Nobita Nobi Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Hello, i make a new card again, this time its effect is long. please rate, comment, correct, so i can fix it if something wrong. here it is [spoiler=card lore] This card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 FIRE monster you control. Each time this card Battle Position is changed send 1 card on the top of your Deck to your Graveyard. If this card battle a WIND monster destroy it without applying Damage Calculation and inflict damage to both player Life Points equal than half of ATK of the WIND monster destroyed.If this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard Special Summon 2 "Magma Bomb Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) to your opponent's field in Defense Position.The "Magma Bomb Token" is destroyed at the 2nd Standby Phase after it was Summoned. If the "Magma Bomb token" is destroyed by its own effect inflict 500 damage to the controller of the "Magma Bomb Token". pic credit:http://th06.deviantart.com/fs19/300W/f/2007/227/c/8/Wyrm_of_Fire_by_Ruth_Tay.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 the blackest parts are my suggestions by Releasing 2 FIRE monsters you control. Each time this card's Battle Position is changed, send If this card battles a WIND monster, destroy it without applying Damage Calculation and inflict damage to both players' Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.(forgot a space there) If this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard, Special Summon 2 "Magma Bomb" Tokens The "Magma Bomb" Tokens are destroyed during the 2nd Standby Phase after they where Summoned. If the "Magma Bomb" tokens are destroyed by their own effect, inflict 500 damage to the controller of the "Magma Bomb" Tokens. 8.5/10 :)just so you know...I am grading this based on the card lore, not on the actual text... so that means.,.. some errors from there may not actually be on the card :) but I can't really read what's on the card ^-^" sorry...and nice pic :) and by the way... can you please tell me what's the code for that "clic here" thing you did ? I've been looking for it :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Dont forget commas and suchgood OCG 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nobita Nobi Posted December 15, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 and by the way... can you please tell me what's the code for that "clic here" thing you did ? I've been looking for it :D you mean spoiler? its easy just type [spoiler=spoiler tittle] text here [/spoiler ]' date=' just like [img'] [/img] tags. and about the card i'll fix it later. so tired right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 thanks :D ... where I am it's 10:46 PM so I shouldn't be awake... good night now that I think about it :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. Hyde Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Right now its 1:49 and i have finals tommorow AIYEEE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 15, 2008 Report Share Posted December 15, 2008 Change to Each time this card's Battle Position is changed, good pic, send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard. Change to battles, Token"(s), card effect. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted December 16, 2008 Report Share Posted December 16, 2008 Pic looks kinda familiar. Not overused though (I don't think) The type & Attribute info on the tokens are backward... 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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