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ChronosCrowler Newbie

ChronosCrowler

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Uhmm...Yankeee? Stats altering means status just like yours but you use ATK and DEF alteration, but for me i used 1 big packed of major Status altering! which are card alteration, life points alteration, graveyard alteration and monster number alteration ^_^...

And oh like yours i posted mine in the realistic section and many commented on this that it has perfect OCG so i jsut can't see why there are OCG and Grammar errors^_^!!!(But lets leave ryan to the judge of that ^_^)

 

Heres the thread! if you want to see it!

http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=44733

 

And as for Aznwhitey! post a card for our Tie Breaker! ^_^!!

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Yankee Apprentice

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Crowler, I have found all of your errors:

 

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 monsters with "Arcana" in it's name that you control to the Graveyard. If this card is successfully summoned it gains the following effects: ●During your Draw Phase(before you draw)' date=' your opponent guesses the top card on your [b']deck[/b], if correct, discard the top 2 cards on your deck. but if wrong Where is the commah?apply the appropriate effect according to the picked up card Where did it say that you pic up a card?: Monster - Destroy 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field, Spell - Increase your Life Points by 1000, Trap - your opponent discards cards from his/her hand until he/she has 2 cards left(if your opponent has 2 cards or less, he/she discards her entire hand). ●During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, apply the appropriate effect with reference to the top card on your opponent's graveyard: Monster - Inflict 100 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points according to the no. of monsters on his/her side of the field, Spell - Draw 1 card, Trap - Send the top card on your deck to the graveyard. ●When this monster battles an opponent's monster, if your opponent controls more face-up monsters than you control, destroy the monster that this card battles with it's effect without THE APPLYING DAMAGE CALCULATIONcalculating damage. ●During each player's End Phase, both players must send the top cards from their respective decks to the graveyard. ●As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field, any of your own cards that is sent to the graveyard is removed from play.

 

Bolded area's are the errors in the effect.

 

Graveyard and Deck must be capped, and you forgot a commah, and you forgot to cap the first word in a sentance. That just grammar ;)

You had an ocg error with the part about "Without calculating damage"

It's, "Without applying Damage Calculation"

 

 

Anyway, it's a nice card, just has some errors ;)

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ChronosCrowler Newbie

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Oh so thats it XD so much for perfect OCG!!!^_^!!!Well thats life! Lets wait for ryans and results for our contest ^_^Oh by the way I did mentioned the card picking! here it is since it's under the 1st effect^_^"During your Draw Phase(before you draw), your opponent guesses the top card on your deck"

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MarxMayhem Newbie

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Can I be a judge? I've been out for like a lifetime so I wanna make a good comeback.

 

Here is how I judge:

 

Name: The name should symbolize the card's power or characteristics. 20%

Effect: Is it useful? Does it have any reference to the name and image? 25%

Image: Does it show the ability or characteristics of the card? 20%

Balance: Can it be used with other cards without being chained into a Monster Combo? 35%

Overall: Could this card get a shot on becoming an actual card?

 

Here is a previous card I made:

 

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Ultimate Ryan Newbie

Ultimate Ryan

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Yankee - Your card is basically the definition of stat altering!

10/10 on follow guidelines

10/10 on image

9/10 on fairness maybe a little overpowered?

10/10 on OCG seems prefect!

10/10 on overall works together

49/50 or 98% for your total!

 

Chronos - Your card does a bit of altering but it follows rules!

10/10 on follows guidelines

9/10 on pic - looks a little squished

9/10 on fairness like Yankee a little overpowered? make it normal summoned not special

10/10 on OCG seems perfect

10/10 on overall works together! it seems like a real card!

48/50 or 96%

 

Yankee wins by a hair! GG and please battle again, it was great!

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ChronosCrowler Newbie

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Ok! since you used a old card! Ill use mine!!!^_^

The Ultimate Arcana! with tons of effect that includes almost all kinds of status alteration!!!Ive edited this a little to get the overpowering out!^_^Hope you liek it!

 

-------------------Arcana Force EX - The Harbringer-----------------------

-------------------Arcana Force EX - The Harbringer

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Card Text:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 3 monsters with "Arcana" in it's name that you control to the Graveyard. If this card is successfully summoned it gains the following effects: ●During your Draw Phase(before you draw), your opponent guesses the top card on your Deck, if correct, discard the top 2 cards on your Deck. but if wrong apply the appropriate effect according to the picked up card: Monster - Destroy 2 cards on your opponent's side of the field, Spell - Increase your Life Points by 1000, Trap - your opponent discards cards from his/her hand until he/she has 2 cards left(if your opponent has 2 cards or less, he/she discards her entire hand). ●During each of your opponent's Standby Phases, apply the appropriate effect with reference to the top card on your opponent's Graveyard: Monster - Inflict 100 points of direct damage to your opponent's Life Points according to the no. of monsters on his/her side of the field, Spell - Draw 1 card, Trap - Send the top card on your Deck to the Graveyard. ●When this monster battles an opponent's monster, if your opponent controls more face-up monsters than you control, destroy the monster that this card battles with it's effect without applying damage calculation. ●During each player's End Phase, both players must send the top cards from their respective Decks to the Graveyard. ●As long as this monster is face-up on your side of the field, any of your own cards that is sent to the Graveyard is removed from play.

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Trivia

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Harbringer - A harbinger is a sign of things to come. Throughout history and literature, harbingers and omens figure prominently, and are responsible for major decisions which have altered the course of both.

The Image of this card is based on "Apostolos" A mythical God that is known as "God Of Prediction".

 

Other Information:

He is the Son of Archon and Apollymi, he is the the Messanger, or Harbringer, the God who calls about Telikos.. the end of the world. He was destined to be his mothers heart, and aid her in her destructive ways. But, when the Fates told Archon he would destroy their pantheon, Archon demaned Apollymi kill the fetus in order to protect them all. She refused, hideing him on Earth, and givng Archon a stone in turn. Furious and scared they imprisoned Apollymi and cursed Apostolos to death.. Its belived he perished with Atlantis.. but others say he survied.. taken to Europe and hidden, maybe even the founder of the region Basque

Apollymi

Goddess of Life, Death and Wisdom. She is the daughter of Chaos (formless matter that birthed the universe) and Zenobi (Atlantean north wind). She has many names: The Destroyer, The Bringer, The Giver, Biosia (life), Thanata (Death), Magisa (Wisdom), And Fonia (The Killer). Shes vain and Capriciois, but she is the most powerful of all the Atlanteans, and can only be controled by her husband, and half brother, Archon. She travles on the wind and can strike her victems down in an instant. Those that are about to die are said to see her merciless pale eyes right before the end. Shes a Goddess of contradictions, shes loving and kind one moment then brutal and cold the next. No one is safe from her wrath. The other Gods, fearful of her vindictive nature, combined their powers and imprisioned her in Kolasia (a hellish plane between dimensions). Of her release there are only myths, some say only the sacrifice of an Atlantean's blood can free her, others say that only by the hand of her lost son Apostolos that can do this. Because of her imprisonment she alone escaped death when the other gods were destroyed... and she sits in her prision waiting her release so she can wreak havoc on Earth and bring Telikos.. the end of the world..

 

Archon

Son of Chaos (the formless matter that birthed the universe) and Fegkia (Splendor) he was born to rule the Atlantean pantheon. He gave order where there was Chaos. Atlantis was made when Fysia spun strands of his hair, and her blood fertalized the earth, creathing the blood-red Fysian Lilies that could only thrive on Atlantean soil. Overwhelmed by the beauty his sister created, he wept, and where his tears fell the Atlantean race came. He too has many names, like his wife Apollymi: Kosmetas (order), Soter (Savior), and Theokos (the Devine one). The God of extreme paitence and kindness he is the exact opposite of his wife, the balance that she needed so the universe could be maintained. He, unlike other Gods, was always faithful to his wife, and adored her. He watched his people and children with benediction and care, and when Zeus banished Apollos Apollite race to his lands he welcomed them, causeing strife between the two sets of Gods. Though, when his wrath was envoked he was every bit as ruthless as Apollymi. When Deridians attacked Atlantis and saked Kanosis (the capital), he struck their country with his thorn hammer, destroying every man woman and child who bore their blood. He perished with the other gods... though it is said Apostolos, if ever found, has the ability to raise his father from the dead and return him to his throne...

 

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Did you know?

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- The Arcana Force monsters are derived from Tarot Cards

- All of the Arcana Force monsters whose number is given in Roman Numerals have an ATK and DEF of 1000 plus the respective number in their name x 100.

- The Arcana Force monsters are a series of monster with "Arcana Force" in their names and their support spell and trap cards. The monsters are based on the "Major Arcana" tarot cards, each possessing a different symbolic meaning while the spell and trap cards come in the form of the "Minor Arcana" tarot cards. The monsters often attribute with coin flips to activate their effects. "Arcana Force EX - The Light Ruler", "Arcana Force EX - THE DARK RULER" and "Arcana Force EX - The Harbringer" are the only ones which are not based on tarot cards.

- "Arcana Force EX - The Harbringer" is the only Arcana Force monster created that doesn't have coin effects.

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