Dreko Posted October 22, 2016 Report Share Posted October 22, 2016 [spoiler=Main Characters] [spoiler=Spells/Traps] Credit to original artist. (I did not make any of the art) I got them from so many artist the list would be too long to name. Most were from DeviantArt if not all. Please give feedback :) No I am not finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 22, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2016 Any feedback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 23, 2016 Report Share Posted October 23, 2016 Please realize that there is a 12-hour minimum period between topic bumps if no one else but you has posted. You cannot expect members to automatically comment on your cards; be patient and wait. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 23, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2016 T-T sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thepopon8r Posted October 24, 2016 Report Share Posted October 24, 2016 Okay, might as well review all the current cards one by one Alphys: Straight up broken. Three of staple in any machine-type deck. Needs to be nerfed Froggit: Eh. Effect's fine. Free rank 3 is always good. Also, you can't normal summon in defense position. Asgore: A 3000 beatstick that instantly destroys anything with lower attack. Eh. It's outclassed by a whole bunch of level fours. Napstablook: Eh. I think the 2500 DEF is a little high for a level 4 though. Loox: Straight up broken. Three of staple in any spell reliant deck. Needs to be nerfed Chara: Can't really fully judge it since Asriel isn't a thing yet, but at it's current state, this card is basically useless. Frisk: Eh. It's okay. Maybe lower the ATK a bit? Mettaton: Generic level 7 Vanilla. Serves no purpose. Papyrus: Straight up broken. Draw 2 cards clause needs to be removed. Sans: Decent hand trap. Fine as is. Synchro Sans: Lower that ATK. If it wasn't for that generic 5k beater, this card would be useless, as neither of it's effects are really all that good. Toriel: Eh. Free special summon is nice, i guess Undyne: Barely serves a purpose. Effect is mediocre at best. Stats horrible. Brothers: Garbage. Literally no reason to ever have Sans on the field. Effect too situational Erase: Straight up broken. 3 of staple in any deck. Needs nerf. Genocide: Free special summon, and a pretty high attack boost. Maybe nerf it a bit? Missed: Garbage. Too situational an effect, and there are numerous other battle traps i could run instead of that. Shortcut: Where does the Level 6 come from? The Deck? The Hand? Either way, this effect is way too situational, and you could just run Compulsory instead. Seven Souls: Garbage. Equip is to specific, and doesn't do anything good that other equip spells don't do do better. Unforgivable: Again, too specific an effect. True Pacifist: I flat out do not understand what this card does. You need to fix that text really badly. Underground: I would probably run this in a combat centered Beast deck. Probably the best and most balanced card of them, besides maybe Sans So overall, the cards are either incredibly underpowered, or incredibly overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0PxPz0 Posted October 24, 2016 Report Share Posted October 24, 2016 so just wondering, why is Mettaton Ex a normal monster (also you used a picture of Mettaton Neo for it)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 24, 2016 Report Share Posted October 24, 2016 so just wondering, why is Mettaton Ex a normal monster (also you used a picture of Mettaton Neo for it)? Once you get a reply from the thread creator, make sure you review the rest of the cards properly as per the Advanced Clause; thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 25, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 Okay, might as well review all the current cards one by one Alphys: Straight up broken. Three of staple in any machine-type deck. Needs to be nerfed Froggit: Eh. Effect's fine. Free rank 3 is always good. Also, you can't normal summon in defense position. Asgore: A 3000 beatstick that instantly destroys anything with lower attack. Eh. It's outclassed by a whole bunch of level fours. Napstablook: Eh. I think the 2500 DEF is a little high for a level 4 though. Loox: Straight up broken. Three of staple in any spell reliant deck. Needs to be nerfed Chara: Can't really fully judge it since Asriel isn't a thing yet, but at it's current state, this card is basically useless. Frisk: Eh. It's okay. Maybe lower the ATK a bit? Mettaton: Generic level 7 Vanilla. Serves no purpose. Papyrus: Straight up broken. Draw 2 cards clause needs to be removed. Sans: Decent hand trap. Fine as is. Synchro Sans: Lower that ATK. If it wasn't for that generic 5k beater, this card would be useless, as neither of it's effects are really all that good. Toriel: Eh. Free special summon is nice, i guess Undyne: Barely serves a purpose. Effect is mediocre at best. Stats horrible. Brothers: Garbage. Literally no reason to ever have Sans on the field. Effect too situational Erase: Straight up broken. 3 of staple in any deck. Needs nerf. Genocide: Free special summon, and a pretty high attack boost. Maybe nerf it a bit? Missed: Garbage. Too situational an effect, and there are numerous other battle traps i could run instead of that. Shortcut: Where does the Level 6 come from? The Deck? The Hand? Either way, this effect is way too situational, and you could just run Compulsory instead. Seven Souls: Garbage. Equip is to specific, and doesn't do anything good that other equip spells don't do do better. Unforgivable: Again, too specific an effect. True Pacifist: I flat out do not understand what this card does. You need to fix that text really badly. Underground: I would probably run this in a combat centered Beast deck. Probably the best and most balanced card of them, besides maybe Sans So overall, the cards are either incredibly underpowered, or incredibly overpowered. Ah, I see, Will do. I'm not a good enough card maker right now, This feedback helps me a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 25, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 so just wondering, why is Mettaton Ex a normal monster (also you used a picture of Mettaton Neo for it)?Crap you're right I did. It's a normal monster because I couldn't think of a good effect for someone like Mettaton Ex. I have to go back and play through Undertale Pacifist and Genocide to fully understand her. Its been a while since I played. And I still have so many monsters to do. But I have to fix these first.I'll have these problems fixed tommorow. Once again thanks for the feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
0PxPz0 Posted October 25, 2016 Report Share Posted October 25, 2016 Crap you're right I did. It's a normal monster because I couldn't think of a good effect for someone like Mettaton Ex. I have to go back and play through Undertale Pacifist and Genocide to fully understand her. Its been a while since I played. And I still have so many monsters to do. But I have to fix these first.I'll have these problems fixed tommorow. Once again thanks for the feedback(not a big deal but mettatons male) as far as an effect i'd make it require a tribute of regular mettaton and base it's effects of the original form, same for Neo if you intend on making that form although Noe should be more of a glass jaw if your giving effects with flavor, as far as the others there's not much i can add to what thepopon8r said except that the cards don't really have much synergy going and the human typing is pretty much pointless, you could just use warrior and accomplish the same thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 26, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2016 (not a big deal but mettatons male) as far as an effect i'd make it require a tribute of regular mettaton and base it's effects of the original form, same for Neo if you intend on making that form although Noe should be more of a glass jaw if your giving effects with flavor, as far as the others there's not much i can add to what thepopon8r said except that the cards don't really have much synergy going and the human typing is pretty much pointless, you could just use warrior and accomplish the same thingThanks. Will Do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dreko Posted October 29, 2016 Author Report Share Posted October 29, 2016 I havent had time to edit them but they will be edited soon. Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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