Bey_Maker997 Posted January 20, 2021 Report Share Posted January 20, 2021 This is the first card of the new archtype im working on, i dont have much to explain about them yet but this is the first one since he is my favorite character of the series i based them off, The effect will likely change when i get a more solid idea of what i want the deck to do but until then this is what i got, critisism is welcomed Name: Frightmatronic Tail Chaiser/Level 6/Type Machine/Atribute Dark/Atk 2400/Def 1000 Effect: You can only control 1 "Frightmatronic Tail Chaiser" at a time. you can special summon this card from your Hand or GY by shuffling a "Frightmatronic" Monster you control into the deck. When this card destroys or is destroyed by battle you can add 1 "Frightmatronic" Card from your deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayfield Lumina Posted January 23, 2021 Report Share Posted January 23, 2021 Welp, let's hope the new archetype is not 500 cards long like some of the previous xD It can use some grammar polish: Quote You can Special Summon this card (from your hand or GY) by shuffling 1 "Frightmatronic" monster you control into the Deck. When this card, or a monster battling this card is destroyed by battle: You can add 1 "Frightmatronic" card from your Deck to your hand. You can only control 1 "Frightmatronic Tail Chaser". Pretty similar, but there's no need for the "at a time", also that kind of clause is usually added at the end of the card. Use lowercase for hand and card, but capital D for Deck. Made the second effect a triggered activation. A simple and effective card, 1 for 1 monster, but probably this is stronger than the one shuffled. Nothing too strong, so I'd say it is well balanced. P.D. What's this series about, btw? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bey_Maker997 Posted January 28, 2021 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 Well im still working on them since i wanted to make them like the HERO series, Were they start off simple but branch off to different styles but can still remain as a collected thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan Posted January 28, 2021 Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 Good Job like Rayfield said it It can use some grammar polish: Also one more thing When ever you make Tuner Monster it has to say this Dragon/Tuner/Effect You put it the other way around Dragon/Effect/Tuner this is not the right way to do it I'm sorry I'm not Trying to insult you or anything I will give you an Example of Tuner an Monster konami Made vs the one you made: You always put Tuner after the Effect when you should be putting the Tuner part before the Effect part. Konami's card Your card The Right Way: The Wrong Way: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bey_Maker997 Posted January 28, 2021 Author Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 i see, Thanks for pointing it out, Ill make sure to do it correctly for the future, Thanks for telling me, English still is not my best written Language but i am doing the best i can and i welcome your advice and feedback Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan Posted January 28, 2021 Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 Your Welcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horu Posted January 28, 2021 Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 51 minutes ago, Zamazenta said: This dragon. I like this Dragon. Although the proper typing order is Dragon/Tuner/Effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zamazenta the OS-Tan Fan Posted January 28, 2021 Report Share Posted January 28, 2021 Thats what I told him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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