Mynar, Knight of Solitude (Ritual Monster)

[Rollcage]

I just thought up the idea of this guy, and got to work.. I think I balanced it out ok, just slightly uncertain. They are only my Second and Third cards.

 

Here he is with his Ritual Spell card.

 

 

 

What do you guys think?

[Deity Mitsu]

Cool effect,slight grammar errors,slightly overpowered(When this monster is Summoned, you get a direct attack on your opponent for 4700 big ones?Thats the end of the duel unless you have trap or magic cards on the field.8/10.

[Rollcage]

Ah. thats my mistake there. I meant to write "Destroy all other monsters on your side of the field." Ill get onto it.

 

oh and by the way, what exactly do you mean by grammar errors?

[Deity Mitsu]

Some things are capitalized where they shouldn't and you misspelled offer.This is my corrected version:

This monster can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Prayer of the Hopeless". You must also offer monsters whose total Level Stars equal 10 or more from your side of the field or hand. When this monster is Ritual Summoned, destroy all other monsters on the field. While this card is on the field, you cannot Summon any other monsters.

[Dwhale]

I like it it's very clever what diety meant was the wording it's kinda off to fix look at a real card with the similar effect

[Deity Mitsu]

What he said :P

[gungeransu]

First, the Ritual Monster doesn't need the "you must tribute blah" part in it anymore. Only the Spell needs that. And "offer" isn't used anymore either.

Try rewording the monster's effect like this:

When this card is Ritual Summoned successfully, destroy all other monsters on the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, you cannot summon any other monsters.

And the Spell's effect like this:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Mynar, Knight of Solitude". You must also tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total level stars equal 10 or more.

[Rollcage]

Edited, and I get what you're saying Gung about not having to mention the summon on the monster, But thats how they were when I used to play it so its slightly Nostalgic =]

[gungeransu]

Yeah, same here. I remember back when I used to use Crab Turtle. XD

Ah... those days were fun... when a duel was anyone's to claim, not just the first to get out BLS. XD

[Rollcage]

yeah.. Zera the Mant.. :D

[Peterd1993]

nice card 8/10

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

Card art: 10/10

Design/text: 10/10

 

Playability: 4/10 (7.5/10 with OTK combos/ advanced ritual art)

 

 

 

Nice card, but not good for the current game. He would be destroyed by a card effect unless you won first. You could use inter dimensional matter transporter to protect him or OTK with twin swords of flashing light tryce/ring of destruction. Powerful with advanced ritual art.

[gungeransu]

Alright. What exactly is OTK? I kinda fell off....lol

[drew555]

The ATK power is to strong.

[MachineHunter]

Lol,like the cards,thrue they are grammar errors,still,9/10Good job!

[Rollcage]

Thanks for the reviews guys :D

[Dragons-4-lyfe]

Alright. What exactly is OTK? I kinda fell off....lol

 

one turn kill and yea some grammar issues but 7/10

[the Snakey Wolf Lord]

one turn kill unless your playing with 8000 life points and your opponnent has more life points than the attack of the monster... but it IS a good care ya know... 10/10 because its sooo overpowered

[Dante Dimercurio]

Wow its amazing man 8/10

[Chaos Impact™]

nice pictyure seen it on somebody's sig something to do with autum oh well good card overpowered attack and effect but good enough for me 8/10

[Rollcage]

Slight Edit, Fixed the effect text from "Destroys all monsters on the field" to "Destroy all monsters on YOUR SIDE OF the field." Thats how it was meant to be originally.

 

Also, I Reduced the attack points by 250.

[wildsword1]

10/10 sweet cards Rollcage