ygofan35 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Heres a new card ive made:Effect:Increase the ATK of this monster by 300 points for every monster in your graveyard with "Luster" in its name. When this monster is sent to the graveyard, pay 1000 life points to speacial summon 1 "Black Luster Soldier" on your side of the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
123hriwu3beofuf89383y Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Not Bad, 9/10 OCG:Special SummonNOT Speacial Summon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brentxbanshee Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 this should be a BLS/dark magician girl fusion. Looove the pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StΦr Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Lol the pic looks somewhat like a man wearing pink armour and not looking at you but it is a VERY cool card. Great job, 9.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ygofan35 Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 lol looks like im bak on track Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lelouch Lamperouge Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Pic Is Awesome.Ocg Is BAD.summon=Summonname= card namegraveyard=Graveyardlife points=Life Pointsspeacial summon=Special Summonyour side of the field= your Field.6/10Improve Ocg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AsterikcAde Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 If it would've been up to me the name of this card should've been Black Luster Fem Fatale, but that's just me! It's effect goes good if you're running a Black Luster Soldier Deck and I see no wording error so...9/10, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neilsweaky Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I was always going to make a Black Luster SoldierFusion with Dark Magician.Is the picture self drawn or did you find it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silent Omega Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Looks great, but a lot of OCG errors, I'll give that card a 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ygofan35 Posted April 16, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 I was always going to make a Black Luster SoldierFusion with Dark Magician.Is the picture self drawn or did you find it? no i found it but ive made some edit to it :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 When this card is Summoned, this card gains 300 ATK for each "Luster" monster in your Graveyard". When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 life points to Special Summon 1 "Black Luster Soldier" (from?), ignoring the summoning conditions. "sent to the Graveyard": it works, but "destroyed" is better, and "destroyed by battle" is best. Lots of cards like to stick "and sent to the Graveyard" on top of that, but I don't like that much. Hm...6/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LostLetter227 Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 "When this card is Summoned, increase the ATK of this card by 300 for every monster in the Graveyard with "Luster" in its name. When this monster is sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 life points to Special Summon 1 "Black Luster Soldier" from your Graveyard." I am unsure of where you are to Special Summon BLS from. That's underlined. 5.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aznxpwr Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 Umm, any card with Luster? Like "Luster Dragon", but very nice pic. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phanax Leminer Posted April 16, 2009 Report Share Posted April 16, 2009 ... TTmTT The OCG is bad, too many mistakes. I'm sad now... Even if it's an epic image and effect, I don't buy it. 5.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
"Santa's Envoy" Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Black Luster Soldier Girl: 2500/2000 Effect: "Increase the ATK of this card by 300 points for each monster in either player's Graveyard which includes "Black Luster" in its card name. When this Monster is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 1000 Life Points to Special Summon 1 "Black Luster Soldier" from your Graveyard in face-up Attack Position to your side of the field." (Please note that Black Luster Soldier cannot be Special Summoned from the Graveyard if it wasn't Ritual Summoned properly. Btw, I like the “to your side of the field” OCG, especially in some situations.) With the above modifications, 8.5/10. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Emo~ Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 BLS cannot be effected by this effect because he is a ritual. Thus, this effect is invalid. 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Good card, just your OCG needs to improve... Nice and sexy, I hope Konami makes it...so awesome! 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ygofan35 Posted April 17, 2009 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 ok ive made some edit in the card :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maliki Posted April 17, 2009 Report Share Posted April 17, 2009 Not bad 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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