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travis the black knight

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This card is overpowered, more attack and defense then blue eyes, and a effect that would be overpowered if it was a lv 1 and 0/0. That effect needs to be made better. maybe you need to pay 2000LP?

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My first card wasn't worded any better, but I can hardly understand your card

 

I like and can see the concept, but the way the card is worded makes it incomprehensible

 

Change the type to Spellcaster/Effect because it is already is a dark attribute monster, the attribute symbol in the corner of the card dictates that.

 

Next, I think that the effect should be worded more like this:

 

"Once per turn, you can take control of 1 face up DARK monster your opponent controls until the endphase."

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  • 9 months later...

The first card reminds me of "Dark Necrofear", but without the destruction requirement. Still overpowered, plus be more specific and do what everyone else has said.

The second card's pic is so overused. 'dark/dragon' = 'Dragon'. OCG:

"When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle, Special Summon 1 Level 7 or lower Dragon-Type monster to your side of the field in face-up Defense Position."

Also increase to Lv.8.

 

2/10

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Defense Position not defence position....opponent's not opponents......Field not field....1st card is OP....second is "meh"....That's all folks...

 

stop with the Field not field thing field isnt capped look at the cards.

 

 

anyways these cards have TERRIBLE OCG and Terrible pics and OP. sorry but my honest score is 0/0 but 1/0 is my highest charity score for these

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