Thomas Wolf Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Alright, I know that the Archfiend are based on chess peices already. But I've had this idea off and on sience before I knew that. Also these are nothing like Archfiends. This set will be finished once I create the King and Queen. I'm still trying to decide if I want to have only 1 king and 1 queen or a LIGHT and DARK king and a LIGHT and DARK queen. I added to effect to make him more of a ghost, but I also keep his original effect. I looked for a better pic for her, one that fit more with the rest of my cards but I couldn't find one that wasn't blurry. I haven't gotten around to looking for a less blurry pic, but looking over it this one isn't that bad. I like this one's effect. He's like Spirit Reaper meets Grandmole. I don't know if this is better. Ok, so Gaia has always been my fav card, so I figured if I was making a knight I wanted atlest 1 to have his name. Effect: Tribute 1 "Chess Pawn" to reduce this card's ATK to half it's origanel ATK until the end of the Battle Phase and allow this card to attack your opponent directly. If this card is attacked discard 1 "Chess Pawn" from your hand, this card gains ATK equal to the level of the disacared monster x200. I'm thinking Devil Gaia's second effect combined with this power up might be alittle much, I didn't take that into consideration. Should I work on that? Another effect that may need worded better. I kinda want to add a "Change this card to Defence position if it's ATK is lower than 1000" claus to the effect but Idk... Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or set. This card can only be Spcial Summoned if you control 4 "Chess" monsters. You can only contol 1 "Chess King" at a time. This monster cannot be attacked if you control another "Chess" monster. When this card destroys a monster by battle and inflicts damage to your opponent's Life Points, this card gains 1000 ATK. You take no battle damage from a battle involving this card. When this card is destroyed you take damage equal to this card ATK. Discard 1 card from your hand to negate a Spell or Trap card that that would destroy a "Chess" monster(s) you control. The most powerful peice in the game of chess. Hopefully not overpowered... Do not suggest I change any attribute because my chess set will only have LIGHT and DARK monsters, like on a chess board. As always Art credit is in the card creater section There's probably afew OCG errors, but give me cerdit for creativity?All "Chess Pawn" monsters gain 500 ATK and DEF. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all Spell and Trap Zones are also treated as Monster Card Zones and can be occupied by any mondter except a "Chess Pawn" monster. Only 1 card can be set per turn. Any card set in the Spell and Trap zone is placed horizontally on the field and can be attacked. If a Trap or Quickplay Spell Card is attacked it is activated instantly and the attack is negated. Cards in these zones cannot attack or be attacked if the card's controller controls a monster in the Monster Card Zone directly infront of it if that card. This card cannot be destroyed by the effect of a card you control. When this card is destroyed, destroy all cards in both player's Spell and Trap Zones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I think u can use better OCG, your OCG is good but seems not so original I liked the cards, except for the sea maiden the pic is ANIMatic <,<Nice effects 8/10 keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 I think you should post these cards on the Finished/Set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shocked Posted December 21, 2008 Report Share Posted December 21, 2008 Oh, I forgot the rating7.5/10Nice card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 Okay, new cards added. I almost have the full set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A●O●J Posted December 22, 2008 Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 The chess idea has already been used for Archfiend monsters, which are real cards. Ocg is pretty good, just needs a little fixes hear and there. The pictures are pretty cool as well. Its neat that u have variety in the chess pieces like different element pawns and such. all in all. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 I know the Archfiends have the chess idea. But like it says above, I wanted to do this long before I knew that, and these guys are alot differnt.I didn't mean to have my Divine Gatekeeper in place of my Ghost warrior... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 22, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qdb777 Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 nice cards i play chess sometimes 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Thanks for the rating, and the Rep. Cards have been edited, rate and comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Chess Pawn - Axeweilder:When this card is Summoned, this card is unaffected by your opponent's card effects and cannot be targeted by an attack until your opponent's End Phase Chess Pawn - Ghost Warrior:add a comma after "IfWhen this monster is destroyed by battle" for your mermaid... the pic is so different to the rest ^-^" and didn't you mean?: Chess Pawn - Sea Maiden Chess Pawn - Dragolingadd a comma after 2 "Chess Pawn" monstersadd a comma after during your Standby Phasedeck = Deckif you don't this card is destroyed = If you don't, destroy this card. Chess Pawn - Best TamerDefence Position = Defense Position the last Pawn... sorry for not writing but too many places where to change the commas ^-^" I'll comment on the rest some other time. So far it looks like a great set 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Thanks for corrections and the rating. I know that I make alot of Spelling and OCG mistakes, I'm trying to get better.More edits have been made, better now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 not bad. ocg is a bit off in a few places, but the ideas are solid. the only one i don't like is sea maiden, but i can't really put my finger on why... anyway, 8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 23, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 It's probably the pic. Like I said, I wanted it to be more like the others but I couldn't find one that wasn't blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Force_Flex Posted December 23, 2008 Report Share Posted December 23, 2008 Defense DEFAttack ATK a few more but im lazy! prty good. i was looking foward to the kings and queens... and you should make a chessboard feild spell... and mabey chess strategy traps and spells good start i cant wait to see were its gonna go! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 King and Queen are up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dominantruler007 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 They are nice 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGAKITTY Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Heh...have you ever played Archon? That's what this set reminds me of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scorch848 Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 hm....could use better pics but there good. 7 /10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 24, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 Thanks for the ratings. Field Spell added Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 24, 2008 Report Share Posted December 24, 2008 excellent additions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 Thanks. When it came to the field card, I knew that I had a chance to come up with something compleatly new so I had to run with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted December 25, 2008 Report Share Posted December 25, 2008 you did a good job of it too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted December 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 27, 2008 I was gonna add more cards, but I don't got any ideas. Anyway, I changed the image on "Chess World" I think it looks cooler now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Susie Posted January 23, 2009 Report Share Posted January 23, 2009 woah great pictures where did you get them. if i were you id make a dark and light king and queen! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.