Ultimate Ryan Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Reviewers----------Ultimate_RyanDark Edo PheonixZeroshot Hey guys you may have seen Yankeefan's card reviews, well I decided to have my own! I will grade VERY harshly! You can post your cards here and if it looks good enough in a scan through I will rate it, I will try to get 2 or 3 a day. Rated so far[spoiler=Cards]ShadowKyogre's Sapphira, the Goddess of Death - 68%God Hunter's "Infant Wood Elf" - 92%Dark Edo Phoenix's Blazemaster Demon - 94%RacecaR's "Blade Master" - 73%Frlf's "Leader of the Hound" - 83%tycho777's "Gallo The Prismatic Being" - 67%OCG King's "Xena, Diva of the House" - 77%Spirit of BMG's Rainbow Sailor Fuku - 98%Blackwind's "Limit Breaker" - 96%Titus' "Winged Steel Panther" - 94%Mudkipkid7786's "Chaos Overload Gajitron Destroyer" - 84%Wilson91's "Tin Claws" - 89%Chaos Pudding's "Inferno King Onyx" - 91%element8923's "Fallen Magician" Hall of Fame [spoiler=cards]By - Spirit of BMG Yes we will have a hall of fame and to be a hall of famer your card must receive at least a 97%. If your card gets into the hall of fame you get 1 rep! Rules1 - You can enter 1 card a day.2 - 1 card at a time3 - card must be realistic4 - I will try to do 3 cards a day.5 - if you card isn't done 1 day you can post it the next day.6 - you must post the cards effect or it will be completely ignored! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted June 10, 2008 Report Share Posted June 10, 2008 Review please: Sapphira: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand, Deck, or Graveyard by Tributing 3 "Death" Monsters. This card is unaffected by the effects of other Spells, Traps, and Monsters and this card's effects cannot be negated. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the total of the ATK and DEF of the Monster Cards in the Graveyards. Any cards removed from play are treated as if they are in the Graveyard, and only "Death" effects can affect the cards in the Graveyards. "Death" effects are treated as this card's effects. What it means in Layman's terms: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand, Deck, or Graveyard by Tributing 3 "Death" Monsters. This card is unaffected by the effects of other Spells, Traps, and Monsters and this card's effects cannot be negated. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the total of the ATK and DEF of all Monster Cards in the Graveyards. Any cards removed from play are treated as if they are in the Graveyard (they are treated as if they are both removed from play and still in the Graveyard), and only "Death" effects can affect cards in the Graveyards. "Death" effects are treated as this card's effects (card effects that activate in the Graveyard that are "Death" still work, it's just they cannot be negated plus Sapphira can use them). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Review please: Sapphira: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand' date=' Deck, or Graveyard by Tributing 3 "Death" Monsters. This card is unaffected by the effects of other Spells, Traps, and Monsters. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the total of the ATK and DEF of the Monster Cards in the Graveyards. Any cards removed from play are treated as if they are in the Graveyard, and only "Death" effects can affect the cards in the Graveyards. "Death" effects are treated as this card's effects.[/quote'] Name - The name is quite original, but master of death isn't so 9/10Pic - The picture is quite nice as it fits into the card's name, not sure if it fits with the effect but 8/10Effect - quite overepowered as you tribute 3, then it is basically a ra plus more and dark. 6/10OCG - not the best, but not the worst, here is your OCG corrected. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned from the hand, Deck, or Graveyard by Tributing 3 "Death" Monsters. This card is unaffected by the effects of other Spell, Trap, and Monster Cards. Increase this card's ATK and DEF equal to the total of the ATK and DEF of every Monster Card in both you and your opponent's Graveyards. Any card that is removed from play are treated as if they are in the Graveyard, and only the effects of "Death" Cards can target cards in either players' Graveyards. A "Death" Card's effect is treated as this card's effects. ATK/DEF - ooverpowered when added to the effect. 3/10Suggestions - Tone down the ATK/DEF stat gain, and the unaffected by... effect should be removed. Make it original ATK 0 and let it gain Half.final rating - 68% sorry your card is slightly under Realistic Cards material, keep trying! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowKyogre Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Yeah, I expected that. I'll get another one tomorrow to review. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 rate, critique, do as you wish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 God Hunter's "Infant Wood Elf"Name - meh could add more spark 8/10Pic - nice, describes name, like the holo 10/10Effect - Overpowered, "I offer my sheep token to draw!"OCG - "..monster on your side of the field..." is old OCG newer version is "monster you control" all else is good so 9/10ATK/DEF - fair 10/10Suggestion - add "and send it to the Graveyard" after "tribute 1 monster you control"Final Rating - 92% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 sweet. This is one of my 4 cards. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 hope my cards are just as good, I spent some time fixing their OCG!you cannot use the OCG fixes that wouldn't be fair! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Dont plan on it. :P My sheer Card Making skillz makes up for it. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 How 'bout my new FIRE nomi? There seems to be something wrong with it for some reason. Would you mind reviewing it? ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 please post it's effect ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 FIRE monsters you control. Remove from play 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard to inflict 400 damage to your opponent. This card's ATK is equal to the number of FIRE monsters in your Graveyard x 400. You can Tribute this card to Special Summon 1 of your removed from play FIRE monsters. There. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Dark Edo Phoenix's Blazemaster Demon Name - meh could add more spark 9/10Pic - nice, describes name, 10/10Effect - I am seeing it can be OPed or UPed so pretty balanced, needs more flare 8/10OCG - perfect! 10/10ATK/DEF - eh fair i guess 9/10Suggestion - add more originality to name and effect.Final Rating - 94% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RacecaR Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 When this card destroys a monster card with 5 or more stars on your opponents side of the field, your opponent draws 5 cards. Your opponent removes all warrior type monster cards from play and takes 500 points of damage for each warrior type monster removed from play from this effect. All other cards drawed from this effect are immediatly sent to the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ P O L A R I S ~ Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Thanks for rating. +Rep for you^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Lets try u ryan ^.^ [spoiler=card] [spoiler=effect]This card can only be activated when your opponent controls at least 3 monsters on his/her side of the field. When this card is activated, roll a six-sided die, activate the correct corrosponding effect based on the number rolled, if its the Level of one monster on your opponent's side of the field, take control of the monster (if its a tie, you choose) and equip it to this card, if no monster on the field is that Level, select one monster from your Deck or hand and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position and equip it to this card, and if no monster in your Deck or hand is the Level of the result of the rolled die, Special Summon 1 "Hound Token" (Warrior-Type /DARK /Level 3 /ATK 1400 /DEF 1200). When the controled monster is destroyed, destroy this card also. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 When this card destroys a monster card with 5 or more stars on your opponents side of the field' date=' your opponent draws 5 cards. Your opponent removes all warrior type monster cards from play and takes 500 points of damage for each warrior type monster removed from play from this effect. All other cards drawed from this effect are immediatly sent to the graveyard.[/quote'] RacecaR's "Blade Master" Name - needs more flare, 7/10Pic - has white line, describes name, 8/10Effect - meh unoriginal 8/10OCG - meh, pretty bad but not horrible 6/10 When this card destroys a monster that is level 5 or greater on your, your opponent draws 5 cards. Your opponent removes all Warrior-Type monsters from their hand from play. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Warrior-Type monster removed from play by this effect. All other cards drawn from this effect are immediately sent to the Graveyard. ATK/DEF - lower it by about 200 each 9/10Suggestion - add more originality to name and effect, and work on OCG.Final Rating - 73% Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Ryan whatabout my card? ^.^ too perfect you can't even rate it? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Frlf, you'd wish. ;) Ryan, I just might have another card for you in a few minuites. EDIT: Ryan, I think my card qualifies for the Hall of Fame. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 1 - You can enter 1 card a day. No U Hunter, follow the rules ^.^ Edit: ryan, i've checked, and u are not really rating harshly >.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Lets try u ryan ^.^ [spoiler=card] [spoiler=effect]This card can only be activated when your opponent controls at least 3 monsters on his/her side of the field. When this card is activated' date=' roll a six-sided die, activate the correct corresponding effect based on the number rolled, if its the Level of one monster on your opponent's side of the field, take control of the monster (if its a tie, you choose) and equip it to this card, if no monster on the field is that Level, select one monster from your Deck or hand and Special Summon it in face-up Attack Position and equip it to this card, and if no monster in your Deck or hand is the Level of the result of the rolled die, Special Summon 1 "Hound Token" (Warrior-Type /DARK /Level 3 /ATK 1400 /DEF 1200). When the controlled monster is destroyed, destroy this card also. [/quote']I must be really bored to be doing 5 cards in 1 hour >_> Frlf's "Leader of the Hound" Name - pretty original - 9/10Pic - nice, describes name, 9/10Effect - meh... pretty fair 9/10OCG - wow, I can't fix it, to many mistakes, and weird wording >_> 5/10Suggestion - fix OCG.Final Rating - 83% and hunter I am updating the hall of fame rules ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 Damn it. I'll have to wait for tomarrow. >.< My card though, DOES qualify for Hall of Fame. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 read new hall of fame rules, 80% was to easy >_> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frlf Posted June 11, 2008 Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 My card doesn't have so much OCG errors >.< When i fix ocg (if I do so) i'll post it again here.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate Ryan Posted June 11, 2008 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2008 k, will rate again, but you can't post it again until 12:00 midnight YCM time tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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