Careless Whisper Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 [align=center]Censored Name I see myself kneel to my knees,As Christ said unto thee."Though his bones may be ashes now,His memory will stay free." [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Beautiful epitaph.*stands and claps**bows and leaves* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Beautiful epitaph.*stands and claps**bows and leaves* Couldnt have said it better lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Wheres the sadistic stuff like. "I ripped opened his corpse and devoured his spleen" I haz idea for song nao. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 may he rest in peace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Wheres the sadistic stuff like. "I ripped opened his corpse and devoured his spleen" I haz idea for song nao. PRO/10! How does he think of this. Meti---great, however, I'm ashamed to say that you've already proved your literature is great, as is your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Metal Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Wheres the sadistic stuff like. "I ripped opened his corpse and devoured his spleen" I haz idea for song nao. I couldn't have said it better myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Wheres the sadistic stuff like. "I ripped opened his corpse and devoured his spleen" I haz idea for song nao. I couldn't have said it better myself. *Bows* Thank you thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lazer Yoshi Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Seems well written and beautiful! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Hm... was there a reason the title is censored? @KA: I lol'd. Again. Stop making me lol. Please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Hm... was there a reason the title is censored? @KA: I lol'd. Again. Stop making me lol. Please? Nuuuu. Wanna see moar of mah poetry? =D It's beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I wouldn't mind. Is it about eating dogs and stuff? You should write a book. It will sell well. lolrhyme Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I wouldn't mind. Is it about eating dogs and stuff? You should write a book. It will sell well. lolrhyme No no no. It's about feeding at cemetarys....and kicking puppies. Iizebil. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arekku_Koro Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Wow. Beautifully written. 10/10. I mean, Infinity/10. It's just epic. Lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 @ KA: Dude. You and me are so hardcore! In fact, i just finished my song about punching babies and beating hobos. We should totally partner up and do a song together @ Meti: Nice man. Your writing/literature skills are epic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Best Male 2008 Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 @ KA: Dude. You and me are so hardcore! In fact' date=' i just finished my song about punching babies and beating hobos. We should totally partner up and do a song together @ Meti: Nice man. Your writing/literature skills are epic. [img']http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/mm237/element29649/animated-flame.gif[/img] =D I'm trying to get Icyfoo to write a song with me. I dunno if he will yet -.-" If we write a song, it must have digging up skulls from graves and eating their brains! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azuh Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Hm... was there a reason the title is censored? Errr, and you trust the interwebs with peoples names? Hi I'm Aaron Michael Polidano! Now you can all find where i live and steal all my belongings :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 That was incredible. Meti, you're so talented. Keep it up. -Glasstin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Willieh Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Hm... was there a reason the title is censored? Errr' date=' and you trust the interwebs with peoples names? Hi I'm Aaron Michael Polidano! Now you can all find where i live and steal all my belongings :)[/quote'] Most of us don't own a house; so if you looked us up you probably wouldn't find our address, not unless you went through every single person on earth with our last name until you found us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I censored his name because I would not feel respectful if I was to give out his real name. Sense he was a war veteran and I do not know if anyone here had a relative in the same war as him but on the enemy side. Also, I would've expected you to stay on topic. I feel insulted by that sense you just spammed the thread that was made in honor of my own grandfather. I'm not talking to all of you, just those who got off topic. ~Meti *I'm an agnostic but yet I wrote this...* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Protoman Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 Meti i know its none of my business but wehat war was he in maybe i can relate i come from a military family. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixty Posted August 3, 2008 Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 I think that's the best 4 sentences I've ever heard. :o Good Job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted August 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2008 @Proto: I'm very sorry, but I do not feel comfortable in naming the war that my grandfather faught in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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