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Obese Dark Magician Girl


Lelouch Lamperouge

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1st don't write that way, second nice idea and good card. I wish we had a background though. Also "Sacrificing" should be "Tributing". You also need " around names not '. Finally "your side of the field" is now "your field". There is a better way to word the whole thing and if you want me to tell you I will.

 

7/10:)

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