Marco Polo Posted February 28, 2015 Report Share Posted February 28, 2015 So, Zefras need a boss. There's also a really built up flavor story for this but I'll not copy paste it for the 5th time out of obvious reasons. 1 “Shaddoll” monster + 1 “Zefra” monster Must first be Fusion Summoned. ➀ : This card is unaffected by the effects of other Special Summoned monsters (this effect cannot be negated). ➁ : Once per turn: You can send 1 “Shaddoll” monster form your Deck to the Graveyard. If you do, this card gains 800 ATK until the end of the turn. ➂ : If this card is sent to the Graveyard: You can target 1 “Shaddoll” Spell/Trap Card in your Graveyard; add it to your hand. Card art by @me ;) So, discuss. Btw, you can see a really small Wendigo on the bottom right. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atypical-Abbie Posted February 28, 2015 Report Share Posted February 28, 2015 Wow, I actually like this card quite a lot. The ability to send a Shaddoll to the Graveyard is really nice, yet it cannot be as easily abused in Shaddolls, since Zefra monsters are not really as benefial in such a Deck, though I suppose that Core and Naga could possibly be used if you really wanted to. I do have a problem with its ATK though, seem a little bit too high, maybe lower it to 2700 instead, I don't think that's going to hurt it too much really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted March 1, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2015 Wow, I actually like this card quite a lot. The ability to send a Shaddoll to the Graveyard is really nice, yet it cannot be as easily abused in Shaddolls, since Zefra monsters are not really as benefial in such a Deck, though I suppose that Core and Naga could possibly be used if you really wanted to. I do have a problem with its ATK though, seem a little bit too high, maybe lower it to 2700 instead, I don't think that's going to hurt it too much really. Thanks!! The high attack was meant to come in conjuction with an ATK raise effect / modification effect so it could, on its own, overcome Tierra and Apoqliphoth. However I didn't have enough space for it /: I'm still in for it if you have an idea. Its a Zefra doll so I don't have much choice but to include Zefra monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted March 2, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 hey i exist :[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirrus Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 Just dump the Attack increase onto the first effect. Seems like an elegant solution since you lose the brackets because it becomes a cost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atypical-Abbie Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 Not really on board with making dumping Shaddolls to the Graveyard a cost, but for the rest... I think it fits decently with the Shaddolls. I can't see how it can be a boss monster for the Zephras, though, since it's clearly meant to be played in a Shaddoll deck with Naga and Core. For the ATK-gain effect you were talking about... you could give this card 2500 ATK and let it gain 1000 ATK for a single turn by using its effect. This way, it would be able to stomp the Apoqliphorts and Tierra. Dumping them as a cost means that their effects can't activate, which is kind of the point of Shaddolls, so if it's as a cost, that would just be weird. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted March 2, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 Dumping them as a cost means that their effects can't activate, which is kind of the point of Shaddolls, so if it's as a cost, that would just be weird. OH! So wait, that means, the current effect can't activate them as well. since it's a cost for no effect and the sending is a cost. ! :[] omg. completely forgot that! What am I to change? Also, ATK gain will be added next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampireofDarkness Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 OH! So wait, that means, the current effect can't activate them as well. since it's a cost for no effect and the sending is a cost. ! :[] omg. completely forgot that! What am I to change? Also, ATK gain will be added next time. You have to add some sort of effect, and at the end put "then send 1 Shaddoll monster from your Deck to the Graveyard" or take out the "for no effect" part. That's what makes it a cost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atypical-Abbie Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 OH! So wait, that means, the current effect can't activate them as well. since it's a cost for no effect and the sending is a cost. ! :[] omg. completely forgot that! What am I to change? Also, ATK gain will be added next time. Why would you need to change it? It isn't a cost right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slinky Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 Why would you need to change it? It isn't a cost right now. It doesn't matter. Saying its for no effect won't allow them to activate. See: Towers Share the Pain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atypical-Abbie Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 It doesn't matter. Saying its for no effect won't allow them to activate. See: Towers Share the Pain Right, forgot about that. Just take that out then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cirrus Posted March 3, 2015 Report Share Posted March 3, 2015 I thought that was the goal (making the first effect kinda mediocre). I guess the first effect is actually decent if it's supposed to proc Shaddoll effects. Uh, you could still tack on the attack gain to the first effect as Grandmaster of Darkness pointed out. Maybe reduce the attack a little and add half of the sent card's ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marco Polo Posted March 5, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2015 Done. modified effects ➀➁. also modified pic, which now looks much better to my taste. ^^ Unaffected by Nekroz Unicore at last, discuss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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