Legokun Posted February 13, 2010 Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 I Have Near-Finished Mario & Luigi: Bowser's Inside Story Prologue, if anyone can take a look at it to see if their is anything Rule-Breaking or if you have a suggestion, please tell me, because i don't want anything bad to Happen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 hey i have a question (sorry, but im just too lazy to read this entire thread, especially since im on my phone) Why is it that we can't use Script Format? i can't find a logical reason myself. someone enlighten me EDIT: ok so i read the thread and found about script format all i could find was that "it doesn't portray the story effectively" or some sh*t like that.... i dont see this as a logical argument. i have two things to say: 1) i can understand where this arguments idea came from, but script format, when done properly, can be very effective. and i do understand script format doesn't seem proper for books, but it doesnt matter. not everyone here is trying to be an aspiring writer. they just want to have fun with their made up ideas2)here is another book in script format, Speakand, yes, Speak came out as a movie, but it came out as a book first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 15, 2010 Report Share Posted March 15, 2010 Script format just mean's you're too lazy to write properly.. Or you're making a movie/screenplay, so.. Yeah. I say it's good enough, I had seen enough Script Format. Not to mention, it's a pain to Weather Report. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 "Weather Report"? i dont wana know. even if people do feel a little lazy about writing regularly, what of it? as i said before, their not trying to be aspiring writers, they just wana have fun! also, what if some people wanted to post their fanfics in script format on purpose? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 "Weather Report"? It's just a way of reviewing and criticizing. even if people do feel a little lazy about writing regularly' date=' what of it? as i said before, their not trying to be aspiring writers, they just wana have fun! [b']Everybody here is trying to have fun. They write for fun. Why else would they write? That's no excuse for being lazy.[/b] also, what if some people wanted to post their fanfics in script format on purpose? Then they'll have to change it. Mods will probably lock, if they even care. Also, many won't read it at all. Tell me, would you like it if people didn't like reading your stories? It's better to write it normally like everyone else. Everyone who's good at writing writes normally. Many people who are not good writers tend to use script format, unless they're writing a screenplay. The normal way is, how should I say this...appealing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 16, 2010 Report Share Posted March 16, 2010 Not to mention, didn't they go to school? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--------------- Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 hm... ok, i guess twig has some convincing points fine then, i take it back ..........i have no idea what kainine meant with his last post (WTF?!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted March 17, 2010 Report Share Posted March 17, 2010 At school, you learn how to write properly, methinks? Like Today I went to the store. "I'll have that in a plastic bag." I said hurridly to the owner as he began to stack my items. You see? Not Today I went to the store. Me:I'll have that in a bag Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 2, 2010 Report Share Posted April 2, 2010 About the Competition Prizes thingie, why only 1500 points max? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 TWO QUESTIONS: #1- Can the DUELS be in script format? #2- What if you already had a fanfic long in the past and that was in script format? Would your rules have to be retroactive, or could I continue writing in the manner it was written in the past? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 1-Dunno, don't think so2-YOu'll have to change to normal format. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 1-Dunno' date=' don't think so2-YOu'll have to change to normal format.[/quote'] To be honest, I am a dislexic (hope i spelled that right). I may spell well, but writing and reading normal format can be a stretch for me. And plus, my fanfic, YUGIOH REVELATION, was around long before any of these rules were around. And not to point the finger or falsely mention someone, but even Umbra mentioned in a post that he liked my story at a time. I mean I thought this place was about having fun in the submission of ideals. Not some ridiculous lecture in English Litterature. This place was one of my few escapes from that stuff and now even THIS place has it now. Can you at least be a little less strict on this thing. I know I was gone a LOOOOOONG time (personal isshues)... but I was thinking of posting more chapters and now these new rules are making it 10 times as hard. Can there be a Compromise? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 What difference does it make? I've said this so many times. This is just like the Advanced Clause effect in the roleplaying section, only it kept the forum just as active. We're not being strict. We're still being reasonable. Script Format is, well.. Lazy, to say the least. The majority of YCM have no handicaps apart from being lazy or having english as a later language, so if we allowed script format again, it would cause the quality to drop again. But that's my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 What difference does it make? I've said this so many times. This is just like the Advanced Clause effect in the roleplaying section' date=' only it kept the forum just as active. We're not being strict. We're still being reasonable. Script Format is, well.. Lazy, to say the least. The majority of YCM have no handicaps apart from being lazy or having english as a later language, so if we allowed script format again, it would cause the quality to drop again. But that's my opinion.[/quote'] I have a learning disability and all you care about is quality? I'm NOT a lazy writer, script format just better suits my needs. I know EVERYBODY would say that but it's especially true for me. At least skim(not necessarily read) through my story and see what you think. The link is in my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 What difference does it make? I've said this so many times. This is just like the Advanced Clause effect in the roleplaying section' date=' only it kept the forum just as active. We're not being strict. We're still being reasonable. Script Format is, well.. Lazy, to say the least. The majority of YCM have no handicaps apart from being lazy or having english as a later language, so if we allowed script format again, it would cause the quality to drop again. But that's my opinion.[/quote'] I have a learning disability and all you care about is quality? I'm NOT a lazy writer, script format just better suits my needs. I know EVERYBODY would say that but it's especially true for me. At least skim(not necessarily read) through my story and see what you think. The link is in my sig. I skimmed through it. Besides the duel, the dialogue was fine. So why are you complaining that about something that you can do? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 3, 2010 Report Share Posted April 3, 2010 My point was, majority. If we lowered the minimum standard for a couple of people with disabilities, it would, well.. Kinda turn the place around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryumancer Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 This should be a place that's FUN for EVERYONE. This isn't school. That's what it's looking like right now. The duels at the VERY LEAST should be script. When the duels are written in normal format, they look all garbled and stuff. It's a real mess of disestablished numbers and words. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 This should be a place that's FUN for EVERYONE. This isn't school. That's what it's looking like right now. The duels at the VERY LEAST should be script. When the duels are written in normal format' date=' they look all garbled and stuff. It's a real mess of disestablished numbers and words.[/quote'] [spoiler=Script Format]Damon: [draws a card] I'll begin with this, Archfiend Soldier (1900/1500), in Attack Mode! I shall then end my turn by placing two cards face-down.Winston: [draws a card] I set my monster face-down! And I shall place THREE card face-down! I end.Damon: Alright, my move! [draws a card] This monster is right up your alley. I summon my Royal Knight in Attack Mode! (1300/800) Now my knight, ATTACK!Winston: So sad.Damon: What?Winston: You rammed your knight into this monster. [Monster flipped up] My Oppressed People! (400/2000)Damon: Damn!Winston: Your little stunt cost you dearly. [spoiler=Normal Format- [b]CREDIT TO LARRYCOTTER[/b]]“Draw!” she said confidentially. “I Summon Shining Abyss in attack mode!”A second fairy appeared next to her Witch. It looked as if it was built out of several blue balls, decorated with big golden wings and other golden pieces. (1600/1800)“I attack Boarden with my Dunames Dark Witch!”The witch flew forwards to attack the skateboard, but a blue, shiny net appeared between the two of them.“Trap Card activate! Morphtronic Bind! While I control a Morphtronic Monster, monsters with a level equal to or higher than four cannot attack.” He seemed to enjoy this Duel in a sadistic way. “You’re blocked, and I’ll finish you next Turn.”“We’ll see about that. I set a card, and end my Turn!”A hologram appeared on her side too, and Sy drew a card.“You’ll hit zero, whatever you’ve got there. Morphtronics, attack!”The robots jumped at her again, and were blocked by a shiny silvery shield. Notice there are actual action scenes in the duel. In your version, it just sounds like they're playing with just the cards, no holograms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 4, 2010 Report Share Posted April 4, 2010 But seriously. Cna't we change the 1500 point max for contest thing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 This should be a place that's FUN for EVERYONE. This isn't school. That's what it's looking like right now. The duels at the VERY LEAST should be script. When the duels are written in normal format' date=' they look all garbled and stuff. It's a real mess of disestablished numbers and words.[/quote'] [spoiler=Script Format]Damon: [draws a card] I'll begin with this, Archfiend Soldier (1900/1500), in Attack Mode! I shall then end my turn by placing two cards face-down.Winston: [draws a card] I set my monster face-down! And I shall place THREE card face-down! I end.Damon: Alright, my move! [draws a card] This monster is right up your alley. I summon my Royal Knight in Attack Mode! (1300/800) Now my knight, ATTACK!Winston: So sad.Damon: What?Winston: You rammed your knight into this monster. [Monster flipped up] My Oppressed People! (400/2000)Damon: Damn!Winston: Your little stunt cost you dearly. [spoiler=Normal Format]“Draw!” she said confidentially. “I Summon Shining Abyss in attack mode!”A second fairy appeared next to her Witch. It looked as if it was built out of several blue balls, decorated with big golden wings and other golden pieces. (1600/1800)“I attack Boarden with my Dunames Dark Witch!”The witch flew forwards to attack the skateboard, but a blue, shiny net appeared between the two of them.“Trap Card activate! Morphtronic Bind! While I control a Morphtronic Monster, monsters with a level equal to or higher than four cannot attack.” He seemed to enjoy this Duel in a sadistic way. “You’re blocked, and I’ll finish you next Turn.”“We’ll see about that. I set a card, and end my Turn!”A hologram appeared on her side too, and Sy drew a card.“You’ll hit zero, whatever you’ve got there. Morphtronics, attack!”The robots jumped at her again, and were blocked by a shiny silvery shield. Notice there are actual action scenes in the duel. In your version, it just sounds like they're playing with just the cards, no holograms. (Espa Roba voice)I THINK I SEEM TO RECOGNIZE THE PROPERLY WRITTEN SCENE I AM SURE YOU JUST COPYPASTED IT FROM A GREAT WORK OF ART FROM A WRITER WHO JUST FORGOT TO COPYRIGHT HIS WORK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twig Posted April 9, 2010 Report Share Posted April 9, 2010 This should be a place that's FUN for EVERYONE. This isn't school. That's what it's looking like right now. The duels at the VERY LEAST should be script. When the duels are written in normal format' date=' they look all garbled and stuff. It's a real mess of disestablished numbers and words.[/quote'] [spoiler=Script Format]Damon: [draws a card] I'll begin with this, Archfiend Soldier (1900/1500), in Attack Mode! I shall then end my turn by placing two cards face-down.Winston: [draws a card] I set my monster face-down! And I shall place THREE card face-down! I end.Damon: Alright, my move! [draws a card] This monster is right up your alley. I summon my Royal Knight in Attack Mode! (1300/800) Now my knight, ATTACK!Winston: So sad.Damon: What?Winston: You rammed your knight into this monster. [Monster flipped up] My Oppressed People! (400/2000)Damon: Damn!Winston: Your little stunt cost you dearly. [spoiler=Normal Format- [b]CREDIT TO LARRYCOTTER[/b]]“Draw!” she said confidentially. “I Summon Shining Abyss in attack mode!”A second fairy appeared next to her Witch. It looked as if it was built out of several blue balls, decorated with big golden wings and other golden pieces. (1600/1800)“I attack Boarden with my Dunames Dark Witch!”The witch flew forwards to attack the skateboard, but a blue, shiny net appeared between the two of them.“Trap Card activate! Morphtronic Bind! While I control a Morphtronic Monster, monsters with a level equal to or higher than four cannot attack.” He seemed to enjoy this Duel in a sadistic way. “You’re blocked, and I’ll finish you next Turn.”“We’ll see about that. I set a card, and end my Turn!”A hologram appeared on her side too, and Sy drew a card.“You’ll hit zero, whatever you’ve got there. Morphtronics, attack!”The robots jumped at her again, and were blocked by a shiny silvery shield. Notice there are actual action scenes in the duel. In your version, it just sounds like they're playing with just the cards, no holograms. (Espa Roba voice)I THINK I SEEM TO RECOGNIZE THE PROPERLY WRITTEN SCENE I AM SURE YOU JUST COPYPASTED IT FROM A GREAT WORK OF ART FROM A WRITER WHO JUST FORGOT TO COPYRIGHT HIS WORK CREDIT GIVEN! MY CAPS LOCK IS STUCK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanAtlus Posted April 11, 2010 Report Share Posted April 11, 2010 This should be a place that's FUN for EVERYONE. This isn't school. That's what it's looking like right now. The duels at the VERY LEAST should be script. When the duels are written in normal format' date=' they look all garbled and stuff. It's a real mess of disestablished numbers and words.[/quote'] [spoiler=Script Format]Damon: [draws a card] I'll begin with this, Archfiend Soldier (1900/1500), in Attack Mode! I shall then end my turn by placing two cards face-down.Winston: [draws a card] I set my monster face-down! And I shall place THREE card face-down! I end.Damon: Alright, my move! [draws a card] This monster is right up your alley. I summon my Royal Knight in Attack Mode! (1300/800) Now my knight, ATTACK!Winston: So sad.Damon: What?Winston: You rammed your knight into this monster. [Monster flipped up] My Oppressed People! (400/2000)Damon: Damn!Winston: Your little stunt cost you dearly. [spoiler=Normal Format- [b]CREDIT TO LARRYCOTTER[/b]]“Draw!” she said confidentially. “I Summon Shining Abyss in attack mode!”A second fairy appeared next to her Witch. It looked as if it was built out of several blue balls, decorated with big golden wings and other golden pieces. (1600/1800)“I attack Boarden with my Dunames Dark Witch!”The witch flew forwards to attack the skateboard, but a blue, shiny net appeared between the two of them.“Trap Card activate! Morphtronic Bind! While I control a Morphtronic Monster, monsters with a level equal to or higher than four cannot attack.” He seemed to enjoy this Duel in a sadistic way. “You’re blocked, and I’ll finish you next Turn.”“We’ll see about that. I set a card, and end my Turn!”A hologram appeared on her side too, and Sy drew a card.“You’ll hit zero, whatever you’ve got there. Morphtronics, attack!”The robots jumped at her again, and were blocked by a shiny silvery shield. Notice there are actual action scenes in the duel. In your version, it just sounds like they're playing with just the cards, no holograms. (Espa Roba voice)I THINK I SEEM TO RECOGNIZE THE PROPERLY WRITTEN SCENE I AM SURE YOU JUST COPYPASTED IT FROM A GREAT WORK OF ART FROM A WRITER WHO JUST FORGOT TO COPYRIGHT HIS WORK CREDIT GIVEN! MY CAPS LOCK IS STUCK! Good.Now my fic can become popular.But I'm afraid my fanfic's cursed. Someone keeps banning al my readers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Weather Report - Stand Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I'LL read it for you! like I should've been doing... Anyways, I'm slightly peeved. Over the past few weeks... and every now and then... people CONTINUOUSLY make new topics for their fics... whenever they make a new chapter. Shouldn't the mods start doing more locking? Just a suggestion, but it may be helpful to teach some kids a lesson. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I don't think there are active mods in this section anymore. Only Supers moderating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 This matter is being discussed in the Moderator's Forum. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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