A defensive Earthbound God? osht

[Sunshine Jesse]

Earthbound God - Tawantin Pachacuti

1600 ATK, 3500 DEF

Rock

Dark

Level 10

Effect: Only 1 "Earthbound God" monster can be face-up on the field. When there is no Field Spell Card face-up on the field, this card is destroyed. This card can attack your opponent directly. This card can attack while it is in Defense Position. When this card is Normal or Flip Summoned, it is changed to Defense Position. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, if your opponent has monsters in Attack Position they must declare an attack. When this card would be removed from the field by a card effect other then its own, discard 1 card to negate its removal.

 

Kinda breaks from the "OMG OFFENSE" theme of the Earthbound Gods, but thats what makes it unique.

Oh, +1 rep to anyone who can figure out where I got the name from.

[Toffee.]

Mystic Tomato says hi

[Sunshine Jesse]

...dammit, forgot about him >_>

Edited

[Chileno4Live]

I'm not sure about Tawantin but Pachacuti is an Inca Empire, which sort of has to deal with the high defense of the Earthbound Immortal.

 

Anyway, so far as i know, the Earthbounds immortals are only unaffected by card effects in the anime, so i would remove the part that says that he can't be removed from the field by effects. Other than that, the effect looks great. No OCG errors so far as i can see, so very nice card :D

 

7/10 Because the effect is to OPed WITH the part in it that makes it unaffected by card effects. If you remove that, it'll become:

8.5/10.

[Umbra]

This is not a Jibakushin. This is something vaguely similar to one.

 

In other words, you're violating the Archetype. Don't.

[Sunshine Jesse]

Tawantin is the shorter form of Tawantinsuyu, which was the name of the Incan empire in their language. Also, he's intended to be a semi-unstoppable wall, but I could add some sort of cost per turn to make him invincible, like whenever he would be removed from the field, pay X LP or discard X cards from your hand.

Close enough though.

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Effect changed. Better? Worse? or what?

[Chileno4Live]

Thnx for the +rep lol, i appreciate it :D

 

About the effect, even with a cost, it makes it overpowered and it makes it unlike the other Earthbound immortals, infact, it might be the BEST 1. Since it forces attacks. Even that is a very big effect already, since your monster is a massive wall, and it'll do pretty good damage PER monster. So yeah, i suggest removing the last effect, what makes it invincible.

[Umbra]

The last effect is actually kinda good, but I suggest making it mandatory. (Basically, remove the "you can")

 

Also, what Geoglyph is this based on? I don't recall there being a Tower or something around the Nazca Desert.

 

EDIT: This would by no means be the best Jibakushin: Both Uru and Aslla piscu trump this card.

[Sunshine Jesse]

The Spiral would fit the RP I made him for.

Also, good idea. Effect edited.

EDIT: [spoiler=The lines for those who don't know.] or

would both fit him. But the Spiral is the mark I have in the RP.

[Umbra]

The Human is bettter known as the Astronaut or the Giant, which is taken already. But yeah, Spiral works.

[Sunshine Jesse]

Didn't know that the Human could also be the Giant. Not really well versed in the concept of the Nazca Lines.

Also, mentioning Spiral gets me in the mood to watch Gurren Lagann, lol. Anyway, thanks for the comments and stuff.

[SushiTheLegend]

Total Defense Shogun just fused with Stardust Dragon on a minor scale.

[Skyson]

Chaos-End Master says hi. <_<

 

This + Chorus of Sanctuary = OH YEAH 4000 DEF EAT IT UP.

 

That other Earthbound God that stops your opponent from even getting a Battle Phase while it's in Defense Position seems more defensive than this.

 

This looks more like.. an offensive defense. >_>

 

"hey u guys" "wat" "attack me because I said so" "oh okay" "OH JESUS THIS WALL IS STRONG" "teehee"

 

Slap some Raregold Armor on this guy and you've got one massive iron wall, since I was going to say that not forcing him to be the attack target is cool. Oh well.

 

7/10, though, it's not that bad.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Mystic Tomato DOESN'T SAY HI!

 

Only works with 1500 or lower ATK, this god is 1600

[Baroque in Paradise]

Mystic Tomato DOESN'T SAY HI!

 

Only works with 1500 or lower ATK' date=' this god is 1600

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. . .

 

Armadilloz noticed that and pointed it out a long time ago -- and so Zarkus edited his monster's ATK so that it wouldn't be subject to the Tomato's whimsy (he even mentions this in the post right after Armadilloz's own).

 

This is why it's a good idea to read the entire topic without pause and to go over parts you don't get -- it might not be on the test, but the trolls will nail you for it if you aren't careful.