Dark Magician and Dark Magician Girl...take two...(updated)

[Shiranui]

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Effect: 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 "Dark Magician"

This card's Attibute is also treated as DARK. This card's name is also treated as "Dark Magician". When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 Spell Card from your hand to your Deck. Each time a Spell Card is activated, increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Spell Card until the End Phase. During each players' End Phase, inflict 200 damage to both players for each Set Spell or Trap Card.

 

 

Effect: 1 FIRE Tuner + 1 "Dark Magician Girl"

This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card's name is also treated as "Dark Magician Girl". For each "Dark Magician" or "Dark Magician of Chaos" on the field or in the Graveyard, increase this card's ATK by 200. When this card is Summoned, add 1 Spell Card to your hand from your Deck. Each time either player takes Direct Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Fire Break Token (FIRE/Fairy/Level 2/ATK:200/DEF:300) to your field in face-up Defense Position. These tokens cannot be used as Tribute. Each time you activate a Spell Card, your opponent gains control of 1 Fire Break Counter. If a Fire Break Token is removed from play, activate 1 of the following effects: -The controller of that Token takes 300 damage. -The controller of that card must discard 1 card from their hand. If there are 4 Fire Break Tokens on the controller of this card's field, remove them from play to add 1 Tuner Monster and 1 "Dark Magician" to their hand from their Graveyard.[/align]

 

The token effects are probably wrong...

[pitchblack64]

second pic could be better but

their sweet cards

[Shiranui]

thanks for the comment

[Nnoitra Jiruga]

Good,second picture...not so great 9/10

[Shiranui]

what's so bad about the second one :?

[.Requiem]

I see an error last sentence spell or trap cards from where?

 

8/10

[Shiranui]

the last sentence means traps and spells that arent activated...thanks for the comment :D

[~ Chidori-Kun]

7/10 Dont like the concept

[Mr. Judgment Dragon]

Dark Fire Magician Girl's effect is a bit too elaborate for my liking.

 

The effect of Dark Fire Magician is rather pointless. Why would anyone with half a brain want to return a Spell Card from their hand to their Deck for no real gain? Its bad enough you have to run a rather bad Vanilla (Normal Monster) to be able to summon it. I can also say basically the same thing about Dark Fire Magician Girl. Why would anyone want to return a Spell Card from their hand to their Deck for no real gain?

[Masterstitch]

read it again it says (in a mis-worded way) to take a spell card from your deck

[Sleepy]

first than anything, rise their levels by 1 (spellcaster tuners are usually level 2:) )

 

first card:

 

This card's Attibute is also treated as DARK. This card's name is also treated as "Dark Magician". When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 Spell Card from your hand to your Deckfrom your Deck to your hand. Each time a Spell Card is activated, increase this card's ATK by 100 for each Spell Card until the End Phase. During each players' End Phase, inflict 200 damage to both players for each Set Spell or Trap Card.

 

(the second scratch would be in fact right if the effect is as elavorate as increasing 100 for a spell card. then, increasing 200 in the next activation of a spell card because it counts how many spell cards have been counted so far in the turn "for each spell card". but that would kinda be confusing so I guess then that its missspelled ^-^ )

 

second card:

 

This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card's name is also treated as "Dark Magician Girl". For each "Dark Magician" or "Dark Magician of Chaos" on the field or in the Graveyard, increase this card's ATK by 200. When this card is Summoned, add 1 Spell Card to your hand from your Deck(first "from"...then "to"..[from your Deck to your hand]). Each a player takes Direct Battle Damage, Special Summon 1 Fire Break Token (FIRE/Fairy/Level 2/ATK:200/DEF:300) to your field in face-up Defense Position. These tokens cannot be used as Tribute. Each time you activate a Spell Card, your opponent gains control of 1 Fire Break Counter. If a Fire Break Token is removed from play, activate 1 of the following effects: -The controller of that Token takes 300 damage. -The controller of that card must discard 1 card from their hand. If there are 4 Fire Break Tokens on the controller of this card's field, remove them from play to add 1 Tuner Monster and 1 "Dark Magician" to their hand from their Graveyard.

 

 

(nothing else I can see, and I don't know what everyone is talking about, I like the second pic way better. ) I've been unable to turn on the computer for like a week and I'm finally parcially back :) [dammit college works) :)

 

8.7/10 from me :D

[shanster211]

Those are some awsome cards!

[Ezio]

Dark Fire Magicians Effect does say;

"add 1 Spell Card from your hand to your Deck."

But in Dark Fire Magician Girls Effect says;

"add 1 Spell Card to your hand from your Deck."

 

Did you mean for the effects to be different? Because even though Dark Fire Magician Girls is worded weirdly it makes sense as an effect. The first part of Dark Fire Magicians' effect is pointless however the rest of its effect is good.

I dont particularly like the pictures so overall i'd say 7.5/10

[Shiranui]

oops...that's because I originally typed it the wrong way but I guess I forgot to retype it the correct way...:lol:

 

Thanks for that heads up. *goes to fix it*

[TrickyPooBoy]

Both get a 10/10 freshly picked and ripe. :D

[Shiranui]

thanks. Anyone else?