Dr.Pain Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Galatic StarshipArtworkLower right of card: PeterLeeThe CardEffectWhen this card is Summoned to the field, Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand or deck with 1500 ATK points or less. Once per turn, you can equip a Machine-Type monster to this card. It is treated as an Equip Spell card. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF points for every card that is equiped to this card. You can remove 1 equip card from this card to prevent this card from being destroyed. You can Special Summon monsters from your Spell and Trap Card Zones that have been equiped to this card by this card's effect. Monsters Special Summoned this way gain 200 ATK and DEF points.Final NotesYou May: RateGive contructive critizmOCG errorsGive commentsGive Suggestions Thank You! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I like the idea very much, maybe 2800 DEF at least? Its a great card apart from some small grammar errors, such as use "can" instead of "may" (Don't worry, everyone does it at some point.) I'd like to fix the wording for you, here goes! When this card is Summoned, Special Summon 1 Machine-Type monster from your hand or deck with an ATK of 1500 or less. Once per turn, you can equip a Machine-Type monster you control to this card as an Equip Spell card. This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for every card that is equipped to this card by this effect. When this card would be destroyed, you can destroy an equip card equipped to it instead. During your mainphase, you can Special Summon monsters from your Spell and Trap Card Zones that have been equipped to this card by this card's effect. Monsters Special Summoned by this effect gain 200 ATK and DEF. If I got something wrong, (such as being able to special summon equipped machines as a multi-trigger effect or quick effect as newer rule books put it), just tell me and I'll fix the reword. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Command Knight Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 You spelled "equipped" wrong. Slightly overpowered being able to Special Summon monsters from the deck. Also not being destroyed by removing equipped cards from it. If you put it in a Machine Deck it would be invincible. Lower the ATK and put that you can remove an equipped card so that it is not effected by an effect or destroyed by an Atttack.7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Card is solid. I see around 2 decent cards every few days, this would be one of them. Possibly negate the effect of the summoned monster, to lower the chances of it being abused. Image works as well. No visible OCG Errors. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pitchblack64 Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 overpowered but really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 You spelled "Galactic" wrong. OCG errors: Deck every each Spell & Trap Card Zones ATK and DEF points_______________________________ 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 inb4gotchaforce Fortresses are awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ Chidori-Kun Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 "Galatic" = Galactic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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