-3 cards (factoring O-lion again) and make the bosses way too fast.

 

(There's probably an issue about what happens if one of the MPBs outside of their Tuners get SSed, given they have their own Level increasing effects, and if that isn't overridden, whatever MPB you summon will be most likely be higher than Level 7, and can't make Dracossack. I'll have to look into it though).