GarlandChaos Posted May 9, 2015 Report Share Posted May 9, 2015 Lore: If this face-up Attack position Monster would be destroyed in battle: Negate all damage and banish this card as well as the opposing Monster. If this face-down card is flipped face-up by an attack, send it to the Graveyard and Special Summon two "Platoon Tokens" (Zombie-Type/Dark Attribute/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0): You may tribute both of these Tokens to Special Summon 2 Zombie-Type Monsters from your deck. When the tokens are tributed by this effect, inflict 1000 Life Points of damage to your opponent. The basic idea with this card was to have something that summons Tokens and then tributes them to cause havoc. As always, feedback and suggestions are encouraged and appreciated. ^^ EDIT1: Made the second effect a flip-effect triggered by battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coltwing Posted May 9, 2015 Report Share Posted May 9, 2015 Love the idea of creating a zombie spam/burn deck with this guy and his tokens. ;) The only problem is that his effect activates while he is face down which is kind of awkward mechanic-wise because effects typically can't do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2015 Love the idea of creating a zombie spam/burn deck with this guy and his tokens. ;) The only problem is that his effect activates while he is face down which is kind of awkward mechanic-wise because effects typically can't do that. Thanks. ^^ My plan was for this card to be comboed with Zombie World-centric Decks to cause some mayhem. It's meant to be a trade-off for the first and second effects, considering the first one is vastly overshadowed by the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2015 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woloa Posted May 11, 2015 Report Share Posted May 11, 2015 This is an odd card, but, I can see how it would work. I would maybe make the second effect a flip effect that only activates if he's attacked, basicly just rewording it to make it easier to understand. The same effect, but label it a flip effect and put at the end "Do not activate this effect unless this card was flipped face up by an attack" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2015 This is an odd card, but, I can see how it would work. I would maybe make the second effect a flip effect that only activates if he's attacked, basicly just rewording it to make it easier to understand. The same effect, but label it a flip effect and put at the end "Do not activate this effect unless this card was flipped face up by an attack" Thanks, Dell. I'll edit it accordingly. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woloa Posted May 11, 2015 Report Share Posted May 11, 2015 Thanks, Dell. I'll edit it accordingly. ^^ By the way, my name is spelled Dehl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 11, 2015 By the way, my name is spelled Dehl. Ah, right. Sorry, I keep getting stuff like that mixed up. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MR Unknown Posted May 12, 2015 Report Share Posted May 12, 2015 I like the way you did that token effect, it is amazing man. Keep up the good work. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tinkerer Posted May 12, 2015 Report Share Posted May 12, 2015 Just popping in here to remind you that tokens can't be sent to the Graveyard. You might wanna reword it to say that if they are "tributed by this effect..." or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DoctorMiracle Posted May 14, 2015 Report Share Posted May 14, 2015 This card could be a good staple to bring out key zombie monsters in any zombie deck. However, tokens can't go to the graveyard. When they are destroyed, they just disappear. Try rewording it to adjust for that fact. Otherwise, nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GarlandChaos Posted May 15, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 15, 2015 This card could be a good staple to bring out key zombie monsters in any zombie deck. However, tokens can't go to the graveyard. When they are destroyed, they just disappear. Try rewording it to adjust for that fact. Otherwise, nice card. Thanks, that's what I was going for. ^^ And I fixed it, don't worry. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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