Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Am new to the forum, thought I would put forward a card ideaThe picture I used for this card was from deviantart.com, not my own artwork, just thought I would say so. I am sorry if I have stepover the line, I'm removing the card until I can put some of my own artwork on it, or get permission for the artwork. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Reported, read the rules, you're not allowed to use attachments. Prepare for a one week ban... Nice try at OCG, but it's: Graveyard.Special Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 My first post ever don't know how to put the cards in my posts sorry being a newbie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Erm, take out the attachment in your post, and copy this into your post: [img=http://i43.tinypic.com/2z6vzhf.jpg] Then you won't get banned... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OMGItzDylan7158 Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Much better. Now if you fix the OCG errors, it'll be much better, and it looks like an inverted version of Cyber Dragon, but it still looks pretty cool :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Tried to make it much like the original Cyber Dragon but give it a feel like the Dark versions like Dark Armed Dragon and such. Guess I rushed into posting a card, too enthusiastic huh *S* any suggestions on what needs fixing? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 fixes:opponentcomma after monsterSpecial SummonGraveyard But all in all, this card would be at least limited, possibly banworthy. If synchros didn't exist, it would be less overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iKiller Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 The OCG needs fixing. There are plenty of stickied threads around for you to look at to get your cards perfect. And you weren't too eager, the only proper mistake you made for a new member is the fact that you posted attachments, which noobs still do anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Have fixed the card in Card Maker, will hopefully put the fixed picture up soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snitch Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Hah, ubar combo... SS Dark Cyber = Remove Malicious = MORE MALICOUS! 8D + Tuner = Death? =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Thanks for the understanding much appreciated guys, hopefully post a few more in future after I do a lot of reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyber-Valley™ Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 Yes You did make some OCG errors and some spelling errorsIf you made them better it would be a 9/10If you didn't make them better it is 4/10So make it better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spire Posted January 2, 2009 Report Share Posted January 2, 2009 The picture I used for this card was from deviantart.com' date=' not my own [/quote'] Then sir, you are breaking one of the rules. You cannot use an image from deviantart unless you post proof that the artist allowed you to use the image. And while i'm here: graveyard = Graveyardspecials summon = Special Summon It's not very original, even though it's a version of Cyber Dragon, try to make it original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 I thought I would try simple first am working on other card ideas, actually a set of monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 4, 2009 Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 I would like to rate the card but..... hmmm.... I don't see any card... why? :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mordred Posted January 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2009 Because I didn't get the original artists permission for the card so I took it down Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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