.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Great, I´ll read it! I´m writing chapter 8... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Well, HyuugaKing, have u read the others? I am soon gonna post Chapter 8The action is getting more intense, as Gohan now have to face an old adversary: BROLY!!! [align=center]Chapter 8: Fighting Madness!!! "Kamehameha!!" A large, blue energy beam erupted from Gohan´s hands, as it rushed towards Broly. It hitted him dead on, as he was engulfed in a dust cloud. But when it laid itself, Broly did not even have a scratch! He hadn´t even flinched!! He laughed again. "WAS THAT ALL?" He charged up a green energy ball in his hand, and launched it forward. It splitted into several, small balls that rushed towards Gohan. "YIKES!!" Gohan managed to dodge them all, but as he looked back, he saw that the energy balls were charging back at him! He flied down towards the ground, as he had thought to lure them. He continued to charge at the ground, as the energy balls came closer and closer. Suddenly, as he was right above the ground, he made a sharp turn up, and flied right over the ground, as the balls could not stop themselves and crashed into the ground behind him. Suddenly, Broly was right beside him, as he pummeled Gohan into a building, and dragged him along the wall. Then, Broly´s empty hand charged up a green ball which he threw into Gohan. A violent explosion of green energy was formed, as Broly continued, and grabbed Gohan´s leg. He then pummeled him into the ground, and threw another green energy ball. Another large explosion, as Broly grabbed Gohan and threw him into a building. Gohan flew straight through the walls inside, as Broly was waiting on the other side. Gohan realised this, as he suddenly turned around and flew straight at him!! "WHAT?" Gohan kicked him across the face, as he followed up with a powerful fist in the stomach. "ARGH!" Gohan then charged up a yellow energy beam and shot it at Broly. Broly shrugged himself, as he only stood there. Gohan observed him, as if he knew that something horrible was going to happen. "GRRRAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Suddenly, the surroundings was turning slight green, as it drew itself into Broly´s open hand. He suddenly held a small, green energy ball in his hand, as he threw it at Gohan. Gohan dodged it, but was in the same time wishing it had hitted him, as he saw how it landed in the opposite section of the city. Suddenly, a big, green explosion was seen, as half the city was decimated!! "DON´T YOU GET IT, FILTHY HALF-BLOOD?!!" said Broly. "EITHER YOU DIE, OR I´LL TURN THE ENTIRE CITY INTO ASHES!!!" "YOU....SHUT...UP!!!!! HAAAAAAHHHHH!!!" Gohan once again turned into a Super Saiyan, and charged at Broly. Both of them started to punch and kick eachother, as they flew through several buildings in the progress. Suddenly, Gohan was powerfully punched backwards by Broly, as he began to feel exhausted. "D-Damn it..." he thought. "Either Broly´s gotten stronger since his time in Hell, or I´m outta shape!" "HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!! WHAT IS IT, TIRED ALREADY?!" "NOT A CHANCE!!!" Both of them charged at eachother, but this time, Broly was faster, as he rammed Gohan with his shoulder, grabbed his arms, and shoved his knee into his back. "AAAUUGGHHH!!!!" As Broly began to press his knee into Gohan´s back, Gohan felt as if his arms were going to be ripped clean off. He was truly in pain, as he screamed louder. But suddenly, someone shouted something: "DESTRUCTO DISC!!!" Suddenly, a thin energy disc flew towards him and Broly! Broly dodged it, as did Gohan, who struggled himself free from Broly´s grip. Suddenly, he saw a small guy fly next to him. He had a red shirt, beige pants and black hair. He was smiling proudly, though he didn´t hit. "K-Krillin?!" said Gohan surprised. Krillin gave him a thumbs up. "Who else, hehe!" he replied. "Looks like Broly´s back, huh? Well, let´s send him back to hell!!" He foolishly charged Broly, and started to kick and punch him everywhere, but with no effect. Broly grabbed his hair, and launched a green energy ball into his face. Krillin flew into the horizon. "AAAAHHHHHH!!! HE´S ALL YOURS GOHAAAAAAANNNNNNNN........" "KRILLIN!! WHY YOU!!" He started to charge Broly, as he gave him a sharp uppercut. Broly shrugged, as he grabbed his arms around Gohan´s body, and began to squeeze him! "AAAHHHH...AAAAUUUGGGGHHHHH!!!!!!!!" Gohan could feel his ribs break, even hear them!! Broly smiled, as he squuezed him even harder. Gohan began to see blurry, as he was losing consciousness of the pain. Suddenly, something bashed Broly in the head! "UUGGGHHH!!!!" He dropped Gohan, as he was falling to the ground. But he regained his consciousness, and started to float in the air. He stretched out his hands, and then pulled them back. "KA...ME...HA...ME..." Broly was recovering from the blow, as he saw Gohan, but too late. "HAAAAAA!!!!!!!" A larger energy beam erupted from Gohan´s hands and launched itself at Broly! He was once again hitted dead on, but this time it damaged him! He flied above Gohan, but he seemed to be getting tired. Gohan prepared to finish him off, but suddenly, Broly started to shrink. His muscles disappeared, his hair turned black, and he became calmer.He had regained his Normal Form. "W-What...am I...d-doing here?!" he said surprised. He flew upwards, and darted off. Gohan was also surprised, as he reverted to his original form. "Huh?" he said, and scratched his head. "That was unusual. Oh well, guess I should get home!" He flied up in the air and speeded home. This entire day has been pretty weird for him. First, he is engulfed in a strange light, then, joining a team of heroes almost similar to his dad´s, and then he is attacked by Broly! But as he got closer to home, he stopped thinking about it, as he was soon to enjoy his mom´s splendid cooking! Meanwhile, at The Black Fortress... "WHAT??!!!" Black Doom was furious, as he saw flashbacks from Broly´s mind, where he fought a blond-haired teenager. "THIS...IS NOT GOKU!! WHO IS HE??!!!" "H-He...is Gohan..." replied Broly, still in his Normal Form. "...T-The son...of K-Ka-Kakarot..." "WHAT?! THE "SON"?!!!" Black Doom destroyed one of the Fortress´s pillars in fury, as it instantly rebuilded itself. "HOW CAN THIS BE??!! LUCARIO IS TRYING TO TRICK ME!!" "M-Maybe, master..." stuttered Kusana. "He has, like you, gathered NEW forces..." "Indeed he has, if this is one of his recruits!!" replied Black Doom angrily. "I must find more of these "Saiyans"...They will maybe prove...useful to me..." "In...Hell..." Broly replied. "There is a lot of Evil Saiyans...like me...and also...The Prince...may be persuaded....if you have so strong powers....that you are able...to control even ME..." "Hmmm...the Prince, eehhh...." Black Doom turned towards Broly. "Are you sure he is strong, then?" "Yes..." replied Broly. "Although...he may not be as strong as I am...he is almost as strong as Kakarot...which means..." "Which means...." continued Black Doom. "that I have to make a little visit to our....little Prince......What is his name?" "His...name...is Vegeta...." Meanwhile, Vegeta was training inside the Gravity Chamber, as he usually did since Goku died. He and Goku has been fierce rivals since the day they first met, and also, he never wanted to accept the fact that no matter how hard he tried, Goku was always more power ful than himself, The Prince! "I...MUST...DEFEAT....KAKAROT!!" he continually thought for himself, as he pushed his body to the limits, training at roughly 150 times the regular gravity!! "H-HE´S...JUST A...A LOW-CLASS...S-SCUM!!! WHILE I....AM THE...THE PRINCE OF ALL SAIYANS!!!!!" He continued to train, until he stopped, and went out of the room. Outside was a young boy, maybe seven-nine years old. He had a indigo training suit, an orange belt and purple hair. Vegeta smiled a bit when he saw him. "Trunks!" he said, as he bended down to him and rubbed him in the head. "Did you have a good time with mom?" "Great, dad!" said Trunks. "We went to the amusement park, and it was great!!" "You know, you should really take care of him sometimes." said a voice at the entrance. It was Bulma. "He hardly sees you during the day, as all you do is training! What is it good for, anyways? Your muscles aren´t getting bigger, you know!" Trunks laughed a bit, but turned silent when he saw the look upon his father´s face. "Hmpf!" he shrugged, and went past Bulma. "Stay out of my buisness! Trunks, stay with your mom!" He went outside, as he looked up into the sky. He sensed that something was getting closer, something evil. "W-What is this?!" he thought. "It´s...energy...It´s huge!!" Suddenly, he saw four figures approaching him. He prepared himself for a battle, but as the figures got closer, he began to recognize them. "W-What?! I-Impossible!!" The figures were now in front of him. They all wore body armor in different colours, which seemed to show their ranks. One of them had black hair that stretched itself to his knees. Another one was bald, and had more muscles than the others. And the third one looked exactly like Goku, although he was more paler in skin colour, and had slightly more muscles than Goku. They all smirked at him. "What is it, PRINCE Vegeta?!" laughed the black-haired one. "Are you AFRAID of us?!" "You killed me, Vegeta..." said the bald one. "...Now, I´M GLAD TO RETURN THE FAVOR!!" "Remember me, Vegeta?" said the Goku-looking one. "I may not be Kakarot, but I will prove myself a challenge to even YOU!!" Vegeta was scared. He remembered who they were... "R-Raditz! N-Nappa! TURLES?! N-No! IMPOSSIBLE!" "Noo..." said a fourth voice. Suddenly, Black Doom appeared in front of Vegeta. He shrugged. "Hmpf! Who the hell are you?! And why have you brought these Saiyans back from Hell?!" "Because, my dear prince..." Black Doom said. "I am giving you a chance to rally them once again!" "That is, if you accept his offer, Vegeta!" replied Raditz. Vegeta turned around, and started to walk away. "Hmf, not interested! Why would I rally low-life scum like yourselves?!" Turles was furious, as he charged Vegeta. Suddenly, Vegeta turned around and punched Turles straight through the chest! Blood gushed out of his mouth, as he was gasping for air. Vegeta tossed him up in the air, as he charged up a blue energy ball. "BIG BANG ATTACK!!!" The energy ball speeded towards Turles, as it exploded with awesome force upon impact, utterly destroying Turles. Raditz and Nappa backed away in fear, and suddenly, they abandoned Black Doom and flew away! "NO! GET BACK HERE, YOU COWARDS!!" he yelled after them, but Vegeta laughed. "Don´t worry about them!!" he said, and clasped his hands together, as he was charging a yellow energy blast. It grew bigger and bigger, as the ground shook. Black Doom backed away. "UGH! These Saiyans are getting me on my nerves!" "HAAAAAAHHHHHH!!! FINAL FLAAAASSHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" A gigantic energy beam erupted from Vegeta´s hands, as it rushed by Black Doom, and engulfed Raditz and Nappa in a great energy wave. They dissolved into ashes, and the beam dispersed. "Heh! Easy as usual!" he said, and crossed his arms in disappointment. "Well done, Vegeta!!" said Black Doom, as he was getting up. "I must say, I´m impressed!! You are more powerful than I expected!" "What does this have to do with me?! What do you want from me?!" "Even if you want it or not...you shall belong to ME!!" "WHA...AAAAUUGGHH!!!" Suddenly, Vegeta felt a sharp pain in his head, as if a bullet had been shot through it. Suddenly, an infection spread itself across his forehead. It started to glow, as he grabbed his head and tried to remove it. "It´s useless, Vegeta!" replied Black Doom. "My Mind Worms will soon have full control of your mind!! You can´t resist me!! YOU BELONG TO ME!!!!" Suddenly, Vegeta stopped to struggle, as he stood up and stared at Black Doom. He smirked. "Of course......My...Master...." "Aah, exellent!" he said. "Now, to fulfill my dreams of Universal Domination!!!"" To be continued... Vegeta has been brain-washed by Black Doom, making him forced to fulfill his utmost whim!! Will the Neo-Legion be able to save him? Or will The Prince Of Saiyans forever be lost? Stay tuned for the next thrilling chapter of:THE NEO-LEGION: REBIRTH OF EVIL![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Wow! Now we have Vegeta in the mix? I didn't really like Dragonball Z that much, but you make it really interesting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Thanx! Yea I kinda like DBZ very much, probably because of the KICKASS fighting!!! Also, Vegeta was in fact evil in the beginning in the series, so lets just say that Black Doom kinda, "re-awakened" his evil ambitions... Also, Two, important questions: 1: What do you think of the sequel´s Theme Song(The Return of Evil/O Fortuna)? 2: Isn´t Chapter 4 just sooooo romantic????? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I loved chapter four, it was very touching. Finally those two love birds tied the knot. What a great chapter. Things like that are hard to write, so bravo FinalFlash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 I know...but hey, I may not be a Romeo in real life, but I sure know how it feels like when two hearts, drawn towards eachother for seemingly an eternity, finally becomes one, and binds them for an eternity of love... but, a slight:WARNING!!!! I know this makes me sound like a bastard, but in the future chaps, something terrible WILL happen to them!(I think both you and I know, but don´t say anything, as it would ruin the entire plot) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 You wouldn't............ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Maaake me not to, eheheheeee........ I know...but hey' date=' I may not be a Romeo in real life, but I sure know how it feels like when two hearts, drawn towards eachother for seemingly an eternity, finally becomes one, and binds them for an eternity of love...[/quote'] Also, about this comment, I forgot to say: I´m a very, VERY, emotional writer. Feelings are, like, the Number One Priority for me, ESPECIALLY love and sadness, since I´m pretty damn good to express them in my writing.Also, a little pic for the two love birds, tihi! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 That is one of the troubles I have with writing, getting the emotion down. I have no problem with battles and comedy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Yea, I agree. I´m kinda good at describing those too, becuz I just love DBZ, as I said! But, if you REALLY want to write something emotional, here´s a tip: Listen to emotional music while writing! It works for me. Here are a few music suggestions: [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_vUVI47QX8g]The Promised Land[/url] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=viAVzqIBMZE&feature=related]Cloud Smiles[/url] [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h-0G_FI61a8]To Zanarkand[/url] All from Final Fantasy. Hope you write a really good love scene while listening to any of these! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Thanks, but I listened to Coldplay's "Fix you" when writing "120 Seconds". Was that chapter emotional to you? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Well, I have to agree there ^_^ Anyways, like the love bird pic and the songs from the last post? I am soon going to write on chapter 9 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Yeah, that was a very sweet. cute pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 OMG! Vegeta is evil......AGAIN!! Let´s see what happens now then... [align=center]Chapter 9: Earth, Fire and Wind!!! Naruto and Neji was back in the Konoha Village, and everything seemed to be normal, since the merchants were delivering their goods, the guards were on their posts, and all of the ninjas still were there. "Hey! Naruto, Neji!!" said a voice in front of them. There was another of the Konoha ninjas. He was dressed in a grey hood-coat and grey pants. His black hair was pointing out of his hood, and he had red tatoo-stripes in his face. It was Kiba. He looked happy to see them. "Hi Kiba!" said Naruto quickly. "How are you doing?" "Heh! I haven´t been better!" said Kiba, as he scratched his head. "By the way, you haven´t seen Akamaru around here? He and I are playing Hide and Seek!" "Why would we tell you, then?" said Neji. "If you are playing Hide and Seek, it is the meaning to guess, not to know!" "Hmf...and that should come from a Hyuuga! You cheated last time!" "HEY! I was NOT cheating!" "Oh, damn right you didn´t! You used the Byakuugan to find me!" "I did NOT!" "Did TOO!" "DID NOT" "DID TOO!" "Guys, stop it! Now, how are we supposed to find(crunch!) YYEEEOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!" Naruto flew high up into the air while holding his rear. Below him was a small dog with white fur and brown ears. He had a piece of Naruto´s overall in his mouth, as he shaked it and growled playfully. "Akamaru!!" Kiba was overjoyed, as he sat down in front of his pet. "I looked all over the place for you!! We must get to the Arena now, Akamaru!" "The Arena?" Neji looked serious. "Why are we needed there?" "I dunno." said Kiba, as he was more busy playing with Akamaru. "They said it was some kinda new combat test, and all Genin was to participate!" "When does it start?" asked Neji. "In about fifteen minutes!" replied Kiba. "That´s why I´ve been looking for Akamaru!" "Let us waste no more time, then!" said Neji, as he suddenly heard a soothing noise. And without warning, Naruto landed straight onto him! "AOW!!" "OOF!" "Naruto! Neji!" said Kiba worried. "Are you guys ok?!" "Have...never...been...better!" Naruto moaned sarcastically, as he and Neji laid in a messy heap. Later, at the Genin Exam Arena, all the other ninjas were gathered, as they all were exited towards the test. "I can´t wait to get in there and pummel someone in the face!!!" said Sakura, as her eyes seemed to burn with eagerness. "I will win, for the honor of The Leaf Village!" said Rock Lee proudly. "Now, now, youngsters..." said Kakashi, who sat in the audience. "Remember, this is not a thing to win or lose! It´s a very important combat test that will do nothing but test you!" "Yeah, yeah..." said Naruto, as he pulled a few punches in the air. "Bring ´em!! I´m ready!!!" "You really are hopeless..." sighed Kakashi, as a bell rang. The first match was about to begin. "The combatants are: Aburame Shino and Inuzuka Kiba!" said the judge in the middle of the arena. "Will Aburame Shino and Inuzuka Kiba please enter the ring?" "YAHOOOO!!!" shouted Kiba, as he and Akamaru jumped from the spectator balcony and landed inside the ring. "AALLLRRRIIIGGHH!!!" "Hmpf...Don´t choke on your pride, Drama Queen..." muttered Shino, who stood in front of Kiba. "OH YEAH?!" replied Kiba exitedly "Well, Akamaru and I have learned a couple of NEW tricks since the last time!!" "Like what? SIT?" Suddenly, both Akamaru and Kiba sat down. The crowd was laughing, and Kakashi made a facepalm. "Heehhhh...." he sighed. "He still hasn´t learned to control his "animal instincts", I see......" "HEY!!" Kiba shouted. "S-STOP DOING THAT!! YOU WILL PAY!! NOW, AKAMARU!!" Akamaru rushed at Shino, who launched insect clouds at him. Akamaru moved faster, and dodged the insects, and then jumped up on Shino. Suddenly, he transformed into a copy of Kiba, and kicked him into the air! The real Kiba followed after, and kicked him down again. "MAN-BEAST TAIJUTSU TECHNIQUE: HIDDEN..!" Kiba landed on top of Akamaru/Kiba´s shoulders, as both of them jumped up and kicked Shino forward. "...SLASHING..!" He and Akamaru/Kiba landed and rushed at the flying Shino, and then jumped up towards him. Suddenly, Kiba and his clone disappeared in a smoke cloud, and from it emerged a giant wolf claw!! It started to slash and tear Shino, and then it disappeared, as Kiba and Akamaru/Kiba appeared above him and stomped him in the chest. "...WOLF!!!" Shino was sent to the ground, and then crashed. Kiba landed beside him, and on his shoulders landed Akamaru. "YYAAHHOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Kiba howled, as he and Akamaru was jumping with happiness. "That showed him!!" "Uuunnfff...." moaned Shino, as he was lying on the ground. "W-What happened?" "You were hit by my new Hidden Slashing Wolf technique, that´s what happened!" replied Kiba, as he stretched out his hand to help Shino up. Suddenly, as Shino got up, one of the Arena walls bursted down! All the villagers screamed in panic, as the ninjas rushed to the Arena Grounds. From the rubble appeared The Gang of Four, with Kusana in the lead. But now, they were different. Gitai´s arms and fists had grown to huge proportions, Setsuna´s dog-tail haircut stood up as blue spikes, and Shizuku had grown short, horn-looking outgrowths on her elbows. All of the three also had strange tatoo-patterns on their faces and bodies, and their eyes were pitch-black.They had received their Chakra Injection by Kusana. "Well, well, what have we here?" said Shizuku wondering. "Filthy little Leaf Ninjasssssss..." hissed Gitai, as he bashed his fists eagerly. "Well, at least they will not be a challenge for US!" replied Setsuna. "Kill them then, in the name of Black Doom!!" said Kusana, and jumped away. "USE EARTH-FIRE-WIND COMBINATION!!" Sssssuurrree..." Gitai snarled, as he once again bashed his fists. "EARTH STYLE: EARTH CORRIDOR!!!" He smashed his fists into the ground, as the Arena Ground was covered by a huge stone roof, and inside formed several corridors. Everyone started to hurry and find an exit. "OVER HERE!!" shouted Rock Lee. "I´VE FOUND IT!!" "Little rats trying to escape our trap? I don´t think so!" said Shizuku, as she began to spin in a pirouette, and a ring of fire formed around her. "FIRE STYLE: RACING FIRE!!(Japanese: KATON: HIBASHIRI!!)" She fired the fire ring into the exit of the tunnel, and Setsuna jumped in front of her and stretched his hands forward. "WIND STYLE: DIVINE JET STREAM!!(japanese:FUTON: KAMI OROCHI!!)" Setsuna suddenly launched a wind stream through the tunnel, as it was incinerated by the fire ring! The tunnels soon filled with fire, as there were no escape. "CLOSE UP!!" shouted Gitai, as the tunnel closed. "Heheheeee.....There will be no way out for them now!!" To be continued... Oh no! The Leaf ninjas seems to be in trouble, as The Gang of Four has trapped them inside a fiery tomb! Will someone be able to rescue them? Or will the Ninjas of The Village Hidden In The Leaves be burned alive? Find out on the next blazing hot chapter of:THE NEO-LEGION: REBIRTH OF EVIL![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Oh...sheet!! The Ninjas are trapped! What will happen now...? WARNING! Mild swearing! [align=center]Chapter 10: Friends In Need! Inside the massive stone labyrinth, the flames and the heat were unbearable, as they got closer and closer. Neji saw this, and decided to protect them for as long as he could. "EIGHT TRIGRAMS: DIVINE SPIN!!(Japanese:HAKKE KUSHOU: KAITEN!!)" A vortex of chacra formed around Neji, as it blocked the maze corridor, and preventing the flames from getting closer. But he could not hold it up for long. The others knew this, as they quickly tried to find a way through. Everyone...exept Naruto. He just stood there, in the middle of them, as he began to remember... "These will act as a need of communication for you. Contact me, or anyone else through these, and we will aid you as soon as possible...." He looked on his wrist, and there was the device that Lucario had given him. He had no time to think a second time around, as he pressed a button on it, and a small screen-hologram appeared out of it. On the picture was Lucario! "Go ahead!" he said. "What is the problem?" "L-Lucario!!" Naruto replied. "The Gang of Four showed up from nowhere, and they have me and the other ninjas trapped in an Earth Corridor Ninjutsu! We need help!" "Alright! I´m sending help at once!" Lucario said. "Hold out!" Meanwhile, outside the Earth Corridor, Gitai, Setsuna and Shizuku smirked. "Heheeeee..." Gitai laughed. "If they get out of this one, I´ll eat my face-rag!" "Don´t wish for something, Gitai!" replied Setsuna sarcastically. "You might get what you wish for!" "As if he would..." sneered Shizuku, as she gracefully made another pirouette. "Gitai never gets what he wishes for..." "Exellent work, everyone!" said Kusana, as he jumped down beside them. "Black Doom will be most pleased, indeed!" Suddenly, four light balls began to shine above the Earth Ninjutsu. "Eehhh..?" Gitai looked surprised, as he looked up. "What´s that?" Suddenly, the light balls disappeared, and from them emerged Sonic, Shadow, Knuckles and Amy! Amy took up her hammer. "HANG ON!!! I GET YOU OUTTA THERE!!" She yelled, as she lifted her hammer and smashed a hole in the roof. Fire bursted from it, and she jumped off. Knuckles was next, as he strapped on his Digger Claws. "HAAAAAHHH!!!" He bashed into the roof, and began to punch through the rock, soonly revealing the other ninjas. "Are you guys OK?!" he yelled, as he showed them the way out. "Come on, let´s go!!" The other ninjas were confused, but they had no other choice than to follow him, if they didn´t want to be burned alive! Sonic then landed in front of Kusana, along with Shadow. "W-Who are you?!" said Kusana. "How dare you interfere with our plans??!!" "Well..." said Sonic, as he scratched his nose. "Let´s just say we kinda, "dropped" by!" "And now, to destroy you!" replied Shadow, as he jumped into the air. "CHAOS...SPEAR!!" Several energy arrows flew towards them, as they jumped aside. Sonic followed up with a Homing Attack straight in Gitai´s chest. But he soon regretted it, as he landed and grabbed his head. "OW, OW, OW!!" he moaned, as he looked at Gitai. "You´re pretty tough, are you?" "I would say, Rock-Solid!!" replied Gitai, as his right arm suddenly turned to a massive club of rock, ripping up his cloth arms, and tried to smack Sonic. But Sonic quickly dodged it, and countered with a Homing Attack at him. But this time, Gitai was hit dead on, and fell into the ground with a bang. In the meantime, Shadow had a rough time with Setsuna, as he was flying above him and threw five Shurikens made purely out of air-chakra at him. "Try these!" he yelled, as the Shurikens flied towards Shadow. Shadow dodged them, as he ran straight up a wall, and jumped off it towards Setsuna. "I don´t think so!" he replied, as he flew away from him, and lashed his arm forward. "SACRED WIND STYLE: DIVINE TORNADO!(Japanese: FUTON NINPOU: KAMIKAZE!)" A huge tornado was created, and Shadow was trapped in it. He flied around and around, while Setsuna was in the middle of it. He again shaped five Air-Shurikens and threw them at Shadow. They cut him several times, as they cirkled around him. "AGH!" he yelped, as one cut was close to his throat. Setsuna prepared to finish him, but in the same moment, the tornado filled with insects! "WHAT?!" Setsuna was furious, as he saw Shino below, as insects flowed from his arms. Suddenly, the insects attacked Setsuna, and began to chew on his body! "AAGGHH!!!" While they chewed, small, blue clouds flied out of Setsuna´s body. The insects was eating his chakra! "Brother!!" he yelled. "H-Help me!!" Kusana looked up, and saw the bugs tearing on his chakra. "Shizuku!!" he yelled. "Help Setsuna!" "A little busy here!" she replied, as she continually had to dodge the ferocious swings of Amy´s hammer. "Agh! You are getting on my nerves, you pink little b****!!" "WHAT DID YOU SAY!!!!" roared Amy, as she became even angrier. Her hammer them hitted Shizuku, right in the chest. "AAGGHH!!!" Shizuku was flying into the Arena wall, and left a huge hole in it. Amy stood proudly with her hammer on her shoulder. "THAT´S WHAT YOU GET FOR CALLING ME A B****, STUPID HAG!!" Suddenly, she saw Gitai´s arm rushing towards her. It had altered into a spiky club, and it was growing far away from Gitai!! Amy tried to dodge it, but a spike cut her across the leg. "AAAAHHHH!!!!" she landed, but quickly fell on her knee. She could barely support her leg. Gitai´s arm grew back, and he closed up on her. She was scared. "S-SONIC!!! HELP MEEE!!!!!" "HHAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!" "Wha....!!" Gitai looked up, and suddenly, Sonic bashed him in the face, and pummeled him into the ground. He quickly got up on his feet. "W-WHY YOU..." he started, but suddenly, Knuckles was in front of him. "HHYYAAAAAHHH!!" He smashed Gitai in the chest, and he flew straight into a section of the Arena Spectator Balcony. Sonic gave Gitai the finger. "THAT´S WHAT YOU GET FOR HURTING MY WIFE YOU F****** FREAK!!!!" He then went over to Amy. "Amy! You alright?" "Aah! M-My leg! It´s bleeding!" she replied terrifiedly. "I-I can´t walk with it!" "C´mon! I´ll carry you!" he said, as he bended down and picked her up. He kissed her, and then darted off to the other ninjas. "Can anyone of you fix her wound?!" "I can!" replied Sakura, as she stepped forward. Sonic put Amy down, and Sakura took her hand over the wound. It began to glow blue, and the wounds sewed themselves together. "Thanks!" replied Amy, as she tried to stand up. "That helped a bunch!" "Now then..." said Kakashi, as he made signs with his hands. "...Time to finish this!" He then stretched his hand to the ground, and it crackled violently with electricity. A lightning ball formed in his hand, and he rushed towards Kusana, as he had his back turned. "C´MON!!" he shouted to his teammates. "FOCUS, REGROUP!! YOU MUST....!" He turned around, and saw Kakashi rush towards him, and lunge the electricity ball at him. "LIGHTNING BLADE!!!(Japanese: RAIKIRI!!!)" He struck Kusana with it, as blood gushed out of his mouth. "AAAGGHHHH!!!" A sizzling noise was heard, and with that, Kusana fell to the ground, grabbing his wound. He coughed up blood, as he was weakening. "BROTHER!!" yelled Gitai, who had regained his footing. He was different, as his body was normal, as were his eyes. The others were normal too, as their Chakra Abilities were gone. The Injection had ended. Gitai jumped forward and grabbed Kusana, as he, Setsuna and Shizuku fled. "You sure you are Ok?" Sonic was worried of Amy, who was lying down beside him. "I-I´m fine, my love....as long as YOU are here..." She smiled, and Sonic smiled back. They hugged eachother, and Amy shed a tear. "We will always be...together...right, Sonic?" "Of course, Amy...together...forever." Meanwhile, Shadow and Knuckles were discussing with Kakashi and Naruto of what had happened. "We don´t know where they came from." said Kakashi worried. "All we know is that they served someone called "Black Doom"....hmmm....wonder why that name rings a bell..?" "Maybe it´s because you and your ninja brats helped us fighting him for about ten years ago!" snarled Shadow. Kakashi suddenly stared at him, as if he had regained his memory. "Wait...now I remember!! Naruto and Sasuke once helped you to defeat someone called Black Doom!! Along with someone they called "Lucario"! You must be their teammate, Shadow!" "Well, geez! NOW you start to remember!" scoffed Shadow, and turned his back. "Anyways, thanks for helping us out!" Naruto said. Knuckles slapped him a high five. "Hey, that´s what friends are for, right!" he chuckled. But suddenly, he saw something that made his heart go into backflips. There was a young girl ninja, with a black suit and long, blond hair which was put up into a ponytail. She giggled, as she noticed Knuckles, and walked up to him. Knuckles was about to pass out. "Hi!" she giggled, and looked at Knuckles. "Who are you?" "I-I-I´m K-Kn-Knuc-Knuckles....." he stuttered. "...W-Wh-Who a-ar-are yo-yo-you?" "I´m Ino!" she replied with a smile. "Yamanaka Ino!" She bent over to Knuckles, and kissed him on the cheek. "Thank you for saving me! Bye!" she giggled again, and walked away. Knuckles began to feel warm on his cheek, as both of them turned violently red, and suddenly, he fainted! "Knuckles!" said Shadow surprised. Knuckles got up, still a little unstable, and with his cheeks blushing. "She´s.......so.......beautiful.........." Knuckles sighed. Shadow decided to joke with him: "Knuckles and Ino sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-OUCH!!" Knuckles had punched him in the face. Shadow was furious. "WHAT THE HELL!!" "Could you stop to toy with my feelings!?" he shouted back. "It´s just that.....I just realised.....I don´t have had any......girlfriend......for a very long time......." "Well, why don´t you ask her tonight?" answered Sakura. "Tonight it´s the big Autumn Ball! Everyone´s going! There will be dance, and games, and then, at the end, we will send up fireworks! It looks like as if the entire sky is sparkling with a million stars!" she sighed deeply. "Aaahhhhh.....It´s truly a night to remember....when I and Sasuke went to the Ball.......and we kissed eachother....for the very first time......." "Blah!! Stop talking about kissing people!" Naruto was looking sick. Suddenly, he was punched in the face and sent crashing into a wall. "SHUT UP YOU!!!" shouted Sakura, as she returned to Knuckles. "Anyway, that may be the right time to ask her...if, you wish to stay in the village for awhile, of course." "Why sure!" Sonic interrupted. "Amy and I always planned to go on a ball, but we didn´t know where." "Okay, then!" said Sakura, as she took Knuckles hand. "C´mon! I´ll get you nice til´ the night, and maybe, a few advices..." She and Knuckles walked away. Sonic, Shadow, Amy and all the other ninjas left the Arena and went home. Everyone...exept.... "H-HEY!!!! DON´T LEAVE ME HERE!!!! I´M STUCK!!!" To be continued... Well, noble readers, it seems like Sonic and the others are going on a Ball! But will Knuckles find his true love in Yamanaka Ino? Will the Ball be undisturbed? Or will the Evil Union barge in uninvited? Find out in the next chapter of:THE NEO-LEGION: REBIRTH OF EVIL![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Warning! Mild, sexual content in the start!! [align=center][u][b]Chapter 11: The Autumn Ball.[/b][/u] In their room, which they were allowed to stay in during their time in the village, Sonic and Amy were exited about the ball, as Amy was looking through her luggage for a fitting dress. "Which one should I pick?" she wondeder, as she asked Sonic. "Which should I take, Sonic? The blue one or the red one?" She showed him two, beatiful dresses, one that was coloured red and orange, and another one which was blue with an indigo trim. Sonic examined them, and then pointed at the red and orange. "That one!" he replied. "It´s kinda is your style, I think." "You think so?" she giggled. "Yeah, I kinda think so too..." They looked eachother deep into their eyes. "We....are really going....on a ball..." sighed Amy, as she could not take her eyes off Sonic´s. "Yeah...." he replied. "Isn´t it......unbelievable...." "So it is....." They kissed eachother, and fondled eachothers bodies. Amy caressed Sonic´s body and chest, and Sonic stroke her hair. They lied down on the bed, right in front of eachother, and continued to kiss and caress eachother. It was an unbelievable sensation that flowed through their bodies that moment, as the kissing and caressing got more intense. Amy and Sonic...they had never felt this way before. It was...undescribably pleasuring for both of them. But, when Sonic´s took his hand further and further down Amy´s body, she felt that it was not right, not yet! "S-STOP!!" she yelped, as she jumped out of the bed and slapped Sonic across the face. She was terrified, but...in the same time...she kinda...liked it! "I-I´m sorry!" she said hastily, as Sonic took himself on the cheek. "I´m so sorry!" "It´s...Ok..." replied Sonic, as his cheeks turned red. "I...guess that it´s...too early for this...but...it´s just that...I´ve never felt anything like this before..." "Neither...have I..."replied Amy, as she stroke Sonic on the cheek she had slapped him on. "But...I think it´s...unfitting...right now..." Suddenly, they heard a large crash outside their door, and someone screaming. "JIRAIYA!!! DON´T YOU HAVE ANYTHING MORE SENSITIVE TO DO, YOU PERVERTED OLD TOAD?!?!!!" They quickly opened the door. There was Sakura, steaming mad, while a man was crawling in front of her in fear. He had some kind of strange wig on his head, red ninja clothes with a green shirt inside, red tatto stripes on his face, and a scroll package on his back. In front of him was a buckled up miniature telescope. He had been watching them!! Amy was now bursting with madness, but Jiraiya had thought that they were going to help him. "Well, I REALLY am sorry for this inconvenient action, but, would you please explain for young Sakura here that I did not mean any harm, ehehehehehe...." he swallowed his tounge, as he saw Amy towering above him in anger. "YOU..." she took her hand behind her back. "...YOU...ARE SO...DEEEAAAAADDD!!!!!!!!" She smacked Jiraiya hard on the head with her hammer, and Jiraiya jumped up and started to run, with Amy still hitting him in the head. "B-BUT PLEASE.....OOWWW!! IT W-WAS....OOW!! JUST A....OOWW!! TEMPORARY.....OOOOWWWW!!! PARALYSIS IN MY.....OOOWWWW!!!! MY LEGS!! YYEEOOOOWWWW!!!! "TEMPORARY PARALYSIS, MY ASS!!!! GET OVER HERE AND I´LL GIVE YOU A [size=xx-large]PERMANENT[/size] PARALYSIS PERSONALLY!!!!!" "N-NO...PLEASE....OOWWW!! HAVE...OWW! MERCY!! OOOOOWWWWW!!!" "OH MERCY, EH?! WELL, I´LL GIVE YOU MERCY!! ONCE I´M DONE WITH YOU, YOU WILL BE NOTHING THAN A BLOODY MESS ALL ACROSS THE FRICKIN´ HALLWAY!!!!!!!!!!" She bashed him like crazy, as both of them disappeared behind a corner, still screaming and yelling. Sakura did not believe her eyes, and Sonic did just not know what to do. "She has quite a temperament!!" he finally said. "You don´t say!" replied Sakura. "Well, anyways, look who I got fixed up!" She moved aside, and there was Knuckles, dressed in a fine, black smoking with black, newly polished shoes and with his dreadlocks finely combed. "Whoa, look at you, Romeo!" said Sonic, as he tried to forget his wife´s "hot temperament". "Where do you think you´re going?" "On the Autumn Ball, of course!" he replied calmly. "Really?!" Sonic looked at his watch. "Oh sh....HEY, AMY!!!" He started to run down the hallway, as he was looking for Amy... Later, the village centre was crowded with people, and everyone was exited. Naruto and the other ninjas, however, were quite uncomfortable in their tuxedos and smokings. The only thing they really longed for was to this ball to end. Sonic and Amy, however, could not be happier, as they danced on the dance floor in the middle of the village centre. They looked dreaming into eachothers eyes, and they kissed eachother. Amy then laid her head on Sonic´s shoulder, and sighed deeply. "I never want this night to end...." she whispered, as Sonic fondled her hair gently. "Me neither..." sighed Sonic, as both of them continued to dance. But, they did not notice two figures sitting on the roof, observing them. It was Lucario and Gohan, who had sneaked into the village by teleporting, as they now sat up there and looked down on the two of them. "They must be happy for eachother..." whispered Gohan. "Indeed they are." replied Lucario. "Both of them wanted this to happen, as they now have tied their life strings together, creating an immensely strong bond of love. But, they will not be the only one to discover the true feeling of love tonight..." He turned around, and on the other side of the house they sat on, Ino was sitting lonely beside the small lake that flowed through the village. "Where is he?" she said dreamingly. "Who, me?" replied a voice in front of her. It was Knuckles. He smiled at Ino, as he stretched out his hand. In it were... "Flowers!" replied Ino, as she grabbed them. "They´re soo...beautiful..." "I knew you like them!" Knuckles sat down next to Ino, as they looked on eachother. [url=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3pn7-697teI&feature=related]Background Music: The First Kiss[/url] (Original Name: Water, from FFVIIAC) "Well, hehe...This is...quite new for me..." said Ino timidly. "Sitting here...talking to a red.....echidna..." "Well, it´s...kinda new for me too..." replied Knuckles. "You....like to join me in a dance..?" "No thanks..." said Ino. "I don´t dance. Maybe....we could just...look up on the stars...before they launch fireworks..." Both of them bended their heads up, and looked up into the sky. It was filled with stars, and each one of them glowed like ten of them. Knuckles and Ino suddenly nodded eachothers hands. They shrugged, and bumped their heads into eachother. Then...they looked on eachother...and suddenly, kissed eachother. Ino hugged Knuckles, and he hugged her back. It felt like...this was going to last forever. Until, they opened their eyes, and realised what they were doing. They pushed themselves from eachother, and blushed violently. Then, Ino stood up, and walked away. "I-I´m sorry, Knuckles...B-But I got to go...S-See ya!" After she´d left, Knuckles was still sitting there, speechless, as he touched his lips. He kissed her! HE KISSED HER!!! To be continued... O lala!! Seems like romance is in the air! But will it last long enough? Will the Neo-Legion stop Black Doom and his evil ambitions? And will Vegeta be able to cast off his shackles of obedience? Stay tuned for the next chapter of: THE NEO-LEGION: REBIRTH OF EVIL![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Ino...............and Knuckles? Odd matchup........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 You never know what´s gonna happen next, dear HyuugaKing!! Also: JIRAIYA FINALLY GO PWND....BY ME!! :D :D :D BOYAA! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 YAY! But seriously, that was a steamy chapter........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 What kiiinnddaaa steam? Steaming mad or steaming with loooovvvvveeeee??????Also, i am writing Chapter 12! Do you want me to post it today? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 [align=center]Chapter 12: The Thing In The Night... As the night was growing to it´s end, all the villagers and ninjas were tired, and went to their homes to get some sleep. Sonic and Amy had just arrived home, as Amy laid down on the bed. She was exhausted. "Whooh!" she wiped her forehead from all the sweat. "I never realised that dancing could be SO hard! You almost stepped on my toes!" "Well, I was TRYING not to!" said Sonic, as he laid down beside her. Both of them giggled a bit. "You know, something...Amy...this kinda is like a honeymoon, eh?" "Yes....almost..." she replied, but then she yawned. "I´m tired. Good night..." "Good(yawn)night..." Both of them went to sleep. But they did not now...they were being watched... Suddenly, Sonic woke up. He was back on Mobius, and he was lying in an endless field of flowers. He was dreaming. "A...A dream...?" he said, as he was getting up. "Heh! Well, I´m not the one to argue!" "SONIC!!" He looked around, there was Amy, running towards him. She was smiling, as was he. "AMY!" he started to run towards her. Both of them were laughing and smiling, as they stretched out their arms for eachother. Then, they hugged eachother, and laughed together. "I´m so glad you came, Sonic!" said Amy. "I´m glad too, Amy!" replied Sonic, as they kissed eachother. "Now, we can be together, forever...until death do us part...as the priest said!!" "Yea! And maybe, even longer..." As they hugged eachother, Sonic did not see that Amy had something behind her back... "No, Sonic..." she replied. "Nothing lasts longer.....than death..." Background Music: The Twisted Dream(Original Name: My Father´s Murderer, From FFX) Suddenly, she pulled a dagger from her back, and plunged it into Sonic´s chest! "AGH!!...." Sonic coughed up blood, as Amy held the dagger in a firm grasp. She had pierced his heart! She then yanked it out, as Sonic fell on his knees, with blood flowing from the wound. "A-Amy....why....!" "AHAHAHAHAHAAAA!" she cackled "What´s the matter, Sonic?! Did your heart break? AHAHAHAHAHAAAA!" Suddenly, the flowers died and turned to dust, the ground dried and cracked, and the sky was filled with black and crimson clouds. Soon, the entire world turned black and crimson, and Sonic felt like he was floating in the air. In front of him stood Amy, still cackling in a rather creepy tone. Suddenly, her left eye turned orange, as she stared at Sonic. "What´s the matter, Sonic?!" she said, but her voice was altered. "Are you not glad to see me?!" "Wait..." said Sonic, as he still grabbed hold of his chest. "T-That voice....I-It can´t be..." Suddenly, Amy began to mutate. Her pink fur was turned into a grey-looking skin, her hair changed to grey and received three, crystalized hair stripes. Her eyes became orange, and her wrists were covered in crystals. "M-MEPHILES!!!" Well...seems you DO remember me, after all...." "What are you doin´ here!!" said Sonic, as he tried to stand up, but the stab in his heart was too painful, as he once again was forced to stand on his knees. Mephiles cackled. "What? Too painful to stand up? Eheheheee...If you only knew what your little wench had for dreams now!" "W-WHAT?!" Mephiles created a sphere in mid-air. Inside it, Amy was visible. She was strapped up in a bed, and a copy of Sonic was on top of her. He was raping her! "AMY!!!!" Sonic yelled, and stared furiously at Mephiles. "LET HER GO!!! IT´S ME YOU WANT!!" "NOT A CHANCE!!" Mephiles replied, as he grabbed hold of Sonic´s throat and strangled him. "YOU DENIED MINE AND IBLIS´ CHANCE OF UNIVERSAL DOMINATION, AND NOW, BLACK DOOM HAS ME CRAWLING ON ALL FOUR LIKE A BEAST!!!" he strangled Sonic harder. "ALL OF YOU DENIED ME!!! THEREFORE, I WILL MAKE YOU ALL SUFFER!!!!" He formed his hand into a spear of crystal, and stabbed it through Sonic´s body! His eyes were dimmed, and he started to lose consciousness. "You have been warned.....hedgehog......." Suddenly, Sonic woke up! He was back in his and Amy´s bed, in the Konoha Village. Right after him, Amy woke up screaming. "NOO!! STAY AWAY FROM ME!! STOOOPPPP!!!!" she held her hands over her face and cried. Then, she opened her eyes, and saw that she was back, and that the REAL Sonic was beside her. "Oh Sonic!!" she grabbed him and cried, as Sonic tried to comfort her. "I-It was horrible!! He ripped off all of my clothes....a-and started to touch me everywhere!!! A-And then.......And then h-he......OH SONIC!!" She cried even louder, and hugged Sonic harder. He comforted her. "It´s Ok, Amy! I´m here! It was just.....a bad dream....nothing more......" Both of them cried a bit, as they once again went to sleep. "Damn you, Mephiles...." whispered Sonic, as he once again went to sleep... To be continued...[/align] REMEMBER: I will try to put up a new chapter every day!(Maybe 2!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 U COPIED ME!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 Sry :( :( :( :( I´ll never do that again, I swear to God!!!!! Please, forgive me????? :( :( :( Was it chapter 14 on your last fan fic: secret of the Hyuuga? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fen. Posted January 3, 2009 Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 yes............shadow VS Mimic........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Abarai Renji:. Posted January 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 3, 2009 I just sended u a message, but I say it again: I did NOT look at that chapter while writing mine!!! I just did NOT!!!!!!! This is True, I swear to God!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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