Distant Fate Dragon, Pansika

[Atypical-Abbie]

A Rank 9 that you can Summon using any number of Rank 8s, as long as you use a LIGHT one as well. It has protection and an effect that changes the effects of monsters on your opponent's field. In case you're wondering about the slash, it's a relatively new thing, see Beatrice, Lady of the Eternal.

 

2 Level 9 monsters / You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control, including at least 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster(s) also become Xyz Materials on this card.) This card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects while it has an Xyz Material attached that was originally LIGHT. Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a monster on your opponent's field activates an effect: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; the activated effect becomes "during the End Phase, banish this card."

[Atypical-Abbie]

Bump (also made a little update)

[Thomas★Zero]

I think text wise the you done have the summoning condition then go / right onto the effect.

 

other than that its ability to change card effects into banishing them at the end-phase is intresting.

 

Also you might want to fix where it say 1 LIGHT X Monster into 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster

[Atypical-Abbie]

I think text wise the you done have the summoning condition then go / right onto the effect.

 

other than that its ability to change card effects into banishing them at the end-phase is intresting.

 

Also you might want to fix where it say 1 LIGHT X Monster into 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster

I have no idea what the first thing you said means. Also, fixing that mistake ASAP.

[Thomas★Zero]

I have no idea what the first thing you said means. Also, fixing that mistake ASAP.

I mean for that first line it should be...

 

2 Level 9 monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control, including at least 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster(s) also become Xyz Materials on this card.)

 

Not...

 

2 Level 9 monsters / You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control, including at least 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster(s) also become Xyz Materials on this card.)

[Atypical-Abbie]

I mean for that first line it should be...

 

2 Level 9 monsters

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control, including at least 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster(s) also become Xyz Materials on this card.)

 

Not...

 

2 Level 9 monsters / You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monster you control, including at least 1 LIGHT Xyz Monster as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to that monster(s) also become Xyz Materials on this card.)

Please read the first post before you post, it will make comments like this unnecessary.

[Azuriena]

Please read the first post before you post, it will make comments like this unnecessary.

 

I'm not sure Pansika's text is long enough to warrant the slash (Beatrice's is significantly longer and appears much more squished when there is no slash), especially in the template that you used in which the font size is a lot smaller than usual. You even have space in where the 8th line should be, so there should be no problem taking the extra line?

 

Obligatory AC: A new Rank 9 Xyz Monster. It's Wyrm-Type, so that means we would have more Wyrms to play with, which is nice. It can Rank-Up by using a Rank 8 Xyz Monster, so it's easier to Xyz Summon. It retains the Xyz Materials if you Xyz Summon it this way. If you use the right Xyz Materials it can't be destroyed by card effects, so your opponent can't destroy it with card effects. It can change your opponent's monster effects, so your opponent's monster effects can be changed by its effect, but it costs 1 Xyz Material. :^)

 

You can also Xyz Summon this card by using any number of Rank 8 Xyz Monsters[1] you control, including at least 1 LIGHT monster[2],[3] as the Xyz Material. (Xyz Materials attached to those monsters[4] also become Xyz Materials on this card.) Cannot[5] be destroyed by an[6] opponent's card effects while it has an Xyz Material attached that was originally LIGHT. Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a monster your opponent controls[7] activates its[8] effect: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; the activated effect becomes "banish this card[9] during the End Phase"[10].

 

[1] "Any number of" should be matched with the plural.

[2] It's not necessary to specify Xyz Monsters when it cannot be anything but. That said, it may be alright to.

[4] Because the monsters it refers to is plural, this too can be.

[5] "This card" is omitted preceding "cannot".

[7] In this case, you would use "your opponent controls" rather than "on your opponent's field". You would use "on your opponent's field" if the activation conditions were more along the lines of "Once per turn, during either player's turn, when a monster effect is activated on your opponent's field."

[10] Closing quotation marks in an effect are before the full stop. See Durendal.