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Nooseman5118

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Well, don't expect too nice replys if you write that you show us card's you only used 3 minutes to make. Why show us cards that you didn't work hard for?

 

Anyway, the cards are'nt realy good, but also are'nt too bad. You should look for better pictures if you wanna let the cards look better. Also you shouldn't use a picture with german text on it for an english card ("Durza"'s picture).

 

"The Sword of Durza" is just a normal equipment card. It's way too underpowered like any other equipment card with a low ATK or DEF effect. It's not a very interesting card, because there are many others like this. 3/10

 

"Durza" may be a little bit better. Its ATK and DEF are okay for a monster that needs 2 tributes. But the effect isn't wrote right, and its abolutely not clear, what you mean with its effect. 4/10

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The sword of durza needs a better effect, maybe add piercing? Word it like this if you do:

 

This card can only be equipped to "Durza" The equipped monster gains 800 ATK. When a monster equipped with this card attacks with an ATK that is higher than the DEF of a Defense Position monster, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points.

 

Durza, maybe word it like this?

 

This card cannot be destroyed by battle or by other card's effects. Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell or Trap card (accept "The Sword of Durza".)

 

The last part is so Durza won't be destroyed by his own weapon.

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