Kale Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Nice they balance each other nicely. Father Wolf will be pleased to know that his pic are being use for such awesome cards. 9/10 yeah! i have used Wolf's cards since the dawn of time.. i was using them when there werent very many. him and i are nice buds here' date=' i would like to think. :D +rep to you. :D I don't need the reps you're offering, Kale. Are you gonna consider oppening up a thing that let's other users create cards for you? Apparently i need to; i have received more posts in the last 24 hours than in the last few times i have updated this set. oh, sure! i always allow people to make a card for a set.. i just need a pic link, and if i accept your idea i will give you a +rep and add it to the set. ;) since you already have a +rep from this set, it would be unfair for you to receive another.. These are great! Must've takin' a long time Anyways 10/10Keep up the goooooood work. sure did. ;) thank you for commenting on the set! you are the 2nd to receive one +rep. ;) EDIT: something is off with the +rep giving.. i only gave one today, but i suppose the computer is only allowing them per 24 hours. i will get you that +rep asap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Ok, Thanks man, Theres a +rep for the good cards comeing your way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 21, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Ok' date=' Thanks man, Theres a +rep for the good cards comeing your way [/quote'] wow, thanks! you didnt need to do that.. :D sorry about the computer error, if you didnt read my previous edit i am not allowed to give out anymore +reps today. So i will get you yours in time. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver The Hedgehog Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 It's ok I don't mind :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wuu. Posted May 21, 2009 Report Share Posted May 21, 2009 Nice they balance each other nicely. Father Wolf will be pleased to know that his pic are being use for such awesome cards. 9/10 yeah! i have used Wolf's cards since the dawn of time.. i was using them when there werent very many. him and i are nice buds here' date=' i would like to think. :D +rep to you. :D I don't need the reps you're offering, Kale. Are you gonna consider oppening up a thing that let's other users create cards for you? Apparently i need to; i have received more posts in the last 24 hours than in the last few times i have updated this set. oh, sure! i always allow people to make a card for a set.. i just need a pic link, and if i accept your idea i will give you a +rep and add it to the set. ;) since you already have a +rep from this set, it would be unfair for you to receive another.. These are great! Must've takin' a long time Anyways 10/10Keep up the goooooood work. sure did. ;) thank you for commenting on the set! you are the 2nd to receive one +rep. ;) EDIT: something is off with the +rep giving.. i only gave one today' date=' but i suppose the computer is only allowing them per 24 hours. i will get you that +rep asap.[/quote'] I'm no Rep hound. By the way, i'll read the last TC chapter tomorow, i was to busy figuring out how my car should work (Yeah, i work on cars) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Καsτοr Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I really loved the new cards, that I used some of the art. It's true.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 I really loved the new cards' date=' that I used some of the art. It's true.9/10[/font'] thanks! though that art isnt mine.. thank you Marvel. ;) i will reset the +reps today, so the next 2 people who are new to the thread that comment after this post will get +reps. ;) thank you all for viewing these. They have to be my best cards i have ever made.. anyone agree? :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:Traceur:. Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 these card are EPIC..i like them all...ocg is perfect...^^pics are nice...overall: EPIC/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Pardon my crudeness, but what the hell is with your card's names? A good deal of them don't translate anything near to what the English one is. With Koremar, for example, the katakana you have translates to "Remukoarugon". On Iliciil, you basically combined katakana with the kanji for "I" and "market". Maybe it's intentional, but it looks just foolish to me. Sorry. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 these card are EPIC..i like them all...ocg is perfect...^^pics are nice...overall: EPIC/10 thank you very much. ;) i appreciate that.. +rep to you per my regulations. Pardon my crudeness' date=' but what the hell is with your card's names? A good deal of them don't translate anything near to what the English one is. With Koremar, for example, the katakana you have translates to "Remukoarugon". On Iliciil, you basically combined katakana with the kanji for "I" and "market". Maybe it's intentional, but it looks just foolish to me. Sorry. D:[/quote'] its not crude of you to ask. though you could have done so without the level of satire.. anywho, i honestly have no idea how to write Japanese, and i didnt expect many people on here to know it either. really all it is is Translator.com and i messed around with the syllables until i got something. i realize that nothing on there is truly accurate, so i just do it for show. the english stuff and the picture are all i intend for you to look at with scrutiny. Thank you for your concern. i would love to know how to read and write japanese, but i really dont have the time to learn it or the tools required to do so. though i have picked up several things by looking at the text.. sorry for it being grammatically incorrect, but i cannot help that. ;) and a +rep to you per my regulations. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 Pardon my crudeness' date=' but what the hell is with your card's names? A good deal of them don't translate anything near to what the English one is. With Koremar, for example, the katakana you have translates to "Remukoarugon". On Iliciil, you basically combined katakana with the kanji for "I" and "market". Maybe it's intentional, but it looks just foolish to me. Sorry. D:[/quote'] its not crude of you to ask. though you could have done so without the level of satire.. anywho, i honestly have no idea how to write Japanese, and i didnt expect many people on here to know it either. really all it is is Translator.com and i messed around with the syllables until i got something. i realize that nothing on there is truly accurate, so i just do it for show. the english stuff and the picture are all i intend for you to look at with scrutiny. Thank you for your concern. i would love to know how to read and write japanese, but i really dont have the time to learn it or the tools required to do so. though i have picked up several things by looking at the text.. sorry for it being grammatically incorrect, but i cannot help that. ;) and a +rep to you per my regulations. :D Sorry 'bout that. Satire's in my nature. Anyways, if you want names, I can PM you better translations. I can't do the card text, tho. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 My pics are getting good rates? Sweet lol. You didn't ask though :? Or if you did I can't remember. I like the Japanese effect thingy, its sweet 8) I was lured in by the REP thing, cos I though it was a noob post - Oh and I don't want any rep's, but you can rep me for the images that got you so many good rates :D lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 23, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 My pics are getting good rates? Sweet lol. You didn't ask though :? Or if you did I can't remember. I like the Japanese effect thingy' date=' its sweet 8) I was lured in by the REP thing, cos I though it was a noob post - Oh and I don't want any rep's, but you can rep me for the images that got you so many good rates :D lol[/quote'] i looked over your thread many times to see if you would allow credit, and once i saw that you did i used them while giving you all of the credit. i have personally thanked your work as my success many times in this thread even, and i have dropped your name in other threads when talking about artwork.. is that credit enough? anywho, i have maxed my +reps given today. ;) so... what do you think about the idea? i know you like my art, and your art, so... what do you think about the effects? :D i will try to give you a rep in the future, say, tomorrow. but it might take reminding. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted May 23, 2009 Report Share Posted May 23, 2009 lol, well the effects are unique, some maybe dull and standard, buts still creative. looool soooo... pics... good 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 lol' date=' well the effects are unique, some maybe dull and standard, buts still creative. looool soooo... pics... good 8)[/quote'] lulz, i knew you would love the pics.. :D and, as is why i have yet to make a Level 4, i am making the effects more creative. ;) i am doing that more and more.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 24, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 daily bump, and a reset of the daily quota of points and +rep giving. get the prizes while they are hot! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Corinthian Posted May 24, 2009 Report Share Posted May 24, 2009 Great set, although I can't read japanese... -_- The pics are fine, OCG is solid, and concept itself is alright. Pretty original and balanced. 9/10. Have you considered putting Dark Synchros to the set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 25, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Great set' date=' although I can't read japanese... -_- The pics are fine, OCG is solid, and concept itself is alright. Pretty original and balanced. 9/10. Have you considered putting Dark Synchros to the set?[/quote'] no, i have not. ;) and i dont really plan on that, since it is not realistic... since you are the only one to post you get the +rep for the 24th. ;) congrats. This resets the quota for the 25th. the next 4 new people to post on this thread will get the daily prizes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ƬЦЯBӨƧƧ Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Your 3 new cards are smooth, seriously smooth 8). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 25, 2009 Report Share Posted May 25, 2009 Awsome. Love Ilicil the most! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 26, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2009 Your 3 new cards are smooth' date=' seriously smooth 8).[/color'] thanks! you get the +rep for the day.. Awsome. Love Ilicil the most! thank you! i like Ilicil too, but its not the best card... Notice: i have two new card ideas that i will be rolling out soon.. :D maybe tomorrow, maybe within a week.. ;) The next 4 people who post get prizes. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 Um, my favorite is defidently the one made with marvel's image. Keep up the good work1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted May 27, 2009 Report Share Posted May 27, 2009 what i can say your cards are AWESOME, PERFECT!!!i will try to send a e-mail to the Konami and maybe they will contract you XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Killey Posted May 28, 2009 Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 The advertisement image is nice and you have a good sense of style by selecting appropriate images for your set. However, as for the cards themselves I have several issues with them. There are OCG errors to the cards most of them being minor errors here and there. This doesn't really bother too much as I don't expect perfect OCG from everyone including myself. In any case the main point of the cards is communicated well enough. By giving each monster multiple effects you run the risk of making them overpowered. In this case there are some card synergies that can open up abuse. Some cards give off ridiculously good draw power and the milling effects of a Dark based deck gives it synergies with Dark Armed Dragon/Twilight based decks. The major issue I have with the card effects is the lack of consistency in the effects. Yes, they all keep in common the need to have the theme monsters in the grave and some RFG synergies but the multiple effects you give each card lack consistency with each other. It's one thing to give a card multiple effects it's another when each effect are so out of sync with each other that you start to lose focus of the theme. For example, lets take a look at Dark Emanater – Doruukji's effect.This card gains the following effects, based on the amount of "Dark Emanater" Monsters in your Graveyard. •2 or more: This card inflicts Piercing Damage. •4 or more: When this card destroys an opponent's monster, your opponent sends the top card of his/her deck to the Graveyard. •6 or more: When this card destroys a monster by battle it can attack again, in a row. During your End Phase you must discard 2 cards. If you do not, this card is destroyed. The 4 or more effect is entirely unnecessary and loses consistency between effects 1 and 3. The only common factor is effects activating as part of the battle or destroying a monster by battle. Also, I'm not quite sure if these effects stack but if they do you are looking at a card that does too much. Not necessarily overpowered if it does stack but it's a bit much if it can do all of those at once just because you have 6 or more DE monsters in your grave and based on the other cards it wouldn't be hard to do that at all. Personally, I think you lose uniqueness to the cards if you just stack mish mash effects to each card. It also becomes cumbersome during play when you are trying to form synergies to the deck build. It would be better if you give 1-2 effects per card and try to simplify it as much as possible. The synergies would work better and it would help improve the balancing of the theme. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2009 Um' date=' my favorite is defidently the one made with marvel's image. Keep up the good work1[/quote'] thanks! +30pts.. what i can say your cards are AWESOME' date=' PERFECT!!![/b']i will try to send a e-mail to the Konami and maybe they will contract you XD wow, thanks! dont try too hard, they might just disconnect you when they say they are transferring you to another department.. thats what happened to me. :| +30pts. The advertisement image is nice and you have a good sense of style by selecting appropriate images for your set. However' date=' as for the cards themselves I have several issues with them. There are OCG errors to the cards most of them being minor errors here and there. This doesn't really bother too much as I don't expect perfect OCG from everyone including myself. In any case the main point of the cards is communicated well enough. By giving each monster multiple effects you run the risk of making them overpowered. In this case there are some card synergies that can open up abuse. Some cards give off ridiculously good draw power and the milling effects of a Dark based deck gives it synergies with Dark Armed Dragon/Twilight based decks. The major issue I have with the card effects is the lack of consistency in the effects. Yes, they all keep in common the need to have the theme monsters in the grave and some RFG synergies but the multiple effects you give each card lack consistency with each other. It's one thing to give a card multiple effects it's another when each effect are so out of sync with each other that you start to lose focus of the theme. For example, lets take a look at Dark Emanater – Doruukji's effect.This card gains the following effects, based on the amount of "Dark Emanater" Monsters in your Graveyard. •2 or more: This card inflicts Piercing Damage. •4 or more: When this card destroys an opponent's monster, your opponent sends the top card of his/her deck to the Graveyard. •6 or more: When this card destroys a monster by battle it can attack again, in a row. During your End Phase you must discard 2 cards. If you do not, this card is destroyed. The 4 or more effect is entirely unnecessary and loses consistency between effects 1 and 3. The only common factor is effects activating as part of the battle or destroying a monster by battle. Also, I'm not quite sure if these effects stack but if they do you are looking at a card that does too much. Not necessarily overpowered if it does stack but it's a bit much if it can do all of those at once just because you have 6 or more DE monsters in your grave and based on the other cards it wouldn't be hard to do that at all. Personally, I think you lose uniqueness to the cards if you just stack mish mash effects to each card. It also becomes cumbersome during play when you are trying to form synergies to the deck build. It would be better if you give 1-2 effects per card and try to simplify it as much as possible. The synergies would work better and it would help improve the balancing of the theme.[/quote'] wow, thank you for taking your time to go through and systematically tell me what to do. i appreciate this from users like you and Aelsthla-Mental who always have a lengthy and informative post that has an overall positive beat to it, and makes it seem like people are actually looking at your thread. i appreciate it a lot. ;) that is why you are being awarded the +rep for yesterday, and an additional +rep for posting the way you do. This doesnt come from me very often, 2+reps, but when it does it means that i believe you did something good for the forum community. i hope others post like you, including myself. as for the content of your post: i have realized that inconsistency and am in the middle of fixing it. some of the monster's effects are supposed to Stack, whereas others are just supposed to offer a choice. i will be changing the effects a bit to fix this confusion, and i will be adding more monsters to the set that allow you to fix situations that i found while writing my fan fic.. one thing that was a problem was that there really isnt a way to keep your DEs on the field, or to bring them back. There were a few cards that do that, but not enough in enough creative ways. but dont worry, the next expansion pack that i include will help rectify this. thank you for posting, and enjoy your 2+reps. ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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