Code Y.C.M Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 hey MCII long time no see, i can see you attracting an audience. Good work, you got to Page 3 before i even did, i am pretty jealous of the publicity you got here.If you want a rating pm me. Here is a Link to my Thread, if you want to see my cardsmy sets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 excelent cards. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 thanks you guys ^_^ hey, guess what? *bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 -VETUThis card can only be activated while you control a "Vahim, God of the Lights", "Xor, God of the Waters", or "Kenu, Goddess of the Wind" is under your control. Once per turn, you can pay 600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. You can pay 1000 Life Points to move this card to an unnoccupied Monster Card Zone and treat this face-up Trap Card as a LIGHT Spellcaster-Type monster with 2900 ATK and 3400 DEF. If you activate this cards second effect, destroy all monsters that were Special Summoned by this card's first effect. *iv bold/slash what i see that are errors...may i suggest, if this card is treated as a monster after activation, then you need to state that in the effect...the pix could use a background tho... -VAHIMThis card can only be Ritual Summoned by the Ritual Spell card, "The Beggining of the Gods". You must also Release from your hand or field monsters whose total Level equals 10 or more. This card is also treated as a Warrior-Type also. When this card is Summoned, bring intoadd to your hand from your deck(Deck), the Spell card, "Formed by the Gods". If you control a "Sata, God of the Dark Skies" is in play, Special Summon 1 "Jabu, Chaotic Flesh". If so you Special Summoned a "Sata, God of the Dark Skies" with this effect, this card cannot attack. *iv bold/slash what i see that are errors....on the special summoning sata part... it needs to state when the effect activates...and on the cannot attack effect... it just needs to state for how long.. cause of now, this card cannot attack at all if it special summons a sata...pix fit the name... niceoverall...7/10 ~Phantasy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 thanks, while you were commenting and slashing, i updated the post; check out Xor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 kinda the same errors i see with the others that i haved looked at...and i didnt see this jabu card... is it not out yet?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 How did you come up with the name Xor? D-Don't tell me, that's your name too!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 no not yet ^_^im gradually makin these cards, theyl be here soon but first i gotta get these immortals cards first then il get the mortals. my name too?? whatchu mean?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3cchiFr3ak Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 My real name is Xor. Don't ask me what it means, even I don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 thats pretty kool!! ^_^ that is the inverted name that means water in Meyosavo PM me if u wanna kno how to speak and write; 5 min tutorial Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 *bump with new and improved cards* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
superchaos2585 Posted July 4, 2008 Report Share Posted July 4, 2008 10/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Thanks man! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantasy Dreamz Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 wow....... esa is showing something...lol....always happy to help yo.. ~Phantasy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 is Esa too much?? should i change the pic or what??i fought myself for about 10 mins judging whether or not i should Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 *bump, newest card: Jabu!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 5, 2008 Report Share Posted July 5, 2008 Ugh, I hate Master Rule OCG. Whatever. I'll be rating the first two here; expect more later. Originality: Cool ideas. I especially like Maka's effect. Balance: Level 10 or higher monsters generally fail. Monsters with 3000+ attack just scream unoriginality. Cut their ATK/DEF by 1000 points, and cut their level by 3, and THEN you'll have good cards. Playability: Their synergy is their downfall. Maka shifts to your opponent, leaving you defenseless. If Otu is up, Maka is wasted space, but the odds of Summoning 2 Ritual Monsters in 1 turn are slim. If they were Effect Monsters, it would be much easier. My recommendation is to decrease Otu's ATK by 1500 points and her DEF by 2000 points, and make her a Level 4 Effect Monster. OCG: With the above changes made...Maka's correct OCG is This card cannot be Ritual Summoned except by the effect of "Unleashed by the Gods." This card is treated as both a DARK Spellcaster-Type monster and a LIGHT Warrior-Type monster. When this card is Summoned successfully, control of all cards you control shifts to your opponent. If the number of monsters that have their control shifted by this effect is greater than your opponent's number of open spaces, destroy the ones with lowest ATK. While "Otu, Keeper of the Order" is face-up on the field, this card cannot declare an attack.Otu's correct OCG is While this card remains face-up on the field, when "Sata, the God of the Dark Skies","Esa, Goddess of the Flames", or "Sodi, God of the Hardened Earth" declares an attack, negate the attack. When this card declares an attack, your opponent draws 2 cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 thanks for your suggestions ^_^il see what i can do, but i will keep these cards Ritual monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 Hm. Well, they're your cards. Just keep in mind that Ritual Monsters are virtually unplayable. ~SGY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 well, that is true.. hmmm; il see what i can do ^_^ but theres alot mores on the way, especially of Jabu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 wow, besides some of the pics, you have some pretty goood cards here :D Now I see why your my favorite newby :), I also started a "God Set" when i was a newby ^_^ keep up the great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 thanks Ruby ^_^ I was actually thinkin about changin the "god" concept to "Ancient" instead.. watchu guys think?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 i dont know about that :?, but your welcome :) and i can't believe you managed this many posts great job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted July 6, 2008 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 mkays.. now check out my new card: Jabu, Master of the Rocks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted July 6, 2008 Report Share Posted July 6, 2008 WOW, really nice :D I see some great OCG and grammar and i really like the pic ;) (^ This is for the Rock jabu) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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