Dimensional Prophecy

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OK here is the official thread for my "Warp" cards in my Dimensional Prophecy card set. I now I had many others for this concept. So for now on I will post my new cards here. So please rate them and give me any ideas on improvements.

 

Update: One new card and all cards with OCG fixing which I can see.

 

I got bored so I made a story for them:

In the back dimensions of the universe lives a species of creatures who can move freely between dimensions and unaffected by time itself. These creatures are some the most dangerous you will ever encounter in your life if you are lucky to survive against them, but there is a group of humans who have been worshiping them and practiced ancient rituals which allowed them also to move between dimensions. These wizards and warrior learned how to control them and declared war on all other dimensions and will they be prepared for this attack or will they be destroyed?

 

Here is my cards:

 

Credit:

http://www.freewebs.com/lasvegasghosts/nullportal-1.jpg

http://fc65.deviantart.com/fs9/i/2006/14...eturns.jpg

http://media.photobucket.com/image/spellcaster/TheFlyingPotatoes64/Immortal%20Beings/spellcaster1.jpg?o=83

Arcane Trigger IMG I got from photobucket.com I lost the IMG link and still looking for the URL.

[†Gravity Binder†]

Nice concept yet again and i like the story.... so far.... 9/10 excellent

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So what needs improvement if you only gave me a 9/10?

[†Gravity Binder†]

More cards i suppose.... >.> and OCG errors....

[.Requiem]

OK I do see some OCG Flaws I will fix them later.

[†Gravity Binder†]

Good to hear ^_^

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Anyone else want to rate. Come on I worked hard on these cards.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

Normal Summoned

 

Set

 

Special Summoned

 

attack your opponent directly

 

Summoned

 

Life Points

 

Special Summon

 

level 3 or lower

 

Warp monster

 

Deck

 

Attack Position

 

one = 1

 

level 4 or lower

 

hand

 

Defense Position

 

your side of the field = your field

 

level 7 or less

 

every = each

[Sleepy]

the whole idea is good .. that deck is really fast for summoning warp monsters, but you need another high level monster. I would summon the level 4 or less monsters you have there just for defense and for tribute with that spell card to special summon the dimentional choas worm. Is like the center of the deck by the moment.

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Thanks and a lot more OCG Flaws then I realized. Well yea I'm still making the cards for it.

[Zeppeli Gyro Supreme]

"Warp" monster= Warp Monster, because it's a type.

 

ATK = Attack when referring to the ability to attack.

 

lifepoints= Life Points

 

3 star or lower= Level 3 or lower

 

"When this card is destroyed as a result of battle..."

 

"Remove from play, from your side of the field, 3 or more Warp Monsters.."

 

Level is capitalized, one = 1, and so on.

 

The set sounds cool, but you should work a bit on your OCG.

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I know I'm still working on it, but if you look at my other sets and how they improved.

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Bump now with the OCG fixes. ^_^

[Holy Redeemer]

9.8/10 dude nice but in the icy serphant one you spelled Chaos wrong u put Choas

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Thanks I fixed it.