Mrcool210 Posted February 21, 2019 Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 I decided to make an archetype for The Hulk, I know that it's "cringy" to do it with a pop culture thing, but I thought there was potential, tell me what you guys think of the abilities. Any tips would be appreciated to make the cards better. If you want pictures of all the cards I will post them here. https://imgur.com/a/CyBgnoS Monsters: Name: Bruce BannerType: SpellcasterLevel: 2ATK/DEF: 500/1000Effect: If this card is Summoned you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle or card effect you can Special Summon one "Hulk" monster in your hand. Only 1 Bruce Banner can be on the field at a time. Name: Rick JonesType SpellcasterLevel: 3ATK/DEF: 1000/0Effect:You can send this card to the Graveyard; Add 1 Spell/Trap card that lists "Hulk" in its Card text from your Deck to your Hand. Name: The Red She-HulkType: BeastLevel: 4ATK/DEF: 1500/2500Effect: Once per Turn you can Increase your Life Points by 500 points for each "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field including this card. Name: The She-HulkType: BeastLevel: 4Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is Summoned you can add 1 "Bruce Banner" from your deck to your hand. Name: The Totally Awesome HulkType: BeastLevel: 8ATK/DEF: 2500/2500Effect: Once Per Turn, You can Discard 1 Card that specifically lists the card "Hulk" in its text from your hand to draw 2 cards from your deck. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY Name: The Grey HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 2500/2500Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Monsters on your opponents side of the field lose 500 ATK for every "Hulk" Monster with a different name on your side of the field. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY Name: The Savage HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card gains 500 ATK for every monster destroyed while it remains on the field. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. Name: The Immortal HulkType: Beast Level 10:ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This monster gains 500 ATK for every "Hulk" Monster with a different name in your GY. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. Name: The Red HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During each of your Standby Phases: Inflict 300 points of damage to both players. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. Fusions: Name: The Professor HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Savage Hulk"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Your opponent cannot target Spells/Traps you control with card effects, also they cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY Name: The Joe Fixit HulkType: Beast WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Grey Hulk"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You may Discard 1 Card to add 1 Spell/Trap card that lists "Hulk" in its Card text from your Deck to your Hand. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY Name: The Maestro HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Savage Hulk" + "The Grey Hulk"This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Once per turn: You can banish 1 "Hulk" monster from your Graveyard; this card gains 500 ATK, and until the End Phase it also gains the banished monster's effects. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY RITUALS: Name: The Worldbreaker HulkType: Beast WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Control". Must be Ritual Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You can pay Half of your Life Points; send as many cards in both players' hands and on the field as possible to the GY, then inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card sent to the opponent's GY by this effect. You cannot activate other cards or effects during the turn you activate this card's effect. Name: The Devil HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF 3500/3500Effect: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Control". Must be Ritual Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.This card cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is Summoned You must pay 1000 LP . You can Tribute 1 face-up "Hulk" monster; this card gains ATK equal to the Tributed monster's ATK, until the End Phase. Spells: Name: ControlType: Ritual SpellEffect: This card can be used to Ritual Summon any "Hulk" Ritual Monster. You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field and/or banish "Bruce Banner" or "Hulk" from your GY, whose total Levels equal the Level of the "Hulk" Ritual Monster you Ritual Summon. Name: The Green DoorType: Field SpellEffect: Once per turn you can pay 1500 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your Hand, or GY Name: Gamma FieldType: Field SpellEffect: Every "Hulk" Monster You Control gains 500 ATK points for every other "Hulk" Monster on the field. If a "Hulk" monster(s) you control would be destroyed by card effect, you can banish 2 cards from the top of your Deck, face-down, for each of those monster(s) instead. Name: Inner TurmoilType: Continuous SpellEffect: You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your hand. If "Bruce Banner" is on the field Tribute it instead. You may only use the effect of "Inner Turmoil" once per turn. Name: The Green TeamType: Normal SpellEffect: If you control any "Hulk" Monster Pay 2000 LP and skip your Battle Phase: Special Summon 1 "The She-Hulk" or "The Red She-Hulk" from your hand, Deck, or GY, You can only Activate the effect of "The Green Team" once per turn. Name: Gamma InfusionType: Equip SpellEffect: If you control "Gamma Field", equip to an opponent's monster. Take control of it. It is treated as a "Hulk" monster. It cannot be Destroyed in Battle. If "Gamma Field" is not on the field, destroy this card. Name: Rage From Beyond The GraveType: Equip SpellEffect: Activate this card by paying 2000 LP and discarding 1 "Hulk" card from your Hand to the GY, then target 1 monster in either players GY; Special Summon that target in Attack Position and equip it with this card. This Monster's name becomes "Bruce Banner" and cannot attack. Name: Strongest There Is!Type: Equip SpellEffect: Equip this Card to 1 "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field. Gain ATK Points equal to the Level of that monster x 500 When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card. Name: Hulk Smash!Type: Quickplay SpellEffect: If you control 1 "Hulk" Monster Toss a coin:● Heads: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.● Tails: Destroy all cards you control. Traps: Name: Gamma AbsorptionType: Counter TrapEffect:If a Spell/Trap Card is activated: Tribute 1 "Hulk" Monster negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card. Name: Gamma-HealType: Normal TrapEffect: Tribute 1 "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field. Gain Life Points equal to the level of that monster x 300 Name: Quick To AngerType: Normal TrapEffect: Tribute 1 Bruce Banner on the field. Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your GY. It is destroyed at the End Phase of this Turn. Name: Gamma StudyType Normal TrapEffect: Your Opponent must discard 1 card in their hand for each "Hulk" Monster in your GY And there you have it. My Archetype that I spent several days making. I would appreciate any feedback on how to make the cards better. Thanks for looking this over and have a great night :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryusei the Morning Star Posted February 21, 2019 Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 First of all, Battle effects are too slow for 2019, make it so they all work if sent to the grave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrcool210 Posted February 21, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 First of all, Battle effects are too slow for 2019, make it so they all work if sent to the grave What do you mean exactly? Like could you use one of the cards as an example? I just don't get the terminology fully. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryusei the Morning Star Posted February 21, 2019 Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 Name: Bruce BannerType: SpellcasterLevel: 2ATK/DEF: 500/1000Effect: If this card is Summoned you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle or card effect you can Special Summon one "Hulk" monster in your hand. Only 1 Bruce Banner can be on the field at a time. This is way too weak and slow man. If This card is summoned: you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. If this card is sent to the graveyard: you can special summon one "Hulk" monster. You can only use each effect of "Bruce Banner" once per turn.Tell you what, I'll help you buff them all up tomorrow :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrcool210 Posted February 21, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 Name: Bruce BannerType: SpellcasterLevel: 2ATK/DEF: 500/1000Effect: If this card is Summoned you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle or card effect you can Special Summon one "Hulk" monster in your hand. Only 1 Bruce Banner can be on the field at a time. This is way too weak and slow man. If This card is summoned: you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. If this card is sent to the graveyard: you can special summon one "Hulk" monster. You can only use each effect of "Bruce Banner" once per turn.Tell you what, I'll help you buff them all up tomorrow :) Sounds good man, it's very appreciated :). Although to be fair with Bruce Banner I have other cards that can get Bruce Banner removed from the field and summon a Hulk out. But still I'd love any kind of tips I can get :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dougtheloremaster Posted February 21, 2019 Report Share Posted February 21, 2019 I have to agree, especially the once per turn clause. The way your effects are worded essentially opens them to abuse by multiple uses per turn. Destroy by battle is a bit slow and has an awkward timing as well, easy to miss. Hitting the GY is a much easier and quite honestly faster resolve for an effect to pull off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrcool210 Posted February 22, 2019 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2019 I have to agree, especially the once per turn clause. The way your effects are worded essentially opens them to abuse by multiple uses per turn. Destroy by battle is a bit slow and has an awkward timing as well, easy to miss. Hitting the GY is a much easier and quite honestly faster resolve for an effect to pull off.Don't worry, I agree too. I have been spending a lot more time updating the cards. Banner especially has been updated. You can see their updated effects here. https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=3172278 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dougtheloremaster Posted February 23, 2019 Report Share Posted February 23, 2019 Don't worry, I agree too. I have been spending a lot more time updating the cards. Banner especially has been updated. You can see their updated effects here. https://www.duelingbook.com/deck?id=3172278gamma study....in a vacuum it works completely but splash in certain mill cards already in the game and that becomes a bit too easy to lock an opponents hand. "card destruction" is currently banned and that eliminated both players hand. this card has no true risk to you. Grave returns are pretty simple to perform nowadays. As a normal speed it can't chain so that makes it quite a bit harder to pull off. Hmmm that might actually balance with the gain now that i think of it. Leave it. Your engine looks a LOT more balanced and realistic to use. Very nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryusei the Morning Star Posted March 4, 2019 Report Share Posted March 4, 2019 Name: Bruce BannerType: SpellcasterLevel: 2ATK/DEF: 500/1000Effect: If this card is Summoned: you can add 1 "Hulk" card to your hand. You can only use this effect of "Bruce Banner" once per turn. If this card is sent to the GY: you can Special Summon one "Hulk" monster from your hand. Ignore Summoning Conditions. There can only be 1 face-up "Bruce Banner" on the field. Name: Hulk's Apprentice - Rick JonesType SpellcasterLevel: 3ATK/DEF: 1000/0 Effect: You can discard this card; Add 1 Spell/Trap card that lists "Hulk" in its Card text from your Deck to your Hand. You can only use this effect of "Rick Jones" once per turn. Name: The Red She-HulkType: BeastLevel: 4ATK/DEF: 1500/2500Effect: You can Increase your Life Points by 500 points for each "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field or GY including this card. You can only use this effect of "The Red She-Hulk" once per turn. If this card is sent to the GY: special summon one "Bruce Banner" or "The She-Hulk" from your deck. You can only Special Summon "The Red She-Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The She-HulkType: BeastLevel: 4ATK 1500 Def: 1500Effect: This card cannot be destroyed or targeted by card effect. When this card is summoned: you can add 1 "Bruce Banner" from your deck to your hand. You can only Special Summon "The She-Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The Totally Awesome HulkType: BeastLevel: 8ATK/DEF: 2500/2500Effect: During either player's turn: discard 1 Card that specifically lists "Hulk" in its text; draw 2 cards from your deck. You can only use this effect of "The Totally Awesome Hulk" once per turn. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Totally Awesome Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The Grey HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 2500/2500Effect: This card cannot be targeted by card effect. Monsters on your opponents side of the field lose 500 ATK for every "Hulk" Monster with a different name on your side of the field. If this card is removed from the field: Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Grey Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The Savage HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect. This card gains 500 ATK for every "Hulk" monster with a different name in your GY. If this card is removed from the field: Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Savage Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The Immortal HulkType: BeastLevel 10:ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect. During your End Phase, you can remove from play 1 "Hulk" monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon this card from your Graveyard in Defense Position. If this card is removed from the field: Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Immortal Hulk(s)" once per turn. Name: The Red HulkType: BeastLevel: 10ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: This card cannot be targeted by card effect. During each of your Standby Phases: Inflict 3000 points of damage to both players. If this card is removed from the field: Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Red Hulk(s)" once per turn. Fusions: Name: The Professor HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Savage Hulk"This card cannot be destroyed by battle or card effect. Your opponent cannot target Spells/Traps you control with card effects, also they cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Professor Hulk" once per turn. Name: The Joe Fixit HulkType: Beast WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3000/3000Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Grey Hulk"This card cannot be targeted by card effect. You may Discard 1 Card: add 1 Spell/Trap card that lists "Hulk" in its Card text from your Deck or GY to your Hand. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Joe Fixit Hulk" once per turn. Name: The Maestro HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: "Bruce Banner" + "The Savage Hulk" + "The Grey Hulk"Unaffected by other cards' effects. Once per turn: You can banish 1 "Hulk" monster from your Graveyard; this card gains 500 ATK, and until the End Phase it also gains the banished monster's effects. If this card is removed from the field Special Summon 1 "Bruce Banner" from your Hand, Deck, or GY. You can only Special Summon "The Maestro Hulk" once per turn. RITUALS: Name: The Worldbreaker HulkType: Beast WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF: 3500/3500Effect: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Control". Must be Ritual Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.You can pay Half your Life Points; send as many cards in both players' hands and on the field as possible to the GY, then inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card sent to the opponent's GY by this effect. You cannot activate other cards or effects during the turn you activate this card's effect. Name: The Devil HulkType: Beast-WarriorLevel: 12ATK/DEF 3500/3500 Effect: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Control". Must be Ritual Summoned, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways.When this card is Summoned: pay 1000 LP: send 1 "Hulk" monster from your Deck to the GY; this card gains ATK equal to the sent monster's ATK until the End Phase. Spells: Name: ControlType: Ritual Spell Effect: This card can be used to Ritual Summon any "Hulk" Ritual Monster. You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field and/or banish "Bruce Banner(s)" from your GY, whose total Levels exactly equal the Level of the "Hulk" Ritual Monster. Name: The Green DoorType: Field SpellEffect: Pay 1500 Life Points: Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your Hand, or GY. You can only activate 1 "The Green Door" per turn. Name: Gamma FieldType: Field SpellEffect: Every "Hulk" Monster You Control gains 500 ATK points for every other "Hulk" Monster on the field. If this card you control would would be removed from the field, you can banish the top 2 cards from your Deck face-down instead. Name: Inner TurmoilType: Continuous SpellEffect: You can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your hand. You must control a face up "Bruce Banner" to activate and resolve this effect. You can only use the effect of "Inner Turmoil" once per turn. Name: The Green TeamType: Normal SpellEffect: If you control a "Hulk" Monster: Special Summon 1 "The She-Hulk" or "The Red She-Hulk" from your hand, Deck, or GY. Any battle damage your opponent takes from attacks involving this this turn is halved. You can only Activate the effect of "The Green Team" once per turn. Name: Gamma InfusionType: Equip SpellEffect: Activate this card by targeting 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; take control of it. It is treated as a "Hulk" monster. If "Gamma Field" is not on the field, destroy this card. You can only activate one "Gamma Infusion" per turn. Name: Rage From Beyond The GraveType: Equip SpellEffect: Pay 2000 LP and discard 1 "Hulk" card: target 1 monster in either players GY; Special Summon that target in Attack Position and equip it with this card. That monster's name becomes "Bruce Banner" and cannot attack. Name: Hulk, the strongest There Is!Type: Equip SpellEffect: Equip this Card to 1 "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field. Gain ATK Points equal to the Level of that monster x 500 When this card leaves the field, destroy that target. When that target is destroyed, destroy this card. Name: Hulk Smash!Type: Quickplay SpellEffect: If you control 1 "Hulk" Monster Toss a coin:● Heads: Destroy all cards your opponent controls.● Tails: Destroy all cards you control. Traps: Name: Gamma AbsorptionType: Counter TrapEffect: If a Spell/Trap Card is activated: Tribute 1 "Hulk" Monster; negate the activation, and if you do, destroy that card. Name: Gamma-HealType: Normal TrapEffect: Tribute 1 "Hulk" Monster on your side of the field: gain Life Points equal to the level of that monster x 300. Name: Quick To AngerType: Normal TrapEffect: Tribute 1 "Bruce Banner" on the field; Special Summon 1 "Hulk" monster from your GY. It is destroyed at the End Phase of this Turn. Name: Gamma StudyType Continuous TrapEffect: Banish 3 "Hulk" monsters from your GY: Your Opponent must discard 1 card in their hand. You must control "Gamma Field" to activate and resolve this card. You can only use this effect of "Gamma Study" once per turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doigt Posted March 9, 2019 Report Share Posted March 9, 2019 Nobody noticed the old "removed from the field"? The modern standard to use is now "leaves the field". This prevents confusion with another older phrasing: "removed from play" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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