∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 ~the first copy of this card has been removed~ here is the second: this is the third: comment and critisize.the pic credit goes to photobucket.i found it there :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altαir Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Don't capitalize field and capitalize Monster Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Effect = effect Monster = monster Monster Card If you do this = If you do Field = field_____________________________________ I like the pic. ^_^ I'd change the name a bit. Dark Fiend sounds meh-ish to me. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Don't capitalize field and capitalize Monster Card. well' date='perhaps you could give me a full fix like i requested? 0.o oh,well.thanks for the feedback anyway.[hr']Effect = effect Monster Card If you do this = If you do Field = field_____________________________________ I like the pic. ^_^ I'd change the name a bit. Dark Fiend sounds meh-ish to me. 8/10was that a full fix? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yugiohrulez! Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The extra deck is called the side deck. That's an ocg error. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 Don't capitalize field and capitalize Monster Card. well' date='perhaps you could give me a full fix like i requested? 0.o oh,well.thanks for the feedback anyway.[hr']Effect = effect Monster = monster Monster Card If you do this = If you do Field = field_____________________________________ I like the pic. ^_^ I'd change the name a bit. Dark Fiend sounds meh-ish to me. 8/10was that a full fix? That was all the errors I saw. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.arx Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 3 or more times- 3 or more turnsLimited Edition-1st edition. Needs change of sticker otherwise.Spacing: Words.Words- Words. Words. Kazuki Takahashi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 3 or more times- 3 or more turnsLimited Edition-1st edition. Needs change of sticker otherwise.Spacing: Words.Words- Words. Words. Kazuki Takahashi 3 or more turns would not make sense :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The extra deck is called the side deck. That's an ocg error. Extra deck is the fusion deck, NOT the side deck. And it's newer OCG for Fusion deck, so theres no error. :neutral: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 The extra deck is called the side deck. That's an ocg error. Extra deck is the fusion deck' date=' NOT the side deck. And it's newer OCG for Fusion deck, so theres no error. :neutral:[/quote'] i don't get this.is anyone gonna fully fix it correctly and STATE that,or is this thread going to waste? :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoend except by the effect of a Monster Card. Once per turn, you can pay 1600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type Synchro monster from your Extra Deck or Graveyard. If you do, all Synchro monsters on the field gain 100 ATK. This effect can only be used 3 times each time this card is on the field. If this effect has been used 3 times, destroy this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoend except by the effect of a Monster Card. Once per turn' date=' you can pay 1600 Life Points to Special Summon 1 Fiend-Type Synchro monster from your Extra Deck or Graveyard. If you do, all Synchro monsters on the field gain 100 ATK. This effect can only be used 3 times each time this card is on the field. If this effect has been used 3 times, destroy this card.[/quote']THANK YOU! (except you spelled "Summoned" wrong.oh well.)here is new version: i changed name as well,and the kazuki "Takusushi" thing i did as well :lol: i will edit first post.COMMENT please, People! demented, rep will be given :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I see no spaces between sentences. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I see no spaces between sentences. what do you mean by that? you mean after the sentences? 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 OMG! this is so real! Can you give me the URL of the guy who posted it there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lala7777 Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 nice pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shradow Posted December 14, 2008 Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I see no spaces between sentences. what do you mean by that? you mean after the sentences? 0.o Yes. That's what it looks like to me atleast. I'm not sure, but it looks like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 14, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 14, 2008 I see no spaces between sentences. what do you mean by that? you mean after the sentences? 0.o Yes. That's what it looks like to me atleast. I'm not sure' date=' but it looks like that.[/quote'] meh will fix :) OMG! this is so real! Can you give me the URL of the guy who posted it there? i made the card. i believe the URL is http://i418.photobucket.com/albums/pp267/ichigo_gin/BF-AW.jpg .thanx for feedback' date=' people :) [/color'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Extra Deck, If you use this effect, good pic, You can only use this effect 3 times. Lower case field, If you use this effect 3 times, destroy this card. Change 1600 to half your Life Points. Lower case the first effect and monster card. I would change the Level to 6. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 here is improved version with your comment put into consideration.however, i know some of your corrections are wrong, and i did not put them here.i will put this version into the first post as well.thank you for feedback. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark91g Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 kool 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 all the above has been said :) the only thing I have to point out is that the pic is from an actual REAL yugioh Synchro monster: Black Feather - Armored Wing 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
∮.Ғσяgσттeи.SσℓÐιєя.∮ Posted December 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 all the above has been said :) the only thing I have to point out is that the pic is from an actual REAL yugioh Synchro monster: Black Feather - Armored Wing 8/10really? 0.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 all the above has been said :) the only thing I have to point out is that the pic is from an actual REAL yugioh Synchro monster: Black Feather - Armored Wing 8/10really? 0.oI thought it was to good to be made by someone who's not named Kazuki Takahashi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarbleZone Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Precisely. This pic already exists, for a Synchro Monster named Black Feather - Armored Wing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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