Upon Wings of Heaven - Valkyria [9/9]

[Resident Fascist]

 

When a "Valkyria" Monster is Normal or Special summoned from your hand, you can Special Summon this card (From your Hand)

"Go forth, sister! I will support you from the rear!"

 

 

Cannot be summoned, except from your Hand. Once per turn, you can target up to 2 "Valkyria" Monsters you control: Until the end of this turn, those target's levels become 5. You can only use the effect of "Light Spear Valkyria - Laura" once per turn.

"The Spear of Light pierces evil with absolute judgement. Do not think you can avoid retribution."

 

 

Cannot be summoned, except from your Hand. When this Card is Normal or Special Summoned: Add 1 "Valkyria" Card from your deck to your hand. You can only use the effect of "Lightning Strike Valkyria - May" once per turn.

"Like a stroke of lightning,  the Valkyria Legion deal with battle swiftly and elegantly."

 

 

Cannot be summoned, except from your Hand. When this Card is Normal Summoned, you can target 1 "Valkyria" Card in your Graveyard: Add that target to your hand.

"You cannot fall here! Rise up! Allow me to become your strength!"

 

 

2 Level 4 "Valkyria" Monsters

Cannot be Special Summoned, except from the Extra Deck. Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, and then target 1 card on the field: Destroy that target. If this card destroys a monster (Either by card effect or battle); you can add 1 "Valkyria" Monster from your Deck or Graveyard to your Hand. You can only use each effect of "Blue Heavenly Feather Valkyria - Mairssa" once per turn.

"She is their hope. She is Heaven's Feather, the Wing of Judgement."

 

 

2 Level 5 "Valkyria" Monsters

Cannot be Special Summoned, except from the Extra Deck. Once per turn, you can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card: Banish all Monsters your Opponent controls. For each card Banished this way, choose up to 1 "Valkyria" Card in your Graveyard, and add it to your hand. Those cards cannot be activated or summoned this turn. You can only use the effect of "Wings of Judgement Valkyria - Victoria" once per turn.

"Come, heathen! We are the blades that will judge your fate! Sisters, follow me into battle!"

 

 

Target 2 "Valkyria" Monsters you control, and increase their level by 1. You can Banish this card from your Graveyard: Shuffle 1 "Valkyria" Card from your Graveyard into your deck. You can only use 1 "Valkyria Ascension" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

"The day they unfold their wings - That's the day they are accepted as part of the Valkyria Legion."

 

 

When an Opponent's Monster declares an attack; Target 2 "Valkyria" cards in your Graveyard: Shuffle those targets into the deck. If you do, draw 1 card, and negate the attack.

"Sleep well, Carine. I'm sorry. I have failed you."

 

 

When a "Valkyria" Monster(s) is Normal or Special Summoned from your Hand; You can add, from your Deck to your hand, 1 "Valkyria" Monster with a different name than that Monster. You can only use this effect of "Valkyria Sky Sanctuary" once per turn.

If you control 2 or more "Valkyria" Monsters, you can target 3 "Valkyria" cards in your Graveyard: Shuffle those targets into the deck, and if you do, Draw 1 card.

"This is our home."

 

Because Yugioh has a clear lack of female knights. The idea of this archetype is a rank 4/5 spam deck that has some recycling potential to grind your opponent down with Victoria and Mairssa. If I can't post the ones with the flavour text here, tell me and I'll replace them with versions without it, since technically effect monsters don't have flavour text, I just thought it would be a nice touch.

[Thalarctos Maritimus]

WOW, You have amazing Art skills!

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

WOW, You have amazing Art skills!

 

Follow the Advanced Clause.

You're not giving Shard any degree of criticism related to how his design turned out, nor did you offer improvements.

 

Also as a sidenote, it's likely he found the artwork online somewhere.

Most of us don't draw our own art; except for Sleepy and some other member.

[Thalarctos Maritimus]

Follow the Advanced Clause.

You're not giving Shard any degree of criticism related to how his design turned out, nor did you offer improvements.

 

Also as a sidenote, it's likely he found the artwork online somewhere.

Most of us don't draw our own art; except for Sleepy and some other member.

K at least know im not afraid to show my cards but now isn't the right time

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

K at least know im not afraid to show my cards but now isn't the right time

If you want to show your cards, then do it on your own accord.

There is no need for you to announce it; just make sure you post them properly.

 

And hopefully you understand how our policies work in Advanced Cards.

Should you break them again, you will get an AC warn.

 

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Anyway, might as well review so my presence in here isn't solely to yell at AC breakers.

 

• Emelia sets up for a Rank 4 (or for that matter, the one you got in here), assuming you NS another one first.
• Laura has that Isolde-esque effect; except making Valkyria's Level 5 for the purposes of Victoria or whatever R5 you plan on running. (I could honestly see this and Emelia going into Victoria on turn 1; provided setup and all that). Its ATK/DEF are on the high side, considering what it's capable of. I might suggest lowering it to 1700 or something [which shouldn't be a lot]. In most cases, seems this one will be used for Xyz setup; either becoming material or making other capable of going higher.
• May is your Stratos for this Archetype, if you get where I'm going with this. Thankfully, you did make this a hard OPT.
• Sara recycles dead Valkyrias in your Graveyard; ones used for material or that die in battle and stuff.
• Mairssa (I am assuming you intended to spell it this way, as opposed to using the name 'Marissa') pops stuff once per turn, and either recycles/searches Valkyrias when it destroys something. If you lacked the OPT clause at the end, I would say this card needed to be toned down in the case of multiple copies. But right now, it's fine.
• Victoria is a banishing version of Raigeki that allows you to bounce stuff in your Graveyard. Not sure how I feel about it though, considering that the first two cards can bring it out in one turn; then trigger this card and nuke the opponent's field + retrieve more cards (although given your wording, it appears that you must have 1 Valkyria per banished card). Keep in mind that banished cards are a lot harder to reuse, as opposed to stuff hitting the Graveyard.
  • From my POV, this would work more as a late-game effect when you're certain to have more cards in the Graveyard. That in mind, I'd probably change the effect to destroy stuff instead; it'll still hurt the opponent, but not as much.
• Ascension does Laura's job, except you actually need 2 monsters to activate it. With this, you could hypothetically make Rank 6s, combined with Laura's effect; but unless you have plans for a Rank 6; I'd probably see them sticking to R5 business. Then, it's capable of shuffling a used one into the Deck to restart plays.
• Memory shuffles used Valkyrias to block attacks, and also nets a free draw (possibly re-drawing them again). I'd probably add an OPT clause on this though, but the nature of the card does interfere with Sara/Mairssa's effects.
• Sky Sanctuary allows searching when Valkyrias get summoned, and if you have multiple ones out; shuffle used ones into the Deck and redraw. Again, OPT here is necessary; otherwise this would end up like Black Whirlwind to an extent (in conjunction with Emelia).

 

Overall, seems solid.