Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Here we've come,From the final pedestal,Accepting ascension,Unbound chains,We set forth, With knowledge upon us,Among alien terrain,Away from your gaze,And harbored protection,We move our own, Holding your teachings,Remembering your words,Tethered feelings,Where we go,May be success,May be failure, But one thing shall remain,Everything you said,Everything you did,We move on,With you in our minds,And in our heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Awwwwww ^_^ if only 72 was here to read this.... He would love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 yeah he would... *cries* come back 72! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Awwwwww ^_^ if only 72 was here to read this.... He would love it! lol he asked me to write in on MSN so he will read it lol, even if you dont know he is here ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 what do you mean "He is here"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Great Poem. I'm sure 72 will love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 ive said too much >_>.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Is he back or something? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 no... never will XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 72..... Just thinking of him makes me upset! He was 1 of the best members here... He made the best Banners... Was Friendly on top too.... 72..... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 72..... Just thinking of him makes me upset! He was 1 of the best members here... He made the best Banners... Was Friendly on top too.... 72..... :(Q4E... :( hope he likes the poem... :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 he does lol, he loves it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Aww!! *tear*. He'd love it! 15,000,000 Little Rubber Duckies / 14,000 Little Pieces of Chocolate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thank you ^_^ i was asked to read this for my schools senior class lol, but i declined xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Ahh. Deep. I miss my friend. We need him back. He was the only one on the site who was as popular as Dj Osiris. .. :( I miss him. Great poem. Better than what I can do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 Great poem. I feel great loss for 72 as well. I wish he didn't have to leave but in the end it's his decision. *sigh* Another great member gone forever... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thank you all ^_^... you wouldnt believe how long it took me though.... @below: not you xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thank you all ^_^... you wouldnt believe how long it took me though.... I would. You told me on MSN. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 um ok wow D.M.Ghes not dead >_> nice poem icyblue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thanks lol, sadly i did it only in 10min xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bloodrun Posted May 24, 2008 Report Share Posted May 24, 2008 thanks lol' date=' sadly i did it only in 10min xD[/quote'] lol ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 25, 2008 Report Share Posted May 25, 2008 mini-bumps O.O i wanna see if anyone who knows how to write a formal poem can see the slight error i made... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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