Max_K Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 When this card is Normal Summoned, you can gain 1000 LP's. When this card is Special Summoned, you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy 1 Spell card or Trap card on the Field. When this card on your side of the field is banished, you can draw 1 card. When this card attacks, you can have this card gain 500 ATK until the end of the Damage Step. When this card is attacked, you can change this card to defense mode. When this card is sent from your Field to your Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, you can add 1 Tuner monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is used for an Xyz Summon, you can have the Xyz monster gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. When this card is discarted, you can change the battle position of all monsters on the field. When this card is sent from your Deck to your Graveyard, you can Shuffle 1 card in any player Graveyard to the owner deck. Once per turn, when a Field-Spell is activated, you can add 1 Field Spell from your Deck to your Hand. Once per turn, when a card you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can gain 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls, change its battle position. All monsters you controls gain 200 ATK. When this card is changed to defense position, you can have this card gain 1000 DEF until the end phase. When this card is changed to attack position, you can have this card gain 1000 ATK until the end phase. Once per turn, when this card is returned from the field to your hand, you can Special Summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JamesXCx Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 The text is too small to read, you should copy it and post is as a text here. :p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max_K Posted June 25, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 Here is the effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, you can gain 1000 LP's. When this card is Special Summoned, you can inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. When this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can destroy 1 Spell card or Trap card on the Field. When this card on your side of the field is banished, you can draw 1 card. When this card attacks, you can have this card gain 500 ATK until the end of the Damage Step. When this card is attacked, you can change this card to defense mode. When this card is sent from your Field to your Graveyard for a Synchro Summon, you can add 1 Tuner monster from your Graveyard to your hand. When this card is used for an Xyz Summon, you can have the Xyz monster gain 1000 ATK until the End Phase. When this card is discarted, you can change the battle position of all monsters on the field. When this card is sent from your Deck to your Graveyard, you can Shuffle 1 card in any player Graveyard to the owner deck. Once per turn, when a Field-Spell is activated, you can add 1 Field Spell from your Deck to your Hand. Once per turn, when a card you control is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can draw 1 card. Once per turn, you can gain 500 Life Points. Once per turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls, change its battle position. All monsters you controls gain 200 ATK. When this card is changed to defense position, you can have this card gain 1000 DEF until the end phase. When this card is changed to attack position, you can have this card gain 1000 ATK until the end phase. Once per turn, when this card is returned from the field to your hand, you can Special Summon it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmo. Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 So you basically gave A LEVEL 4 MONSTER, a solution to everything that can happen in a duel, and i repeat A LEVEL 4 MONSTER!!! It's okay that this is casual but this is way way way too much. And you also gave him a well supported type that is Machine. The OCG though seems fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 As Cosmo mentioned, this card does WAY too much.This is the kind of thing we'd expect on a boss monster (albeit only 2-3 of them at most); NOT from a Level 4. You seriously need to tone this card's effects down. Please fix this within 24 hours; otherwise this gets moved.-----------Regarding your lore, you are required to have it posted underneath the card when you post it; especially in this case when it is very hard to read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 When your card text becomes too small to read, clearly it's a call to reduce the amount of text on the card since it does so many things. I understand it's the ultimate Swiss Army Knife, but even the Swiss Army Knife has a readable manual. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woloa Posted June 25, 2015 Report Share Posted June 25, 2015 I would split this up into a set of monsters, one for each of its effects, that way it doesn't seem like some kinda overpowered level 4 boss monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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