My first Custom Deck

[SeanTheGigagunMaster]

I hope you all like Gigagun cards
 
Hello everyone, I posted earlier that I made my first custom deck that was Gigagun deck, realize and told by other members that I made some mistake, so I went back, came back, and made some improvements, also I made some new cards for the Gigagun deck as well. Hope you all enjoy it.


P.S. I apologize for not able to do any Picture, I just don't want to use someone else's work.

 

[spoiler=Cards]
 

 

Name: Gigagun Pistol

Attributes: Earth

Level: 1

Type: Machine/Tuner

ATK: 300 DEF: 1500

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". Once per turn and only that turn, when Summoned; you send one "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your deck to your hand, if you do; send another "Gun-Gardna Bullet" with a different name from hand or graveyard to your deck.

 

 

 

Name: Gigagun: Dynamite

Attributes: Earth

Level: 2

Type: Machine/Tuner

ATK: 100 DEF: 1300

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card Position cannot be change, and it cannot be use as a Tribute. There can only be 1 "Gigagun: Dynamite" on the field. When this card sent to the Graveyard as a Sycnhro Mateiral, you can Special Summon this card to your opponent side of the field. When this card is destroy by battle from your opponent side of the field, destroy all cards that was around it.

 

Name: Gigagun: Assault Rifle

Attributes: Earth

Level: 3

Type: Warrior/Tuner

ATK: 200 DEF: 1000

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". When is sent to the as a Sycnhro Mateiral, you can send one "Gun-Gardna Bullet" to your Graveyard from your deck, then draw one card.

 

 

Name: Gigagun: Shotgun

Attributes: Earth

Level: 1

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 600 DEF: 1350

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet" When this card attack, any battle damage this card inflicts to your opponent is doubled.

 

 

Name: Gigagun: Cannon

Attributes: Earth

Level: 3

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 500 DEF: 2000

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". Once per turn you can target 1 "Gigagun" Monster on your Monster Zone other than this card and target one Monster your opponent controls, destroy the first target and decease your opponent Monster ATK as the same amount of DEF of the Monster that was Destroy by this card.

 

Name: Gigagun: Grenade Launcher

Attributes: Earth

Level: 3

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 300 DEF: 1700

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". When this card is Summoned, send one "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your deck to your hand. When this card attack, your opponent send the top two cards from their deck to the graveyard.

 

Name: Gigagun: Chinook

Attributes: Earth

Level: 5

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 900 DEF: 1900

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card cannot attack. If your opponent controls a monster and you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). Once per turn, you take 500 damage to reduce its level from 1 to 4, if you do, you can Special Summon any "Gigagun" Monsters either from your hand or graveyard, only equal to the level that this card has left.

 

Name: Gigagun: Tank

Attributes: Earth

Level: 6

Type: Machine/Effect

ATK: 0 DEF: 2800

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". Once per turn, and only once that turn. during your Main Phase 1, you can Special Summon this card (from your graveyard). When this card is Special Summoned, you cannot conduct your Battle Phase this turn.

 

Name: Gigagun: Fighter Jet

Attributes: Earth

Level: 7

Type: Machine/Effect

ATK: 0 DEF: 3100

(Can only be Normal/Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". During either player turn, you can send one "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your deck to your graveyard then banish this card from your side of the field until your opponent End Phase.

 

Name: Kuribomb

Attributes: Earth

Level: 1

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 300 DEF: 200

During either player's turn, when you would be taking battle/card effect damages while you control no monster, you can discard this card; to decrease the same amount of damage to all of your opponent monster ATK or DEF instead.

 

Name: Gun-Gardna Bullet: Stun

Spell Card Type: Normal

This card is used to target one of your "Gigagun" monster to attack, and if you do, apply it DEF for damage calculation. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: You take 500 damage and negate one face-up card on your opponent side of the field.

 

Name: Gun-Gardna Bullet: Poison

Spell Card Type: Normal

This card is used to target one of your "Gigagun" monster to attack, and if you do, apply it DEF for damage calculation. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: You take 500 damage and target one monster on your opponent side of the field and decease it ATK in halve.

 

Name: Gun-Gardna Bullet: Heat Seeking Missile

Spell Card Type: Normal

This card is used to target one of your "Gigagun" monster to attack, and if you do, apply it DEF for damage calculation. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: You take 500 damage and randomly discard 1 card from your opponent hand.

 

Name: Gun-Gardna Bullet: Smoke Bomb

Spell Card Type: Quick-Play

This card is used to target one of your "Gigagun" monster to attack, and if you do, apply it DEF for damage calculation. During your opponent Battle Phase, you can negate one attack and end the Battle Phase, you must control a "Gigagun" monster to use this effect. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by a card effect: You take 500 damage and send one "Gigagun" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

 

Name: Reload Ammunition

Spell Card Type: Normal

Once per turn, you can send two "Gun-Gardna Bullet" with different names from your Graveyard to your Deck, to draw one card.

 

 

Name: Missile Mode

Trap Card Type: Normal

You can only activate this card while you control three "Gigagun" monster. Once per turn, you can banish this card to negate and banish one monster on the field.

 

 

Name: Sniper Mode

Trap Card Type: Counter

You can only activate this card while you control two "Gigagun" monster. Once per turn, When a Spell or Trap card is activated: banish 1 "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your Graveyard and banish this card to negate the activation and if you do, destroy that card. 

 

Name: Gigagun: Submarine

Attributes: Earth

Level: 5

Type: Rock/Effect

ATK: 0 DEF: 2250

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

(Can only be Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". Once per turn, you can reveal the top 3 cards of your deck, if one of them is a "Gigagun" and/or "Gun-Gardna Bullet", add the "Gun-Gardna Bullet" to your hand and Special Summon the "Gigagun", otherwise banish them.

 

Name: Gigagun: Va Gardna

Attributes: Earth

Level: 6

Type: Warrior/Synchro/Effect

ATK: 500 DEF: 2300

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

(Can only be Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". Once per turn, you can send 1 "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from deck to your graveyard to sent 1 "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your deck to your hand

 

Name: Gigagun: Wra-X-Point Eight

Attributes: Light

Level: 8

Type: Warrior/Synchro/Effect

ATK: 1000 DEF: 2800

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

(Can only be Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. This card cannot attack expect by the effects of "Gun-Gardna Bullet". If this card attacks, your opponent cannot active cards from their hand and/or graveyard until the end of the Damage Step.

 

Name: Gigagun: Aura Shield

Attributes: Light

Level: 2

Type: Rock/Synchro/Tuner

ATK: 0 DEF: 500

1 Tuner + 1 non-tuner monster

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can Special Summon 1 "Gigagun" Monster from your deck.

 

Name: Gigashield: Cannon Blaster

Attributes: Light

Level: 10

Type: Machine/Synchro/Effect

ATK: 0 DEF: 5000

1 "Gigagun" Tuner Synchro Monster + 2 or more "Gigagun" non-Tuner Monsters

Must be Synchro Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. (Can only be Special Summon in a Defense Position.) This card can attack while in face-up Defense Position. Once per turn, you can send up to 1 to 3 "Gun-Gardna Bullet" from your deck to the Gaveyard to apply the these effects: 1, Apply its DEF for damage calculation. 2, Any battle damage your opponent takes from attacks involving this card is halved. 3. This card become unaffected by your opponent card effects. These effects last until your opponent next End Phase.

 

Name: Gigasword: The God Blade

Attributes: Light

Level: 12

Type: Warrior/Synchro/Effect

ATK: 4000    DEF: 0

1 Tuner Synchro Monster + "Gigashield: Cannon Blaster"

Must be Synchro Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. There can only 1 "Gigasword: The God Blade" on the field. Once per turn, you can Special Summon "Gigagun: Cannon Blaster" from the graveyard, ignoring its Summoning conditions, and it effect is negated. Once per turn, during either player turn, whenever this card would be destroy or by battle or by card effect, destroy "Gigashield: Cannon Blaster" instead. This card cannot be banish or be tribute for a Tribute Summon.

 

 

 

Name: Gigagun: Cannon Shield

Spell Card Type: Equip

Equip only to "Gigagun: Wra-X-Point Eight". This card can not be negated or be destroy by a card effect. Once per turn, the equipped monster cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect. The equipped monster gain 200 DEF.

 

 

 

 

 

Name: Gigagun: Laser Rifle

Spell Card Type: Equip

Equip only to "Gigagun: Wra-X-Point Eight". This card can not be negated or be destroy by a card effect. The monster equipped with this card cannot be negated and cannot be send back to the Extra Deck.

 

[SeanTheGigagunMaster]

Tell me how you guys feel about it. sorry about the pic, they well come soon.

[ÆƵ–]

Alright I think I'm going to explain this before sakura or another mod gets to it.

 

Firstly, it is customary to write out your cards in written format (which is typing out the attribute/ type/ level/ etc) instead of posting cards with blank pictures. 

 

Secondly, it is helpful to post the lore (effect) underneath the card so that people who have hard times reading smaller text can review your cards and such. 

 

Thirdly, these seem like a cool concept just going by the name (since I am one of those people who find it hard to read smaller text). 

 

If you make the fixes I suggested above (which you should get used to doing if you aren't very good at finding pictures like me), I think I could do a proper review. 

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

As Aquatic already mentioned, if you do not have pictures, then you should post them in written format.

There is no shame in doing so, and it's easier for us to read stuff.

 

Also, Submarine is missing its materials; fix that.

[SeanTheGigagunMaster]

Alright I'll do some improvement, thank you for help.(sense I'm new here.) and oh my gosh,My Submarine Material, I can't believe miss that.

[Astolfo]

Lots of OCG errors, but eh, whatever.

Dynamite is too strong.

Chinook is too abusable because you could just reduce by 1 to summon 4 the first time, reduce by 1 again to summon 3, etc. That's a huge amount for literally no actual cost/drawback.

Tank needs a hard Once Per Turn (as in This effect of "Gigagun: Tank" can only be activated once per turn) so you can't just summon multiple from your Grave.

Reload is too strong, and it doesn't even have a once per turn at all, let alone a hard OPT. And the recycle will be too easy given that's the main point lol.

Missile is too strong, give it a hard OPT + some sort of actual drawback, there's nothing that actually makes using this card a tradeoff of any kind.

Same with Sniper Mode.

Va Gardna needs a hard OPT and an actual drawback to free double search.

3600 DEF that can attack is huge for a Level 8, just saying, and especially so with an Armades clause.

For Cannon Blaster, do the 3 effects' numbers correspond with the number sent? (like, 1 card sent is only first eff, 2 sent is first two, etc) Or does it apply all 3 no matter how many you send? The #3 eff is too strong for something so easy to trigger via the dump. And #1 effect is a given, writing it out is pointless. Attacking in DEF would do that anyways.

God Blade is just silly and sort of stupid, because it literally has no protection outside of battle and is literally only for probably OTK/etc.

[SeanTheGigagunMaster]

Well [Re-Class] I can see that my deck a lot of OCG errors, I'll fix that soon, but I'll will point out somethings about my deck.

 

This deck is meant to be Strong in for reason. (my reason, really.) Just to beat the crap out of Qli's or any other deck that goes to fast.

 

I love Dynamite effect, because to me it unique. Your just destroying the cards around it including my cards as well. I'm mean think about it...it a Dynamite. In war, soldier throw Dynamite at their enemies.

 

I don't think you understand how Chinook effects work or maybe I didn't put it in a very good sentence. "reduce its level from 1 to 4" I'll explain it as a example: If I reduce it to 1, it can summon up to four Gigagun monsters, but that mean I can only summon a "level one" Gigagun monsters if I wanted to summon all four. If i reduce it two, it mean that i can only summon a monster with a level of 1 and 2 or 1, 1, and 1. reducing to 4, I can only 1 level 1 monster. all because of what Chinook has left.

 

 Reload Ammo is not the only one who has that effect. Yang Zang has one to, expect that it stronger then Reload ammo. Reload is not allow to have the same names.

 

the traps are strong

 

For Va Gardna, I'm not sure what OPT mean. and for Tank, he has a "Once per turn" I can only summon one per turn.

 

3600 is little to strong, but so is Utopia and his supports. Those two would make a great team or rivals 

 

For Cannon Blaster and God Blade," do the 3 effects' numbers correspond with the number sent? "   ​the answer is yes. When sending 1, your only activating the first effect. When sending 2 card, your only activating the second effect (and you understand what I'm saying.)  and no the first effect is not given, cause if I'm attacking without it, I'll be attacking with 0 ATK.(.....I'll fix that to.) When using Cannon Blaster, you want to only use his first effect, because trying to get 3 effect to apply other than trying to protect him would be pointless. taking 1500 in every turn is to much damage. now for God Blade. He meant to be the last card you ever want to play, your last hope to win (drama effect). his effect maybe silly at first, but when you opponent got strong cards and your losing, he made be your best chance to win. also you gotta think about this, when dueling with this deck. you'll be taking a lot damage just to get strong cards. 

 

Also this deck would make great team with Superheavy Samurai, Utopia, and Rock Stun decks

[Astolfo]

Except Dynamite is easy to get the Nuke eff off first and then you just continue to play like normal.

And intentionally making a deck anti-Qli/etc isn't really a good way of approaching it.

 

Ah, that's a little better, but it still means if you reduce it by 1, you can summon a good number of monsters without any actual drawback.

 

Except, Yang Zing Path has a hard OPT (Once Per Turn).

No.

 

The traps are strong, and they are stronger than they should be.

 

OPT = Once Per Turn (This effect can only be activated once per turn.)

Hard OPT = Hard Once Per Turn (The effect of "(name here)" can only be activated once per turn.)

Tank has an OPT, not a HOPT, that means you can summon multiple copies of Tank, because that SPECIFIC copy of Tank had only used its effect once, not all of them.

So just repeat it for each one, and you summon all of them.

Change it to a HOPT.

 

Like I said, just because some other cards decided to be broken doesn't mean it's good design, and it doesn't mean you should do the same.

3600 is way too high for something that barely takes effort to summon.

No.

 

So, if you send 2 cards for Cannon Blaster, you don't get both effects? Only the second?

Well who would ever send more than one then, unless they actively had a reason to protect it?

 

God Blade's effect is completely ridiculous, and it is even worse than Quasar, because of the fact that it has no protection outside of battle and screws over your ENTIRE SELECTION OF RESOURCES to do so.

 

*sigh*

[SeanTheGigagunMaster]

Okay, I thought about what you say and went back did some changes .

 

Dynamite

Tank

Chinook

Va Gardna

Wra-X-Point

Sniper Mode 

Missile Mode

Reload Ammunition

The God Blade

Cannon Shield

 

Their Effects/ATK/DEF has been change and remade God Blade.

Also I want to apologize if I say anything that would offended you.