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Jinzo The Cybernetic Psychic Archfiend


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Level 6 type psychic, ATT Dark ATK:2400 DEF:1500 Effect: This Monster's type is also treated as both "Machine" and "Fiend" types. Trap Cards, and their effects on the field, cannot be activated. Negate all Trap Card effects on the field. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by sending one Trap Card you control to the grave. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each Trap Card in both player's graveyard. Jinzo_zps3cjc0xl0.jpg

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I suggest you read the method of posting card images and Lore in the Questions & Help Section, because the description can be analogised as  a messy piece of rummage.

A bit wording correction: 

 

 

 Effect: This Monster's type is also treated as both "Machine" and "Fiend" types. Trap Cards, and their effects on the field, cannot be activated.While this card is face-up in the field, Trap cards cannot be activated. Negate all Trap Card effects on the field. You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by sending one Trap Card you control to the grave .by discarding one Trap card you control to the graveyard. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each Trap Card in both player's graveyard

Plus it's summoning condition is ridiculously easy, since it only needs one Trap card, I suggest weakening this into at least two trap cards, to make it more balanced.


Tip: to post a card image, click the image of the card in the card editor(maker) then copy the URL, paste it into your post for a quick finish

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I tried copying the url but it wouldnt allow me to so I had to go to photo bucket in order to do so. I just wanted to make a more badass version of Jnizo honestly how about I add paying 1000 life points on top of the send one trap to the grave? The reason I picked send one is to make better use of dead trap cards such as call of the haunted

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I tried copying the url but it wouldnt allow me to so I had to go to photo bucket in order to do so. I just wanted to make a more badass version of Jnizo honestly how about I add paying 1000 life points on top of the send one trap to the grave? The reason I picked send one is to make better use of dead trap cards such as call of the haunted

Summoning conditions or effects aways go first:

 

You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by sending 1 Trap card you control to the Graveyard. While face-up on the field or in the Graveyard, this card is also Machine and Fiend-Type. Trap cards and their effects in the field, cannot be activated. Negate all Trap Card effects on the field. This card gains 100 ATK and DEF for each Trap Card in either player's Graveyard.

I suggest you read the method of posting card images and Lore in the Questions & Help Section, because the description can be analogised as  a messy piece of rummage.

A bit wording correction: 

Plus it's summoning condition is ridiculously easy, since it only needs one Trap card, I suggest weakening this into at least two trap cards, to make it more balanced.

Tip: to post a card image, click the image of the card in the card editor(maker) then copy the URL, paste it into your post for a quick finish

Continious effects dont state "While this card is face up on the field" (except for a few exceptions, like changing something of the card itslef) anymore, its redundant.

Discarding is only from the hand, "you control states" its on the field so send it was correct

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Just keep in mind that you have to add your own comments and stuff about the card in question; things related to how rulings go and stuff (along with OCG fixes don't count).

 

But yeah, at present, card's summon condition is a bit too easy (though yes, you can use up dead CoTH or whatever else; even Chains if you need to), especially given that it will pump itself based on the amount of Trap Cards in the graveyards.

 

Other than that, rest of the stuff is standard Jinzo business.

 

how about I add paying 1000 life points on top of the send one trap to the grave? The reason I picked send one is to make better use of dead trap cards such as call of the haunted

You can add a LP cost of sorts if you want.

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