Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 [img]http://i.imgur.com/ZEVbjQH.jpg[/img] Tell me if it needs some work, i'd be happy for some help! PS, I was staring at Number C69 to get used to the XYZ format. Also i noticed on instead of at, :l Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 Why the specific Utopia hate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 IDK, but effects are effects, so whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 So your card needs a specific monster to gain an effect that only works against a specific subset of monsters, which doesn't see a lot of play. We can remove the additional effects and there will be little to no change to the card's function. Flavour-wise, there's also no reason for this to be such pinpointed Utopia hate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted May 16, 2015 Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 As Gadjiltron mentioned, it's blatant Xyz/Synchro hate; as well as Utopia. Also, it requires another Xyz Monster to use its effect (and the only way I see this coming out is through a Rank-Up; although I seem to recall they need Number C monsters and NOT Number X) You also need to specify WHERE the Magician monster will be SSed from. ---- If this were the anime-verse, this would only be effective on Yuma in ZEXAL (or Astral during the final match). In other cases, it's just a 3-mat R5 vanilla that Dighvorzhak outclasses; along with Constellar Diamond and other 3-mat R5s (namely other Chaos Xyz/Number C). ---- Also, post the card's lore underneath so people don't have to squint to read the effect. Did you not read the section rules on that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swelterrier Posted May 16, 2015 Author Report Share Posted May 16, 2015 I'll edit it soon, and I'lI post the edited version in a new thread, and as you should notice, the title said "not my best card..." so yeah... theres that, thanks, critic! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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