Yu-Gi-Oh!: The story of a Legend continues... (Finished)

[RyanAtlus]

Chap 22 is up!

It just needs a few more lines to end it.

Sry for Yamata not being in it.

[ragnarok1945]

your duels remain as impressive as always, I'm glad to see it

[RyanAtlus]

lol you always say that

[ragnarok1945]

and it's true every single time, you know

[RyanAtlus]

Well, I might tell you already that the next duel will be a duel in which an orb is won.

[ragnarok1945]

that's good to hear. You going to up it up soon?

[RyanAtlus]

Chap 22 is now complete!

[ragnarok1945]

still only the set up. I'll wait for the duel itself

[RyanAtlus]

He plays a Spellcaster LV Deck. Leveling seems a good way of expressing patience. I first wanted to do great moth.

[ragnarok1945]

oh I see. Is great moth that hard to do?

[RyanAtlus]

no, but insects suck

since there is only 1 spellcaster lv archetype, he'll get the warriors too

[ragnarok1945]

what kind of warriors are we talking here?

[RyanAtlus]

warrior lv's of course...

[ragnarok1945]

then it should suit it just fine, nothing to worry about

[RyanAtlus]

Yeah, the writing goes slow because I want the following chapters to be good, because the last ones sucked.

[shiko11]

hmm... decent fanfic. I voted "super special awesome" cuz' i love the abridged sereis. honestly its 7.

[RyanAtlus]

Have you read it all?

[shiko11]

yeppers

[legendhiro]

i haven't finished this yet, but what i've ready is interesting. the duel format isn't what i would have chosen, but it works well enough. maybe add a little conversation in between turns here and there(?). either way the story is interesting enough that i'll definitely read it as i have time.

[RyanAtlus]

i haven't finished this yet' date=' but what i've ready is interesting. the duel format isn't what i would have chosen, but it works well enough. maybe add a little conversation in between turns here and there(?). either way the story is interesting enough that i'll definitely read it as i have time.

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I chose this format because I'm bad at describing monsters and their attacks, basically because they don't teach us that at school. There will be conversation during the more important Duels.

[RyanAtlus]

Bumpitybump

In parts I-IV, the "Card of the Duel" is given for each Duel. It's the card I liked a lot in that Chapter.

[RyanAtlus]

Bump

I really do give +reps for reading :'(

[RyanAtlus]

Chapter 23 is up!

This Duelist is the closest I'll ever get to a Gay Clown!

[Mysty]

That was a strange chapter. These "orbs" are starting to sound like Millennium Items plot wise, i.e., there is an evil mastermind trying to get all of them for mind-blowing power. Yami Bakura fit that idea exactly, and now the leader of the Society of Shade seems similar.

[Nexev]

To be straight your huge mega problem is that you seperate the duels from the actual plot, you need to intergrate them more so they are more part of the story (like how Mystery Guest's and LEgendhiro's characters talk and feel emotions during the duels there's is more bookish and yours is more play by play).