butthead44 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 i made the changes you guys told me to make and thanks for your help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Good OP card so what's the effect??Oh wait It is a normal card ok.Please fix it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 make sure u mark the card as an effect monster. and bad OCG. fix that. make it an effect monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 OPOCGEffect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Vanillas = bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Senbanzakura Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I agree with the above posters. Make the changes needed. Keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alastar Rainford Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 even with the effect it is Overly OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I see you wrote the effect :) but you forgot to mark it as an effect monster is still overpowered.... I'll give you a hint :D whenever you are doing a card... never EVER . put more than 5000 ATK on it.... and if its more than 3000... you must have a really good reason... (divine beasts and gods don't count.) Im talking about a really big negative effect and really tough summoning requirements....for now... the pic is a 10/10 but the overall card is ... 4/10 keep trying. and before I forget...this is a mistake that lots of new people tend to do: do not make another different post in case that you are planing on fixing something from this card...click where it says= Edit near the card in this page....don't know if you new but people tend to do that alot or post the updates of their cards as their own comments ^-^"o and almost forgot.......... Dragon Girl is not a real type... I suggest dragon, spellcaster, fairy, zombie or fiend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor Cobra Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 No effect, overpowered, used pic, lower ATK to 3000, DEF To 2400. Level to 8. 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 What is it with you newbies?! First driving Max as far to start a war against you, and then you go around being stupid by typing 'ultamate rare card'?! I mean why do you noobs don't make effects of it? Sheezus f*cking christ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I like the pic, that would go well with the dragon deck i made, but i agree with everyone else about it being overpowered. change atk between 3000 and 3500 and the def to about 2600 at the most i can see that you wrote an effect even though you didnt click on the effect button i can see 1 or 2 ocg error as well "When this card is normal summoned" also change may to can.overall, i would say 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 I forgot to rate! 3/10 Because it is ur first try. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 OPOCGMake this an effect card too. But good pic. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 Hey, guess what? Read my Signature, you're meat for my fool mouth! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Husky16 Posted December 19, 2008 Report Share Posted December 19, 2008 nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 WHAT = 6500 ATK!NO NO NO AND NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Nice pic though!WHAT = 6500 ATK!NO NO NO AND NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Nice pic though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 WHAT = 6500 ATK!NO NO NO AND NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Nice pic though!WHAT = 6500 ATK!NO NO NO AND NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Nice pic though! Don't double post! @ butthead44- when are you going to edit that card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 good cardno...great card!and nice pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
butthead44 Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 What is it with you newbies?! First driving Max as far to start a war against you' date=' and then you go around being stupid by typing 'ultamate rare card'?! I mean why do you noobs don't make effects of it? Sheezus f*cking christ![/quote'] listen here mooth i am new and that doesnt mean u can be mean to me this is my first card u could at least say good try or something lets see your first card nobody is perfect so get it straight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 still seems kinda overpowered to me ^-^ my suggestion:make it only attack twice, not 4 times.. keep it at one time onlywrite at the begining ^-^" : This card cannot be Special Summonedand there you go :) then its not overpowered anymore..you may not think that way, but this card is a one-turn-kill card 6/10 keep improving ;)did I already told you that I like the PIC :) ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 i would add to the effect "This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 3 Dragon-type monsters" this will help out with the overpowered ATK and DEF to add with the effect overall... for your first card ill say 8/10 keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 ummmm......not that bad it's a really cool image on that card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 After a period make sure to put a space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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