Daronta Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 My Naruto Deck Leaf and Gaara only.I will fix Gaara of Desert and Shikamaru later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 not bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chiengu Ruu Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Cool cards........Eaaaa......custom type monster........ 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shrekstasy Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 2/10.... Why is Gai Akatsuki-type? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ShadowshadeNecroPower Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 100% OCG errors.1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wattking Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Don't combie description and effects. some seemed that they had an effect, and were normal. OCG issues, and pics need work. Also, don't name attacks in an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted July 26, 2008 Report Share Posted July 26, 2008 Please avoid using fake types. And don't mix effects with descriptions.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mou100 Posted July 27, 2008 Report Share Posted July 27, 2008 Nice 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasuke981 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 ino.....is very nice!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Some OCG errors and mixing effects/descriptions. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PokeMaster Calvin Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 horrible cards. fake types and horrible OCG. 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 hmm some ocg erros, but great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
To-Chi Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 Oh dear God! The OCG... THE OCG!!! AAARGH!!! Good concept, good ideas, bad execution. HORRID OCG!!! It's undestandable, but unforgivable. I'd say on a scale of 10, 2/10. I'm not going to get into where you could improve. Just look for OCG or "Official Card Grammar" as I believe it is called. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Choji911 Posted October 10, 2009 Report Share Posted October 10, 2009 So bad don't have to say the reasons. .5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Neo Fusion Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 Some OCG errors and mixing effects/descriptions. 5/10 yea prety much what she/he said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted October 11, 2009 Report Share Posted October 11, 2009 You need a lot of fixing to do.I Don't understand most of them. Sorry I only give 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nath~ Posted October 16, 2009 Report Share Posted October 16, 2009 2.5/10 ocg=horrible Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironmanben Posted October 17, 2009 Report Share Posted October 17, 2009 Fake types galore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kevinrocks101 Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 Any traps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackSkullCortez Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 There are OCG errors there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chuckandhoward Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 im a newb too and i think u did bad. u mixed description with effect. some cards i dont understand. ill give u 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dranzer Posted November 6, 2009 Report Share Posted November 6, 2009 OCG is bad.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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