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Magma Wyrm


Nobita Nobi

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Hello, i make a new card again, this time its effect is long.

please rate, comment, correct, so i can fix it if something wrong.

 

here it is

 

MagmaWyrm.jpg

 

[spoiler=card lore] This card is cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card only can be Special Summoned by Releasing 2 FIRE monster you control. Each time this card Battle Position is changed send 1 card on the top of your Deck to your Graveyard. If this card battle a WIND monster destroy it without applying Damage Calculation and inflict damage to both player Life Points equal than half of ATK of the WIND monster destroyed.If this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard Special Summon 2 "Magma Bomb Token" (Pyro-Type/FIRE/Level 1/ ATK 0/ DEF 0) to your opponent's field in Defense Position.The "Magma Bomb Token" is destroyed at the 2nd Standby Phase after it was Summoned. If the "Magma Bomb token" is destroyed by its own effect inflict 500 damage to the controller of the "Magma Bomb Token".

 

 

pic credit:

http://th06.deviantart.com/fs19/300W/f/2007/227/c/8/Wyrm_of_Fire_by_Ruth_Tay.jpg

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the blackest parts are my suggestions

 

by Releasing 2 FIRE monsters you control.

 

Each time this card's Battle Position is changed, send

 

If this card battles a WIND monster, destroy it without applying Damage Calculation and inflict damage to both players' Life Points equal to half the ATK of the destroyed monster.(forgot a space there)

 

If this card is destroyed and sent to Graveyard, Special Summon 2 "Magma Bomb" Tokens

 

The "Magma Bomb" Tokens are destroyed during the 2nd Standby Phase after they where Summoned.

 

If the "Magma Bomb" tokens are destroyed by their own effect, inflict 500 damage to the controller of the "Magma Bomb" Tokens.

 

 

8.5/10 :)


just so you know...I am grading this based on the card lore, not on the actual text... so that means.,.. some errors from there may not actually be on the card :) but I can't really read what's on the card ^-^" sorry...and nice pic :)

 

and by the way... can you please tell me what's the code for that "clic here" thing you did ?

I've been looking for it :D

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and by the way... can you please tell me what's the code for that "clic here" thing you did ?

I've been looking for it :D

 

you mean spoiler? its easy just

 

type [spoiler=spoiler tittle] text here [/spoiler ]' date=' just like [img'] [/img] tags.

 

and about the card i'll fix it later. so tired right now

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