Ookami Moriyama Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 here it is my first Synchro Monster tell me what do you think [spoiler=Effect]1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card is also treated as Beast-Type monster. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can add 1 Tuner Monster from your Graveyard to your hand. While this card is face-up on your field, once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to extra Normal Summon 1 monster from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, decrease your opponent's Life Points by 500. When this card is removed from your field, except when destroyed by battle, you can draw up to 2 cards from your Deck and discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Credit]remainaery.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted February 21, 2009 Report Share Posted February 21, 2009 It you! I see no errors. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
I Hate Snatch Steal Posted February 22, 2009 Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 A few slight wording errors, nothing major fixed: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card is also treated as Beast-Type monster. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can add 1 Tuner Monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 monster from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card is removed from your side of the field, except when destroyed by battle, you can draw up to 2 cards from your Deck and discard 1 card from your hand. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 22, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 22, 2009 It you! I see no errors. 9/10 really? Thankyou ^_^ A few slight wording errors' date=' nothing major fixed: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monstersThis card is also treated as Beast-Type monster. When this card is Synchro Summoned successfully, you can add 1 Tuner Monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn during your Main Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 monster from your hand. When this card is destroyed by battle, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card is removed from your side of the field, except when destroyed by battle, you can draw up to 2 cards from your Deck and discard 1 card from your hand. 9/10[/quote'] yeah, I use "extra Normal Summon" because "Ultimate Offerings" has the same wording and your side of the field is old OCG; now is your field. but Thankyou anyway ^_^ anyone else wants to rate? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God-Card-Master Posted February 24, 2009 Report Share Posted February 24, 2009 good card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted February 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2009 Thankyou again God-Card-Master ^_^ anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 That card is decent. Some OCG errors. Not something I personally like though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 That card is decent. Some OCG errors. Not something I personally like though. hey, Thanks a lot ^_^ why don't you like it anyway? if you don't mind to answer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Requiem Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Well it isn't that I don't like it, I just like the effect that much something that doesn't catch me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 4, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Well it isn't that I don't like it' date=' I just like the effect that much something that doesn't catch me.[/quote'] oh, I understand well... Thanks again ^_^ anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§hadow §triker Posted March 4, 2009 Report Share Posted March 4, 2009 Pretty good card. OCG is pretty good, but a few minor problems. Not bad. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Thanks a lot SHADOW STRIKER 521 ^_^ anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaraptor Posted March 5, 2009 Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 i like the card i wont rate because my cards seem to always be shot down, save for my dinosaur cards oh well what the heck 9.1/10 due to it being a little underpowered.meant 9.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 5, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2009 Thanks a lot megaraptor ^_^ anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dorgeismydog Posted March 6, 2009 Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 Not bad for a first synchro, but maybe a diff name? Seems a little off to me, leaves more to be desired. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 well Thankyou I'll try to find a name though for this pic i don't know... well, thx someone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jace Beleren Posted March 6, 2009 Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 8/10some OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 Thankyou ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dorgeismydog Posted March 6, 2009 Report Share Posted March 6, 2009 Maybe something like "name here - the beast shaman" or something along that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 7, 2009 Thanks for the idea ^_^ I'll try somethin' anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
megaraptor Posted March 11, 2009 Report Share Posted March 11, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ookami Moriyama Posted March 13, 2009 Author Report Share Posted March 13, 2009 bump thx but plz don't spam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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