Brendano Harns Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Kudos to Gamekrazzy for the great tutorial. The art for the card is mine. Enjoy! :D [spoiler=Effect]1 non-Tuner monster - 1 Dark Tuner monsterWhen a card effect is activated, you can remove 1 monster from your Graveyard from play to negate it, and return it to the respective owner's hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Stars are located on the left side of the card, not the left. Pic is bad. Here's how I think the part of the effect should be. ....deck to negate it's activation and destroy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 You have not seen a Dark Synchro before, have you? :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I think is: to negate it, and destroy it = to negate the card and destroy it also I think the "1 Dark Tuner monster" should go before the "1 non-Tuner monster" part great drawing.. I don't know about other people but I enjoy looking at this guy ...:D kinda reminds me to leviathan.. it kinda fits into the dark section and the fact that is a drawings gives you more points ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Yeah, I have seen a Dark Synchro. I like card types that are real, not fake ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I almost forgot 2 things 1) didn't you mean "sleeping serpent" ? just curious2)sinse your deck as almost 70 cards.. this card's effect is going to never run out.. it's just unfair... that seems even more powerful than your As synchro monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xing Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Yeah shouldn't it be Sleeping Serpant like sleepy said? What does Seeping mean anyway lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YoitZBRiAn21 Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 The card sucks. The picture is weird. The real ones are much better.Why did you even called it Sleeping Serpent! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I DID mean Seeping Serpant! sleepy, It has 2100 ATK, it isn't that hard to destroy, and it is kind of hard to get out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Shaymin:. Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Ya it looks pretty good 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nnoitra Jiruga Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Very well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted December 31, 2008 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 Thnx! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted December 31, 2008 Report Share Posted December 31, 2008 I DID mean Seeping Serpant! sleepy' date=' It has 2100 ATK, it isn't that hard to destroy, and it is kind of hard to get out...[/quote'] not against high ATK decks but yes against most of them... for example.. lightsworns usually have low attacks besides that wolf that comes from the deck.. and my deck that I'm doing only have monsters with 1000 ATK or less.. it relies completely on effects from everywhere and your card negates them all....and its not that hard to get out.. you discard 1 spell card to special summon your dark tuner and use a low level monster as your normal summon and .. abra cadabra! its there.. I could have my deck in my hand and your deck is twise mine.. making you able to still end up wining..... sorry but this one I can't agree that is exactly balanced ^-^" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 It is a good Dark Synchro for your first. I don't really like the effect though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Lightray Daedalus- Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 also I think the "1 Dark Tuner monster" should go before the "1 non-Tuner monster" part Actually no...is ok like that...but you forget the explanatory text... weird ATK/DEF...effect could be overpowered since it can negate everything. 7/10 XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sigma Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 The effect is a little OP'ed, but it helps for those Homuncules( Can't spell) monsters since it requires cards removed from play. The pic is good (Since I can't even draw XD). 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fog38 Posted January 1, 2009 Report Share Posted January 1, 2009 Alot of people seem to get the "Dark Synchro" thing wrong, but you didn't, good job. Heres an example of a real "Dark Synchro" http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/One-Hundred_Eye_Dragon for all the non believers.As for the card; I like the pic a lot. A little too powerful, maybe lower its defense slightly or up it to the top 2 cards or make it just monster effects or just spell trap effects.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I may change it to three. I see how it is OPed now, because I meant to just make it countering monster effects. I could always make it a monster from the Graveyard, and pay 500 Life Points. That would probably balance it out. What do you think? I really would like to here some agreements/ disagreements with ideas before I change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
╬「Selatcia」╬ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 take out "1 card from" deck = Deck to negate the card effect___________________________________ As the above said, it's not bad for a first. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Okay, the card is.. semi-okay to me, but the DS is.... HORRID. OCG errors. pic is wierd. overall, 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dream Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Good Job!!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I may change it to three. I see how it is OPed now' date=' because I meant to just make it countering monster effects. I could always make it a monster from the Graveyard, and pay 500 Life Points. That would probably balance it out. What do you think? I really would like to here some agreements/ disagreements with ideas before I change it.[/quote'] yeah I would agree to that ... :D monster effects... and 3 cards.. that's more fair ^-^ question... if you are a main character.. and not exactly one of the bad guys.. why do you have a dark synchro ? :)oh well ...:D:D:D:D:D:lol::lol::D:D:D:D:D:lol::D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 ...Well, in 5D's, some of the enimies have Synchros, so it just depends on who is weilding the card. You may want to read my charachter's bio again, and pay attention to the "he is a cross between both" part. That may clear things up. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Future L Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Change to negate the activation and destroy it. Good pic, first line must be how to summon it. Why is the DEF so high? Lower to 2000. 7.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I am changing right now. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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