Dova Posted October 8, 2015 Report Share Posted October 8, 2015 [spoiler=Monsters (20)] [spoiler=Other (12)] Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. If this card is successfully Summoned, draw 1 card. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing two "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. "Leviathan" monsters cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. If this card attacks or is attacked by a non-WATER monster, you can target one of your banished WATER monsters: Shuffle it into your deck, and, if you do, this card destroys the monster it is battling at the start of the Damage Step. You can only use this effect of "Leviathan Lophiias" once per turn. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. You can banish this card: shuffle all cards in your Graveyard into your Deck. You can only use this effect once per turn. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card to your opponent's side of the field by banishing two "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. There can only be one face-up "Leviathan Shawcras" on the field. If this card in your possession would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. The controller of this card cannot Xyz Summon non-WATER monsters. If this card is attacked by a WATER monster: Change that attack to a direct attack. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing two "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. If this card in your possession would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your deck. If this card attacks or is attacked: Your opponent cannot activate effects until the end of the Damage Step. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. You can banish this card from your hand or face-up on the field: Add one "Leviathan" card from your Deck to your hand, except for "Leviathan Nautilaceas". Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing two "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. If this card in your possession would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. Once per turn, if you have no monsters in your Graveyard: you can banish 2 Spell/Trap cards in your Graveyard, and, if you do, draw 1 card. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing two "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. "Leviathan" monsters you control cannot be targeted for attacks. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing one "Leviathan" monster from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. You can shuffle one of your banished "Leviathan" monsters into your Deck: Destroy one card on the field. You can only use this effect once per turn. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. [spoiler=Boss (4)] Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing four "Leviathan" monsters in your hand with different names. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. You can target one of your banished "Leviathan" monsters, except "Leviathan Bokras": Special Summon it from the Graveyard, and, if you do, you can negate its effects: Destroy 1 card on the field. You can only activate this effect once per turn. WATER monsters cannot declare an attack the turn you activate this effect. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing three "Leviathan" monsters from your hand. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. While you have no cards in your Graveyard, this card cannot be destroyed by battle or by card effects. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing three "Leviathan" monsters from your hand with different names. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, shuffle it into your Deck. While you have no cards in your Graveyard, this card cannot be targeted or destroyed by your opponents cards or effects. Once per turn, you may banish one "Leviathan" monster from your hand, target one monster your opponent controls, pay 500 Life Points: equip it to this card. If this card already has a monster equipped when you activate this effect, destroy the original equipped monster. This card gains attack equal to half the attack of the equipped monster. If "Leviathan Thalassas" would be removed from the field, you may destroy the equipped monster instead. You can only control one face-up Leviathan Thalassas. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing five "Leviathan" monsters from your hand or field. When this card would be Special Summoned by this effect, send it to the Graveyard. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, banish it. You may not move this card from the banished zone, except by the effect of a "Leviathan" monster. If it is moved from the banished zone, halve your LP. It cannot be effected by other card's effects while in the Graveyard, except for its own. During each players Standby Phase, you can either: -Increase this card's Level in the Graveyard by 1 (max. 10) (This Level increase remains if this card is Special Summoned) -Special Summon this card, and if you do, destroy cards on the field equal to half this card's Level (Rounded down). You may only control one face-up "Leviathan Liopeuras". [spoiler=Extra (4)] 3 Level 4 WATER Monsters You can also Xyz Summon this card by using a Rank 3 WATER monster you control as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster also become Xyz Materials on this card.) When summoned, this card's original ATK is equal to the number of your banished WATER monsters x 1000. Once per turn, when your opponent activates an effect, you can target two of your banished WATER monsters, then detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate that effect, and if you do, destroy it, and then shuffle those targets into your Deck. Xyz materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, banish it instead. 3 or more (max. 5) Level 4 Monsters Xyz Materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card in your possession would go the Graveyard, banish it instead. When this card is Xyz Summoned: Place 1 Leviathan Counter on each other monster on the field. (If a card attacks or is attacked by a monster, it gains 1000 ATK for each Leviathan Counter on the attacking/attacked monster during the Damage Step only). If this card has "Shark Caesar" as Xyz Material, it gains this effect: - Once per turn, during either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material: Distribute Leviathan Counters on the field equal the the amount of your banished WATER monsters before you activated this effect. 3 Level 4 WATER Monsters Xyz Materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card in your possession would go the Graveyard, banish it instead. If this card would be destroyed, you can target one of your banished "Leviathan" monsters, then detach one Xyz Material from this card: Shuffle that target into your deck, also this card is not destroyed. If this card has "Number 17: Leviathan Dragon" as Xyz Material, it gains this effect: - Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: This card gains ATK equal to the number of your banished WATER monsters x 200. 3 Level 4 Monsters Xyz Materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card in your possession would go the Graveyard, banish it instead. You cannot Special Summon non-WATER monsters, and you cannot Special Summon from the Extra Deck. During each of your Standby Phases, detach 1 Xyz Material from this card or take 2000 damage. If this card has "Number 30: Acid Golem of Destruction" as Xyz Material, it gains this effect: - If this card would deal you damage, you can banish one "Leviathan" card from your hand: Reduce the damage taken to 0. 3 Level 4 WATER monsters Xyz Materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card in your possession would go the Graveyard, banish it instead. Once per turn, you can detach one XYZ Material from this card: Gain Life Points equal to this card's DEF. If this card has "Submersible Carrier Aero Shark" as an XYZ Material, it gains this effect: -Once per turn, you can detatch one XYZ Material from this card: Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of banished "Leviathan" Monsters in your Banished Zone x 200. [spoiler=Spells (6)] All WATER monsters that cannot be Normal Summoned/Set gain 300 ATK and DEF. All Spell/Traps that would go to your Graveyard are banished instead. You can target two banished Spells/Traps OR two banished WATER monsters: shuffle them into your Deck. You can reveal all the "Leviathan" cards in your hand: draw one card for every two cards you revealed.. You can only use one effect of "Leviathan World" per turn, and only once per turn. If you have no monsters in your Graveyard, and at least one banished "Leviathan" monster: Banish all Spell Cards in your Graveyard and shuffle all Trap Cards in your Graveyard into your Deck, OR shuffle all Spell Cards in your Graveyard into your deck and banish all Trap Cards in your Graveyard. You can only activate one "Rush of the Deep" per turn. Add one Level 3 WATER "Leviathan" monster from your deck to your hand. This card's effects are only applied you have at least one "Leviathan" monster banished. If a WATER monster(s) is shuffled into your deck: Draw 1 card for each monster shuffled. Activate only if you have no monsters in your Graveyard. Target one of your banished non-Tuner WATER monsters: Special Summon that Monster. During the End Phase, shuffle that card into your Deck, and if you do, take damage equal to that monster's Level x 200. Target 1 Xyz Monster you control; Special Summon from your Extra Deck, 1 "Leviathan" monster that is 1 Rank higher than that target, by using that target as the Xyz Material. (This Special Summon is treated as an Xyz Summon. Xyz Materials attached to it also become Xyz Materials on the Summoned monster.) If this card is banished, except from an Xyz Monster's effect, you can target one WATER Xyz Monster you control: Attach this card to it as Xyz Material. You can only use each effect of "Rank-Up-Magic Call of the Deep" once per turn. [spoiler=Traps (2)] If you have a banished "Leviathan" monster: You can banish all cards in your Graveyard, and, if you do, draw 1 card. If a monster in your possession is banished while this card is in your Graveyard: You can Special Summon this card as an Effect Monster (Aqua/WATER/Level 3/ATK 1600/DEF 0), with this effect: Once per turn, you can banish one card in your Graveyard. Cannot be used as Xyz Material for an Xyz Summon, except for the Xyz Summon of a WATER Monster. If Summoned this way, if this card would be removed from the field, or if this card would be detached from a Xyz monsterl: Banish it. if you have no monsters in your Graveyard, target one WATER monster you control and one card your opponent controls: send the first target to the Graveyard and, if you do, banish the second target. After this effect resolves, banish one Spell/Trap card from your hand or side of the field. Strategy-wise, this deck has many ways to go, all of them based around shuffling/banishing monsters/S/T into the deck instead of banishing them. I wanted to make the archetype easy to meld, to allow it to use different monsters (such as Big Jaws) or be usable in other decks. Please give CnC, I'm eager to see what you think. ^^ Notes: Not sure if Chaos Greed will be a problem or not. I also need some way to prevent this from being merged with standard MACRO Decks. Ideas would be appreciated. Also wondering if the shuffling effect on all the monster could be negated somehow? If so, how can I prevent the negation? Plans: More Support Updates: Nerfed Bokras, slightly edited Primordias. Added three new monsters! (1 Boss, 2 Other) Added Leviathan Medusozoas! (Other) Added Leviathan Liopeuras and Thalassas! (Bosses) (Courtesy of HalohbotTech) Added Primordial Soup of the Deep and Flash Flood of the Deep! (Spells) (Courtesy of HalohbotTech) Added three new monsters, also slowly updating the card text! (3 Other) Added a Rank-Up-Magic, also three monsters! (1 Spell, 3 Extra) Added a monster and trap! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 8, 2015 Report Share Posted October 8, 2015 Not a fan on Bokras having 3200 ATK for a Level 3, especially given that the conditions are very much easy to pull off.I'd lower it down to 2100 or something at most, or just make him banish others from the Graveyard. Either that, or require that you banish 4-5 (with different names), but even then, stats should be lowered, since it eclipses common bosses. That, coupled with allowing you to recur your banished Leviathans, then pop things at the cost of negation. ------Also, you're missing the regular Xyz requirements on Primordias. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 8, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 8, 2015 Not a fan on Bokras having 3200 ATK for a Level 3, especially given that the conditions are very much easy to pull off. I'd lower it down to 2100 or something at most, or just make him banish others from the Graveyard. Either that, or require that you banish 4-5 (with different names), but even then, stats should be lowered, since it eclipses common bosses. That, coupled with allowing you to recur your banished Leviathans, then pop things at the cost of negation. ------ Also, you're missing the regular Xyz requirements on Primordias. Thought I had forgotten something on Primordias! Thanks! Looking back at Bokras, I see he does need some nerfing. Gonna lower his attack and increase his summoning requirements. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 9, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2015 Bump ^^ Added three monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2015 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 10, 2015 Report Share Posted October 10, 2015 Superb idea, man. I love the detail put into these creatures, what with them being based off of ancient creatures of the sea back when land wasn't a thing. However, I notice you only really have 3 bosses. While that's fine, if you don't want as expansive an archetype as some out there, I'd recommend adding some more bosses, or perhaps minions (though, in my opinion, you have plenty) to the archetype. Boss ideas: Thalassomedon - Name is Greek for "sea lord". It's flippers were about 7 feet long themselves and were generally 40 feet long. Lived during the Cretaceous period. Used stones from the bottom of the ocean as ballast and for grinding up food. ATTRIBUTE - Water; LEVEL - 3; ATK: 1800 / DEF: 1200 [sea Serpent / Effect] - "Leviathan Thalasso" http://sportfishingweekly.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/06/Thalassomedon.jpg - The Pic. Eff: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing three "Leviathan" monsters from your hand with different names. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, banish it instead. While you have no cards in your Graveyard, this card cannot be targeted or destroyed by your opponents cards or effects. Once per turn, you may banish one "Leviathan" monster from your hand: target one monster your opponent controls: pay 1000 Life Points, equip it to this card. This card gains attack equal to half the attack of the equipped monster. If Leviathan Thalasso would be removed from the field, you may destroy the equipped monster instead. You can only control one face-up Leviathan Thalasso at any given time. Liopleurodon - Name is Greek for "smooth-sided skin". It was the apex predator during the Jurrasic period, and was one of the largest hunters of its time. An ambush hunter, it was a slow swimmer, but had powerful attacks with its jaw, and its acceleration is believed to have been incredible. ATTRIBUTE - Water; LEVEL - 5; ATK: 3200 / DEF: 100 [sea Serpent (Or Reptile. Dunno) / Effect] - "Leviathan Liopeur" https://commandpluszed.files.wordpress.com/2012/04/liopleurodon_bw.jpg - The Pic Eff: Cannot be Normal Summoned/Set. You can Special Summon this card by banishing five "Leviathan" monsters from your hand or field. When this card would be Special Summoned by this effect, send it to the Graveyard. If this card would be sent to the Graveyard, except by its own effect, remove it from play. You may not move this card from the banished zone, except by the effect of a "Leviathan" monster. If it is moved from the banished zone, halve your Life Points. It cannot be effected by other card's effects while in the Graveyard, except for its own. During your opponent's 2nd Standby Phase after this card was sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon it, and if you do, destroy cards on the field equal to half this card's level (rounded down). You may only control one face-up Leviathan Liopeur at any given time. Hope this helps! I have some Spell / Trap ideas too, if you need any. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 10, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 10, 2015 Thanks for the bosses! I edited their effects a little, and changed their names to have an "as" at the end (Because that is a running theme for this deck). Great ideas! Thanks also for the compliment in general, and yes, I would be keen to see other ideas for this deck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 10, 2015 Report Share Posted October 10, 2015 Only came up with two Spells as of now, but I think they're pretty decent. Spell - "Fast-Forward Flash Flood"Spell Type: Normal Pic - http://f1.bcbits.com/img/a3008797779_10.jpg "Activate only if you have no Monster Cards in your Graveyard. Target one non-Tuner WATER Monster in your Banished Zone. Special Summon that Monster. During the End Phase, shuffle that card into your Deck, and if you do, take damage equal to that monster's level x200" Basically a Viper's Rebirth for your deck but your cards don't get banished later for Primordias to use, so, if you XYZ summon using the Monster, you kind of go minus. Also, you take 600 points of damage to you Life Points. Spell - "Primodial Soup Dip"Spell Type: Normal Pic - http://game.speldesign.uu.se/wp-content/uploads/2008/11/deep-ocean003.jpg "Add one Level 3 WATER Attribute "Leviathan" Monster from your deck to your hand." Simple and to the point. ROTA for your deck. After all, speed IS indeed key. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2015 Added both, changed the picture of Primoridal though, because it didn't fit with the other pictures. Thanks for the cards and for your help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 11, 2015 Report Share Posted October 11, 2015 Awesome. I love how your archetype is turning out! I'm sure you'll make even better cards for it. Great work on the archetype, man! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 11, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 11, 2015 Thanks for the support! I also hope I'll make better cards for it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 12, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 12, 2015 Bump! Added a Rank-Up-Magic along with some new cards in the Extra! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 12, 2015 Report Share Posted October 12, 2015 Here's a boss monster idea I had (I'm just following your stead with the XYZ guys, since it appeared to me you're making Rank'd-Up versions of already existing XYZs): Leviathan Carrier Sub-Nautica ATTRIBUTE - Water; RANK- 4; ATK: 2200 / DEF: 1200 [Fish / Effect] - 3 Level 4 WATER Monsters The Pic - http://rendragonclaw.deviantart.com/art/Dryton-2-Stats-170623328 Effect: "Xyz Materials detached from this card are banished instead. If this card in your possession would go the Graveyard, banish it instead. Once per turn, you can detatch one XYZ Material: Gain Life Points equal to this card's Defense. If this card has "Submersible Carrier Aero Shark" as an XYZ Material, it gains this effect:-Once per turn, you can detatch one XYZ Material from this card: Inflict damage to your opponent's Life Points equal to the number of banished "Leviathan" Monsters in your Banished Zone. x200". And here's a trap! Ensnare Trap - Normal The Pic - http://www.desktopwallpapers4.me/fantasy/crab-monster-crushing-a-ship-at-sea-10842/ Effect: "Once per turn, if you have no Monster Cards in your Graveyard, target one WATER Attribute monster you control and one card your opponent controls: send the first card to the Graveyard and if you do, banish the second card. After this effect resolves, banish one Spell/Trap card from your hand or side of the field." EDIT - Fixed wording issues with XYZ monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2015 Looks good! Quick question about your Xyz though, how come it sends to the graveyard for the second effect? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 13, 2015 Report Share Posted October 13, 2015 Because before doing damage calculations I thought the XYZ was MUCH more powerful. I mean, I honestly thought that you'd be able to have enough cards in the Banished Zone to use his effect and FTK, but then I did my calculations, and you'd need, get this, 40 Leviatian's in your Banished Zone to deal 8000 damage. I've changed the card text, however. Also edited the Trap, since the cost seemed a bit ridiculous. EDIT: Also fixed the XYZ's Rank. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 13, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 13, 2015 The Xyz also had another problem which confused me at first "number of banished "Leviathan" monsters in your graveyard." But it doesn't matter, I'm working on the cards now. Thanks again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sluggaholic Posted October 13, 2015 Report Share Posted October 13, 2015 Lol mistakes happen. I fixed it, though, so I don't look like an imbecile. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dova Posted October 14, 2015 Author Report Share Posted October 14, 2015 Bump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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AlchemistEsdeath Posted November 24, 2015 Report Share Posted November 24, 2015 This is really awesome!Do you mind if I send you my additions?I made some Leviathans as well.Not as good as yours though XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted November 24, 2015 Report Share Posted November 24, 2015 This is really awesome!Do you mind if I send you my additions?I made some Leviathans as well.Not as good as yours though XD1. You necrobumped this after a month. 2. Broke the Advanced Clause.In essence, supposed to give a detailed opinion on why you like/dislike the cards in question. So yeah, LOCK.But you can probably PM Dova if he'll allow you to add stuff. (Perhaps you two should consider a collab) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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