Burden of the Fearsome

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Name: Burden of the Fearsome

Text: Decrease all the ATK of xyz monsters by their original rank x100.

So a "Burden of the Mighty" for xyz monsters.

Please comment. :)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Considering it's a Xyz clone of Mighty, not much to really say about it. That being said, it is slightly less effective because the most commonly spammed Rank is 4, and the drop isn't too bad. I mean, it hits Trains and other high Rank decks hard, but they usually have enough power regardless to win anyway.

[Eshai]

This card is a little underpowered

For one Link Monsters are going to be a thing and they don't even have a Level/Rank

There's also the fact (as Sakura mentioned above) that typically it's going to be used against Rank 4s

 

I would make it a bit different, like increasing the multiplier to 200, making it affect levels as well, and making it so depending on the Rank of xyz monsters your opponent controls it would gain additional effects. You could also turn it into a Trap to differentiate it from Mighty. Here would be an example card:

 

Burden of the Fearsome

Continuous Trap

All Xyz monsters your opponent controls have their ATK decreased by their Rank x 200. 

If your opponent controls a Rank 4 or lower Xyz monster, gain the following effect:

- Negate the effects of all Special Summoned monsters your opponent controls.

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I was thinking about changing the decrease in ATK to 200, but then the "Gimmick Puppet" xyz monsters would be crushed. (My favorite archetype)

The trap card is also a good idea.

Thanks for help. :)