Chief Cotton Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Such a pity the images suck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Such a pity the images suck. Well sorry... They're hand drawn, they're not supposed to be completely awesome... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Interesting, it's nice to see original artwork for cards these days... I also see that archetype creation is the way to go right now. However, there are only two things that seem to stand out: Grammar: 9.5/10 (Very well done with the grammar. However, nowadays "successfully" in the case of "Plasma Twin Defender" is omitted. For a reference or two, see "Raiza the Storm Monarch" or "Caius the Shadow Monarch". Also, "increase ATK by 200" should be "this card gains 200 ATK", etc.) Strategy: 9.0/10 (Hmm... This does bother me a little bit... Usually when one releases a brand new archetype, there are unique strategies that come with them, such as "Dark World", "Alien", "Lightforce", etc. Although these Plasma monsters have good effects, I don't really see a general idea except for typical ATK gain. Still, these monsters can pose a formidable threat when summoned in numbers and then used as fodder for your main Plasma monster. This critique isn't going to make a large impact on your score because 1) Since you aren't complete with making all of these monsters and support, I can't put too much pressure on the subject, and 2) Coinciding with the first reason, its a little too early for me to call the shots. Overall: 9.5 Outstanding! (I have faith in this particular archetype. Keep up the good work, Shradow.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabberwock Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 use Fuzzie's pix they are a big improvement to what you have now7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Such a pity the images suck. For some reason, this injustice I cannot truly ignore. FJCProductions: Haven't you heard the saying "if you don't have anything nice to say, don't say anything at all"? If I'm correct, there is a forum announcement stating that its best to give positive feedback rather than counterproductive negativity without anything helpful to say to the creator of the cards. Look at this for more, http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-84638.html Simply put FJCProductions, either put up or shut up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Blitskrieg, thx for positive feedback, and for telling off FJCProductions. I never thought of my cards to be archetype. Wait, what's an archetype? jabberwock, for the first four, I am using Fuzzie's pics, he just hasn't finished Plasma Shadows rendering yet, so I just put him on here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blitzkrieg98 Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Shradow: An archetype is a way to further specify and define a certain monster. "Goldd, Wu-lord of Dark World" is considered in the "Dark World" archetype because of the specific word(s) in the name that appears in numerous other cards. Think also the limbs of "Exodia the Forbidden One" and "Exodia" himself, he and his limbs are in the "Forbidden One" archetype. Support cards that specify "with [word] in its card name" (which has been changed to "'[archetype]' monster" or "'[archetype]' card") define this rule a little more. Cards have archetypes so they can be searched out specifically by card effects without actually having to use their type, attribute, ATK, DEF, name, Level, or whether it is a Normal or Effect Monster. ...ahem, I do apologize for an extended explanation... Whether online or not, I'm famous (or infamous) for speaking descriptively... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Thank you. I don't mind long explanations. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 i love the back rounds fuzzie gave u! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Such a pity the images suck. WOW. :shock: I hope you like being outvoted, and being proven wrong! :D The reason you THINK that his drawing are not good, is because, true, he does not seem to be a pro artist, but he still draws very well. The reason you think that they suck, is because they are not professional looking, exactly. Adding backgrounds and boldening the colors helps this. I believe that they sharpen the images slightly for real cards also using technology, and they have a more advanced system than GIMP, or Paint, so, therefore they look more professional. When people draw their pics, you must at lest give them a little more credit than picking them off the internet. It shows that they care about making cards, so even if they do suck, which is DEFINATLY NOT the word I would use to describe this card, they at least took the time to draw, and scan them, or at least draw them on the computer. So, how is it; do you like being proven wrong, FJCProductions? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Rendered Plasma Shadow added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 cool render. good job fuzzie. and the pic are good quality! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 is it my imagination or did you have a yellow one before O_o? I feel like I may be wrong and saw an optical illusion,....... your rate is 10/10 by now :D your pics and fuzzie's ability to add color to them combined are making pro pics... originality makes a + 2 so 12/10 lol I couldn't have countered that neg comment better than all of you WOW!!! KEEP doing it althouth I doubt someone else will say anything mean to this threat again LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Um... I did... Well, Plasma Mage added... again... I don't know where it went... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gamekrazzy Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 good effects and everything. just because the pics are awsome though I give you 10/10. would have been 8/10 with out your nice pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Radiant F.U.R.Y.™ Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 drew and scanned.minor editing with paint or GIMP. (my guess)Considering the proccess you used, these pics are great!8/10 for pics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 18, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 Plasma Synchron and Plasma Elemental added, still waiting for renders from Fuzzie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 18, 2008 Report Share Posted December 18, 2008 i love that u keep adding new cards. keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Plasma Synchron and Plasma Elemental added' date=' still waiting for renders from Fuzzie.[/quote'] WHAT? I sent you the renders already! :? Check again, and if they are still not there, Tell me, and I'll pm them to you again. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 You never sent them to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 ACK! I did! It must not have gooten through. I'll do it again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Pics are lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Some images are better than others. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 19, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Rendered Plasma Synchron and Elemental. Best work yet, Fuzzie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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