Shiranui Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 [align=center]Sorry about no background...Originally the effect was supposed to be longer but the creator wouldn't allow more than a certain number of characters so it wouldn't show the card.[/align] [spoiler=effect]When this card is Normal Summoned, take the top 2 cards from your Deck and your opponent's Deck and place them face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as Continuous Spell Cards. When your opponent's monster attacks this card, roll 1 six-sided die and and activate 1 of the following effects based on the result:1 or 6: Send 1 face-up Continuous Spell Card you control to the Graveyard to negate the attack.2 or 5: Select 1 monster in your Spell & Trap Card Zone that is treated as a Continuous Spell Card and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed the turn this effect is activated, pay half your Life Points to Special Summon 1 monster from your hand in face-up Defense Position.4: Send all Spell and Trap Cards on your field to the Graveyard. For each card sent to the Graveyard, increase this card's ATK by 500. Destroy this card at the End Phase this effect is activated.3:Destroy all cards on your field. Image Credit: AlectorFencer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Morgan LeFlay Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Effect:When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 2 cards from your Deck and..... This card is broken based on that one line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 read the rest of the effect the cards you draw go right to your spell and trap card zone. Please read before you say it's broken.Edit: I would give it a negative effect but it won't allow anymore characters in the effect box. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lindz rox Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I like it.10/10 all i see wrong is oll - i think is meant to be roll and and - i think thats meant to be 1 and. hope i helped good luck for future card making :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Very overpowered, it should be lvl six, or otherwise this is a very easy card to use with hamon.Lose the line draw two cards from your deck4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spitfire skateboards Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 good card 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I like your card. I don't think its OP. It has some negative effects. and who cares about background... 10/10. (between me and you: I really like the wolves) :D:D:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DJ- Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 good but what is up with members not having BG in there cards now its very unrealistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daichi159 Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Very good but maybe make the effect shorter! 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 When this card is Normal Summoned, draw 2 cards from your Deck and select 2 cards from your opponent's Graveyard and place them face-up in your Spell & Trap Card Zone as Continuous Spell Cards. When your opponent's monster attacks this card, roll 1 six-sided die and and activate 1 of the following effects based on the result:1 or 6: Send 1 face-up Continuous Spell Card you control to the Graveyard to negate the attack. (so far so good :) but you would better only draw 1 card.. its kinda too good even for a Normal Summon ^-^" )2 or 5: Select 1 monster in your Spell & Trap Card Zone that is treated as a Continuous Spell Card and add it to your hand. If "Red Luck Wolf" is destroyed by battle the Battle Phase this effect is activated, pay 500 Life Points to add 1 "Red Luck Wolf" from your Deck to your hand. [this means another extra draw (of 2 cards in no correction is done) and another 2 spell and trap cards from your opponent... now I would suggest you change it to only 1 card from your opponent's graveyard..even if alone this card is not that much... 3 of these would be overpowered with hamon and cristal beasts (that or rice level to 6..but I preffer the other option)]3 or 4: Send all Spell and Trap Cards on your field to the Graveyard. For each card sent to the Graveyard, increase this card's ATK by 500. Destroy this card at the End Phase this effect is activated. (nothing to complain about here) you said it..no BG... and well... that was my suggestion :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 Thanks a lot for the feedback. I was trying to make this all based on rolls and coin tosses but the toss effects took up too much space...T.T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K.B. strategist Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 return, not addsix-sided = 6-sided (I think) read the rest of the effect the cards you draw go right to your spell and trap card zone. Please read before you say it's broken.Edit: I would give it a negative effect but it won't allow anymore characters in the effect box. hmm? Ah' date=' I see now, but you should change the wording there to clarify. [i']Select 1 monster in your Spell & Trap Card Zone that is treated as a Continuous Spell Card and add it to your hand. If "Red Luck Wolf" is destroyed the Battle Phase this effect is activated, pay 500 Life Points to add 1 "Red Luck Wolf" to hand from your Deck.[/i] This sentence makes this card even more overpowered then it already was. It was a +4 when it was summoned as well as a 1900 ATK beatstick, and now it gets another +2? Not to mention it's a monster steal from your opponent. Show us "Red Luck Wolf". Also, no background in the picture? I know you can do much better then this... Sorry but this gets a 6.5/10 from me :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricoschan Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I can't even read the card text! :( Can you write down the effect for everyone to see? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted January 7, 2009 Report Share Posted January 7, 2009 I can't even read the card text! :( Can you write down the effect for everyone to see? the effect is right there in the spoiler... just click where it says "click here" [spoiler=like this:] see? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Command Knight Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 OP..... There's no downside to this card. Put a negative effect with it.... You also need a background..... 5/10........... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Unfortunately for every one I'm not the cpu maestros everyone else is cause I can't add a background without ruining the image.Updated the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ricoschan Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 I can't even read the card text! :( Can you write down the effect for everyone to see? the effect is right there in the spoiler... just click where it says "click here" [spoiler=like this:] see? Oh! Heheh...:-I Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted January 8, 2009 Report Share Posted January 8, 2009 Remember next time to have a pic background. Work a little on your grammar and make sure it is not overpowered next time. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiranui Posted January 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted January 9, 2009 Um...I revamped the effect and if you would be so kind please point out any mistakes in grammar I made. Thank you very much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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